Shattered Planes Archives (Seasons 4 & 5)
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Name: Gallagher Marshall Jan leaving
Age: 27,000 but he looks 27
Race: Sage
Alliance: Currently his only alliance is to himself.
Biography: He was trained by Fronds Indicium of the White Order Mages who were ones dedicated to keeping balance in magic. So for every good deed, they did a bad deed and for every bad deed they did a good deed. He rebelled against their teachings and got banished from them at 17. He seeks to eliminate them from existence. In order to do that he sought out ancient secrets of magical capability and learning them he decided to wipe out the White Order Mages completely. Then at age 30, he began his training in sword play and then he discovered the existence of Hikaru. He viewed Hikaru as a threat to magic and decided that in order to preserve it she must die. At age 2500 he decided it was time he cut a deal with someone with enough power to grant him the might required to defeat Hikaru. Unlike Hikaru he has never visited hell, but he is eternally alive because of the opposite. He needs neither genesis magic nor Phoenix magic to combat Hikaru. Instead of using Genesis or Phoenix or even Revelation he uses a combination of his own abilities in magic + the ability to siphon off magic from others for his own use. He doesn’t use that power against Hikaru or K2323 however. He has learned how to defeat Hikaru and kai and k2323 by studying them for centuries. He has been around as long as they have and studied their every technique, learning how to combat it for the war he knows will soon come. He knows they care for each other and plans to use that to kill all three of them so he will rule one day unchallenged. Once he used his swords to make a spell that would keep him alive for a very long time so he could see to the defeat of both Hikaru and the 2323 family in addition to that of the Anrufe and to that end he has been practicing hard.
Weapons: Bone Katana with runes on it. This sword as well. http://www.angelsword.com/photos/buccaneer_katana/Buc_Katana_P7.jpg It's name is Illuminus and it is totally resistant to any form of dark magic or corruption magic. It is also totally resistant to it's magic.
Equipment:
Magic Level: 5 in regular. 6 in Events.
Force Level: 0 *Later 3 (Will not be used however)
Appearance: He usually wears a black leather outfit with metal spikes on it and seemes very punk. About 5â€3, is blind in one eye but when he uses it you experience your worst fear, his hands are black due to being burnt and he usually wears a cloak over his garments. If he looks at you with a blue eye everything is fine, but if he looks at you with his grey eye run.
*will add image eventually
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Approved.
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Is 1 approval all needed?
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Is 1 approval all needed?
Two.
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How many characters do you currently have, Hawkeye?
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0 since all are dead.
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5.5? I don't know about 5.5. You shouldn't put it in decimal form. Because, I don't know if I should treat it as a 5, or a 6. Also, the immortality thing shouldn't be 100%, if you are thinking it is.
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He is immortal in the fact he has lived a very long time and will continue to do so until he is killed. It is a 5, but sometimes his attacks are stronger than a five.
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Meh. Keep it at a 5. Immortal means you can't die.
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He can be killed, but he will live until he is. He also has done enough good in his life to outweigh the bad.
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That's godmodding, as he would be able to destroy his swords, having nothing being able to destroy him.
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That's godmodding, as he would be able to destroy his swords, having nothing being able to destroy him.
On this game, we treat (and have always treated) immortality as not that you can't be killed but that you live until you're dead.
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Yes. He lives until someone kills him and he has already lived a ripe old age.
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And you say the only way to kill him are the swords, which is godmodding.
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Happy? He is fixed.
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Final Approval needed.
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I approve.
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Just don't forget to put the appearance picture up.
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Name: Gallagher Marshall Jan leaving
Age: 27,000 but he looks 27
Race: Sage
Alliance: Currently his only alliance is to himself.
Biography: He was trained by Fronds Indicium of the White Order Mages who were ones dedicated to keeping balance in magic. So for every good deed, they did a bad deed and for every bad deed they did a good deed. He rebelled against their teachings and got banished from them at 17. He seeks to eliminate them from existence. In order to do that he sought out ancient secrets of magical capability and learning them he decided to wipe out the White Order Mages completely. Then at age 30, he began his training in sword play and then he discovered the existence of Hikaru. He viewed Hikaru as a threat to magic and decided that in order to preserve it she must die. At age 2500 he decided it was time he cut a deal with someone with enough power to grant him the might required to defeat Hikaru. Unlike Hikaru he has never visited hell, but he is eternally alive because of the opposite. He needs neither genesis magic nor Phoenix magic to combat Hikaru. Instead of using Genesis or Phoenix or even Revelation he uses a combination of his own abilities in magic + the ability to siphon off magic from others for his own use. He doesn’t use that power against Hikaru or K2323 however. He has learned how to defeat Hikaru and kai and k2323 by studying them for centuries. He has been around as long as they have and studied their every technique, learning how to combat it for the war he knows will soon come. He knows they care for each other and plans to use that to kill all three of them so he will rule one day unchallenged. Once he used his swords to make a spell that would keep him alive for a very long time so he could see to the defeat of both Hikaru and the 2323 family in addition to that of the Anrufe and to that end he has been practicing hard. Currently he has manipulated the military of the united states to allow him to stay there for now.
Weapons: Bone Katana with runes on it. This sword as well. http://www.angelsword.com/photos/buccaneer_katana/Buc_Katana_P7.jpg It's name is Illuminus and it is totally resistant to any form of dark magic or corruption magic. It is also totally resistant to it's magic.
Equipment:
Magic Level: 5 in regular. 6 in Events.
Force Level: 0 *Later 3 (Will not be used however)
Personality: He is usually calm outside battle unless he has been frustrated a lot during the day which in some cases can’t be avoided. He is able to corrupt people and that is part of his personality. In addition he is a bit lusty after Women. He is also cold most of the time because he bottles up his emotions a lot but sometimes his emotions explode after causing him to go into a vicious rage. He will attack everything in sight. He is also calm and lucid outside of battle normally. He is also very manipulative in that he is good at diplomacy which requires manipulative skill.
Appearance: http://media.photobucket.com/image/anime%20mage/goldn_scales/Anime/Mage-2.jpg?o=3 His normal appearance is the one in the picture.
Battle : http://media.photobucket.com/image/anime%20mage/dermafrost/my%20anime/mage-6.gif?o=57
Added in his personality and appearances.
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Approved.
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Approved.
I don't approve.
The magic level is too high for this one. Lower it to 5 completely, maybe even 4.
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Magic Level: 5 in regular, 5 and a half in events. (TO give him a fighting chance against Genesis or Phoenix Level Magic Users.)
Force Level: 0
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If you're not going to use it, why have it?
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Simply put. If a Jedi or Sith senses t he force in you would they be more likely to attack you or less likely to?
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Probably treat you no different.
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Magic Level: 5 in regular. 5.5 in events and in special occasions 5.7 (Rarely will this occur and only during long lasting fights with magic users that drag on and on and on)
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Approved.
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No decimals. I don't know if I should treat them as a lvl 5 or 6. No. It has to be either 5 or 6.
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Magic Normally would be level 5
In Events 5 1/2
In Special or Dire Circumstances
5 3/4
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Name: Avidan Lauritz Yankel Blade
Age: He is 21,000 but appears to actually be 21 years old.
Race: Sage
Alliance: Legacy Empire
Biography:
He like Gallaghar was raised up by the White Mages and taught to control his power but unlike Gallaghar he discovered one of their secrets, a middle between both Genesis and Revelation Magic. When he unlocked this he stopped being loyal to them and his personality as a Kind and Benevolent person surfaced but also as a hard and tough person.
He learned forbidden magic from their archives for many decades until he was expelled from their order for a mutiny. His magic was then sealed by them in hopes he would never again fight.
He easily ruptured the seal on his power and then set out on his quest to find Gallaghar, one of the few mages of high enough power to be his master in the ways of magic. Once he found Gallaghar he was forced to swear a version of the bond that would not kill him as Gallaghar had plans for Avidan and is grooming him to be the next leader of the Legacy Empire in case anything should happen to him.
He then learned about Gallaghar and sort of developed a personality similar to Gallaghar’s except he isn’t angry and he can manipulate people easier due to his benevolent and kind nature winning them over without a fight is easy for him. He studied how to fight with an Axe for many years and then perfected it into moves he could do subconsciously while using magic.
After those years of training he made a journey to Hell and rescued a Star from hell enabling for the obtaining of Star Magic in addition to the Negion Magic he wields. Once he learned all the secrets he could from that Star, he then undid the control he had over the soul of the Star enabling that star to live life as he chose and to do as he pleased. Now Avidan seeks to destroy the anrufe if they should even lay one finger on his master and to that end is one of Gallaghar’s finest generals.
Weapons: Hatchet, Pole Axe. Bone Axe. Scythe. All of these weapons have runes of magic on them making them resistant to particular types of magic and allowing them to control other types of magic. The hatchet controls the nature element of magic such as the Earth, the Pole Axe controls the wind, the bone Axe the dead and the Scythe can control Corruption Magic.
Equipment: Sage Rifle
Magic Level: 5 in Normal, 5 ½ in events.
Force Level: 0 but 50% resistant.
Appearance: http://hellcorpceo.deviantart.com/art/Sage-44810876 guy in pic.
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Hawk... No fractions either, but meh.
Well, it depends if Hell lets you get a Star.
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That will occur later in his history. I want him approved though since he wields Negion.
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No. Then, if you fail, then the character shouldn't be approved in the first place.
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Name: Avidan Lauritz Yankel Blade
Age: He is 21,000 but appears to actually be 21 years old.
Race: Sage
Alliance: Legacy Empire
Biography:
He like Gallaghar was raised up by the White Mages and taught to control his power but unlike Gallaghar he discovered one of their secrets, a middle between both Genesis and Revelation Magic. When he unlocked this he stopped being loyal to them and his personality as a Kind and Benevolent person surfaced but also as a hard and tough person.
He learned forbidden magic from their archives for many decades until he was expelled from their order for a mutiny. His magic was then sealed by them in hopes he would never again fight.
He easily ruptured the seal on his power and then set out on his quest to find Gallaghar, one of the few mages of high enough power to be his master in the ways of magic. Once he found Gallaghar he was forced to swear a version of the bond that would not kill him as Gallaghar had plans for Avidan and is grooming him to be the next leader of the Legacy Empire in case anything should happen to him.
He then learned about Gallaghar and sort of developed a personality similar to Gallaghar’s except he isn’t angry and he can manipulate people easier due to his benevolent and kind nature winning them over without a fight is easy for him. He studied how to fight with an Axe for many years and then perfected it into moves he could do subconsciously while using magic.
Now Avidan seeks to destroy the anrufe if they should even lay one finger on his master and to that end is one of Gallaghar’s finest generals. In order to facilitate his goal of mopping the floor with the skulls of the Anrufe however Avidan has been forced to take Drastic Measures by unlocking secrets of magic the universe was supposed to have lost and forgotten forever.
Weapons: Hatchet, Pole Axe. Bone Axe. Scythe. All of these weapons have runes of magic on them making them resistant to particular types of magic and allowing them to control other types of magic. The hatchet controls the nature element of magic such as the Earth, the Pole Axe controls the wind, the bone Axe the dead and the Scythe can control Corruption Magic.
Equipment: Sage Rifle
Magic Level: 5 in Normal, 5 ½ in events.
Force Level: 0 but 50% resistant.
Appearance: http://hellcorpceo.deviantart.com/art/Sage-44810876 guy in pic.
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Corruption magic, forbidden magic, etc.. If your character lives after all that they are very, very evil.
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He isn't evil. He just allowed himself to create another personality to handle it. A Darker more Sinester one that uses the corrupt magic while his lighter, more benevolent one doesn't.
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Name: Avidan Lauritz Yankel Blade
Age: He is 21,000 but appears to actually be 21 years old.
Race: Sage
Alliance: Legacy Empire
Biography:
He like Gallaghar was raised up by the White Mages and taught to control his power but unlike Gallaghar he discovered one of their secrets, a middle between both Genesis and Revelation Magic. When he unlocked this he stopped being loyal to them and his personality as a Kind and Benevolent person surfaced but also as a hard and tough person.
He learned forbidden magic from their archives for many decades until he was expelled from their order for a mutiny. His magic was then sealed by them in hopes he would never again fight.
He easily ruptured the seal on his power and then set out on his quest to find Gallaghar, one of the few mages of high enough power to be his master in the ways of magic. Once he found Gallaghar he was forced to swear a version of the bond that would not kill him as Gallaghar had plans for Avidan and is grooming him to be the next leader of the Legacy Empire in case anything should happen to him.
He then learned about Gallaghar and sort of developed a personality similar to Gallaghar’s except he isn’t angry and he can manipulate people easier due to his benevolent and kind nature winning them over without a fight is easy for him. He studied how to fight with an Axe for many years and then perfected it into moves he could do subconsciously while using magic.
Now Avidan seeks to destroy the anrufe if they should even lay one finger on his master and to that end is one of Gallaghar’s finest generals. In order to facilitate his goal of mopping the floor with the skulls of the Anrufe however Avidan has been forced to take Drastic Measures by unlocking secrets of magic the universe was supposed to have lost and forgotten forever.
He has MPD, Multiple Personality Disorder.
When he wields the bone Axe or scythe, he is evil, corrupt and malicious and hateful and wants to extinguish all life around himself. When he wields the hatchet or pole axe he is normal and benevolent and kind and caring. He however hates to fight when in this form so he has developed a 3rd more dominant personality that is sort of half and half of his original personalities if you get what I mean.
Weapons: Hatchet, Pole Axe. Bone Axe. Scythe. All of these weapons have runes of magic on them making them resistant to particular types of magic and allowing them to control other types of magic. The hatchet controls the nature element of magic such as the Earth, the Pole Axe controls the wind, the bone Axe the dead and the Scythe can control Corruption Magic.
Equipment: Sage Rifle
Magic Level: 5 in Normal, 5 ½ in events.
Force Level: 0 but 50% resistant.
Appearance: http://hellcorpceo.deviantart.com/art/Sage-44810876 guy in pic.
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I'm talking about his physical body.
But approved.
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Approved.
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Please remember that Orpheus is not a team leader and thus does not have the authority to approve characters, empires, ship, or technology requests.
You would do well to remember that, Orph.
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He keeps asking me to.
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That is irrelevant. Only the Team Leaders (Me, Gaserlake, K2323, and Blackcat) have the authority to approve requests.
Regarding this request, what is Negion?
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When did I approve anything?
And why the hell is BK a teamleader? He hasn't been on GE since like June.
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Imagine a middle ground between both Genesis Magic and Revelation Magic. In effect that is Negion.
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No.
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There is a magic between Genesis and Revelation but of equal danger to wielders of either and it is known by a select few. Avidan is the only one currently who know said ability.
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No.
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K2323 and I discussed it and it is allowed.
Negion : A Type of Magic that is the middle ground essentially between Genesis Magic and Revelation magic. Few people wield this secret form and fewer still can control it's power. Avidan is one of the few who is a master at using Negion.
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How is it the middleground between Revelation, when Revelation has yet to be introduced cept for once? It hasn't been used to study, you'd have to get a hold of the spell book. And Hikaru keeps that everywhere with her.
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Idea.
Negion could be a type of middle magic between Revelation and Genesis however it would be unknown that it is the middle magic in between them thus making it impossible for people to find out until later. Avidan will be one of the few wielders of it.
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You'd have to be a descendant of the Genesis Kingdom.
So no.
[22:51] elkune15: So, unapprove it.
[22:51] Iamawhale2323: I will, working on the logo right now
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Negion :
This magic was used by a Kingdom at war with both the Genesis and Phoenix Kingdoms and it was said that this magic could overpower both a Genesis Sage and a Phoenix Sage quite easily. Unfortunately all but 1 family were killed off when the Kingdom was destroyed and now the last user of it is Avidan.
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Lrnurhistory
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He's allowed to insert into the history though...That's part of RPing. Unless the GM says he can't.....and that would be... K2323?
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But since when were the Phoenix and the Genesis ever nice to each other?
[23:57] blackhawkfury221: Negion :
This magic was used by a Kingdom at war with both the Genesis and Phoenix Kingdoms and it was said that this magic could overpower both a Genesis Sage and a Phoenix Sage quite easily. Unfortunately all but 1 family were killed off when the Kingdom was destroyed and now the last user of it is Avidan.
[23:57] Iamawhale2323: lrnurhistory
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They weren't. That kingdom was at war with both.
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The two magics would not have been mixed, and thus a middleground would not have been created, if they were both at war.
Not only that, but because you're using both K2323's Genesis and Hikaru's Revelations, you'd need specific permission from both of them.
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*Sigh* You guys really love taking the fun out of this don't you?
Negion :
There were rumours of mages who practiced a new form of magic and it was nicknamed Negion for no one but the mages knew of this particular form of magic. It was a closely guarded secret until the war between the Genesis and Phoenix Kingdoms hit their town and then the mages had to evacuate. They took their secret Negion with them and hid it all save the amount required to make it pass onto one youth in the future and then they wove spells to prevent any besides the one supposed to wield it in the future from wielding it unless he opts to train the persons he wants to wield it. This magic on it’s own is the equal of both Genesis and Phoenix Magic in terms of offensive and defensive capabilities. However those who use it sometimes go insane but not always. It allows for a more direct manipulation of energy than that achieved by Genesis or Phoenix Magic or any other magic type known by the mages of that time. Those who use this can be sensed by even those who lack magic such as the Aralangs or humans without the use of technology.
Abilities granted
Pure Sight This Ability makes Illusions fail.
Healing Light - This heals any severe wounds but passes over minor wounds.
Access : This allows you to intrude on the minds of those magically gifted and see their desires, fears, wants..etc.
Purification This technique sends a great golden orb of magic towards your opponet and if it collides and they have other magic besides Negion, this Orb envelops them and begins to change their magic to that of negion.
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'or any other magic type'
Not possible, considering Loreian magic is entirely composed of the direct manipulation of energy.
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ANd fixed.
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The two magics would not have been mixed, and thus a middleground would not have been created, if they were both at war.
Not only that, but because you're using both K2323's Genesis and Hikaru's Revelations, you'd need specific permission from both of them.
He'd actually need all three aprovals. Mine, k2's, and Hikarus. Because the genesis is partially owned by both me, and k2.
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Negion :
There were rumours of mages who practiced a new form of magic and it was nicknamed Negion for no one but the mages knew of this particular form of magic. It was a closely guarded secret until the war between the Genesis and Phoenix Kingdoms hit their town and then the mages had to evacuate. They took their secret Negion with them and hid it all save the amount required to make it pass onto one youth in the future and then they wove spells to prevent any besides the one supposed to wield it in the future from wielding it unless he opts to train the persons he wants to wield it. This magic on it’s own is the equal of both Genesis and Phoenix Magic in terms of offensive and defensive capabilities. However those who use it sometimes go insane but not always. It allows for a more direct manipulation of energy than that achieved by Genesis or Phoenix Magic or any other magic type known by the mages of that time. Those who use this can be sensed by even those who lack magic such as the Aralangs or humans without the use of technology.
Abilities granted
Pure Sight This Ability makes Illusions fail.
Healing Light - This heals any severe wounds but passes over minor wounds.
Access : This allows you to intrude on the minds of those magically gifted and see their desires, fears, wants..etc.
Purification This technique sends a great golden orb of magic towards your opponet and if it collides and they have other magic besides Negion, this Orb envelops them and begins to change their magic to that of negion.
K2323
busy I will approve on forum
First Approval for Avidan and Negion.
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K2323's Genesis
And Kai's. It's a joint-thing, he and I. Hawk would need both of our permission and Hikaru's.
Anyway, I approve as long as it is not a middleground but naturally has the skills it has.
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Ok.
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Phoenix magic isn't a magic. It's innate abilities.
Also, something I'm seeing in a lot of your magic requests.
They took their secret Negion with them and hid it all save the amount required to make it pass onto one youth in the future and then they wove spells to prevent any besides the one supposed to wield it in the future from wielding it unless he opts to train the persons he wants to wield it.
How?
What type of spells? Did they seal it to only a certain DNA/race? Did they lock it away till only a person of a certain bloodline could see it or know it? Is it innate inside only this one person, by passing through again, a bloodline?
Give some detail here Hawkeye. Magic can't be explained, yes. But try to give some insight on how some of the spells work. Otherwise anyone can take advantage of that easily.
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Negion :
There were rumours of mages who practiced a new form of magic and it was nicknamed Negion for no one but the mages knew of this particular form of magic. It was a closely guarded secret until the war between the Genesis and Phoenix Kingdoms hit their town and then the mages had to evacuate. They took their secret Negion with them and hid it all save the amount required to make it pass onto one youth in the future and then they wove spells to prevent any besides the one supposed to wield it in the future from wielding it unless he opts to train the persons he wants to wield it. This magic on it’s own is the equal of both Genesis and Phoenix Magic in terms of offensive and defensive capabilities. However those who use it sometimes go insane but not always. It allows for a more direct manipulation of energy than that achieved by Genesis or Phoenix Magic or any other magic type known by the mages of that time. Those who use this can be sensed by even those who lack magic such as the Aralangs or humans without the use of technology.
Abilities granted
Pure Sight This Ability makes Illusions fail.
Healing Light - This heals any severe wounds but passes over minor wounds.
Access : This allows you to intrude on the minds of those magically gifted and see their desires, fears, wants..etc.
Purification This technique sends a great golden orb of magic towards your opponet and if it collides and they have other magic besides Negion, this Orb envelops them and begins to change their magic to that of negion.
Yes. In addition to being innate in the bloodline however they have woven a sealing type of magic on the Negion Magic. It prevents any besides those who have been given permission by the original wielder Avidan from wielding the magic. A Ritual. It will copy the power he wields of Negion into the person. However if the person turns it on him, the person loses the power he has gained in addition to all of his magic. Once the power is given, there is a YinYang symbol on the person's hand.
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Yes. In addition to being innate in the bloodline however they have woven a sealing type of magic on the Negion Magic. It prevents any besides those who have been given permission by the original wielder Avidan from wielding the magic.
Bloodline works. But how would this person give their permission? Just commanding it unless it's words of power or a spell doesn't make sense. Ritual, contract, seal, etc?
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A Ritual. It will copy the power he wields of Negion into the person. However if the person turns it on him, the person loses the power he has gained in addition to all of his magic. Once the power is given, there is a YinYang symbol on the person's hand.
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Alright. Add that into your description to explain further, and then I see nothing wrong with it.
Edit:Take off the fact that it can't be taken. Bloodline and Ritual are fine. But anyone can have their powers stolen or used. Therefore to have yours not useable is godmodding.
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And by the ritual she means the copying to another person, not the part about turning on him and losing all magic power.
That's just gay.
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Negion :
There were rumours of mages who practiced a new form of magic and it was nicknamed Negion for no one but the mages knew of this particular form of magic. It was a closely guarded secret until the war between the Genesis and Phoenix Kingdoms hit their town and then the mages had to evacuate. They took their secret Negion with them and hid it all save the amount required to make it pass onto one youth in the future and then they wove spells to prevent any besides the one supposed to wield it in the future from wielding it unless he opts to train the persons he wants to wield it.This magic on it’s own is the equal of both Genesis and Phoenix Magic in terms of offensive and defensive capabilities. However those who use it sometimes go insane but not always. It allows for a more direct manipulation of energy than that achieved by Genesis or Phoenix Magic or any other magic type known by the mages of that time. Those who use this can be sensed by even those who lack magic such as the Aralangs or humans without the use of technology. It is hard to steal or copy this magic for your own use. In addition it can only be passed by a bloodline or by a ritual. There is another unique thing of this magic. It is resistant to other types of energy manipulation as other types of magic are cancelled out.
Abilities granted
Pure Sight : This Ability makes Illusions fail.
Healing Light: - This heals any severe wounds but passes over minor wounds.
Access : This allows you to intrude on the minds of those magically gifted and see their desires, fears, wants..etc.
Purification :This technique sends a great golden orb of magic towards your opponet and if it collides and they have other magic besides Negion, this Orb envelops them and begins to change their magic to that of negion.
Light Travel
They can turn into light and travel through the air ways along the ground easily.
Immunity
Memory changing or mind altering types of magic donot affect users of Negion.