Shattered Planes Archives (Seasons 4 & 5)
The Board => Archive => Void => Topic started by: Zero on December 28, 2009, 07:21:10 PM
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Magical Energy Gathering and Transmitting Device. MEGTD.
This device gathers in the magical energy abundant on a world and then transmits it to the recieving device which would in this case be a massive tower on New Dragon Moon. The tower in turn transmits the magic to the sages who are running low on power thus allowing them to continue fighting longer.
Crescent Arch Blades
These blades are enchanted with an ancient form of magic making the immune to physical damage but magical attacks are highly effective against them.
Sage Rifles
Based on the design of rifles from earth except the sage rifles fire bullets of energy instead of bullets of metal.
Sage Pistols
These fire bullets of energy instead of bullets of metal.
Sage Rocket launchers
These fire rockets of energy instead of rockets made out of metallic substances.
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How much longer can the Sages fight, and how many?
It's godmodding to have them immune to physical damage. I don't think magic can make it physically damaged, only teleported and such.
For Sage Rifles, tell me about the energy. Where does it come from?
Same with Sage Pistols.
Same thing with Sage Rocket launchers.
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They can fight for about 3 hours longer than they normally could.
Cresent Arch Blades
They can be destroyed if they are exploded from the inside which is a feat that magic is required to do.
As for the Sage Guns
The energy actually comes from the air, the sun, water, plants. Anything at hand even. Some Sages even use themselves to fuel the weapons.
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How many Sages can it help for 3 hours?
How are they only be able to get destroyed that way?
Sage Guns approved.
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There are so many spells woven on the Arch Blades it would take you months unless you used an AM field to weaken them slightly and then tore the spells off of the blades somehow but that is highly unlikely to occur.
It can help up to 7200 sages for 3 hours.
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Where does the MEGTD get the magic from?
An AM field would be able to remove all of the spells on it, if strong enough, and a decent AM field would be able to do that.
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It gathers it from nature.
Nova Bomb
This bomb contains a large amount of energy from a pocket dimension and when it exploded, it opens a hole to that pocket dimension and begins to suck in everything on the planet that is non organic.
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So, it's a bomb that opens a hole to a vacuum dimension?
lulz
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Yeah. And you have earned the 'privelege' of being it's first victim.
Mass Reduction Bomb
This bomb can be dropped into a black hole and is unaffected by Time Dilation. What it does is reduce the mass of the black hole enough causing the black hole to unfold inwards on itself effectively destroying the black hole and anyone inside there. In addition these bombs have Radiation shielding. It also has a substance in it that prevents it from being simply tossed back at the sender by any means of magic or by a worm hole.
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MEGTD approved.
I suppose the Arch Blades aren't approved.
Also, a nova does not create something like that, but anyway, how much does it suck?
Uh, you can't avoid Time Dilation. Walking would give you Time Dilation, but only slightly.
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What I mean by avoiding Time Dilation is that the massive effect of it in the black hole would be rendered useless. Thus allowing the bomb to hit the intended target which is in this case, the library.
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The Nova Bomb would suck up about 1/4 of everything on the planet that isn't organic in nature. Meaning all the weapons of the soldiers nearby, their armor, their vehicles and all of that would be asorbed into it. 4 of these could render an entire army powerless.
B.Gloves
These gloves are a relic of the times long past that Gallaghar has found and had mass produced. They fire some sort of weird energy discharge that infects people with a magical cancer. The cancer can't be cured by their magic but only by that of another and then only if the original set of gloves used to blast them are destroyed during the curing proccess.
Defoliation Bomb
This bomb contains concentrated Herbicides, acids and poisons designed to kill weeds. It is rarely used by the legacy empire. However several thousand of these exist.
Defoliation Grenades
These grenades explode releasing a mist of acid that eats through plants.
Defoliation Guns
These fire globs of concentrated herbicides mixed with acids and poisons designed to kill weeds.
Clipper Laser Swords
These laser swords are like Machetes and used for chopping at trees.
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Doesn't matter. You can't avoid Time Dialation.
Soldiers are organic, so they can't be sucked in. Learn what organic means. Approved.
B. Gloves approved.
Defoliation bomb approved.
Defoliation grenades approved.
Defoliation guns approved.
Laser swords approved.
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For the B.Gloves, not approved.
Ahem, but how can it be a magic cancer? Cancer is caused by the cells, everyone has Cancer cells, they're just activated from certain things, and that's what causes Cancer. Or something such.
You can't "give someone Cancer." It's not contagious, it's not caught, it's not given. It's dormant in a person unless specific requirements are met. We don't know the cause of Cancer, but we do know that much.
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B.Gloves
These gloves are a relic of the times long past that Gallaghar has found and had mass produced. They fire some sort of weird energy discharge that infects people with a magical virus. The virus in turns eats away at whoever it hits until their magic is completely removed. It is very hard to remove the virus without the original set of gloves used to do the blasting of the person. However such a task is made easier if your magic exceeds that of the person even by 1 level or even half a level. Ancient power was used in the creation of the gloves, specifically Negion and so Negion users are impervious to said weapon.
THere it is.
Magical Aural Amplifier
The M.A.A. boosts magic 10 fold.
Plasma Stave
These spears fire Plasma Blasts. Magical in Origin.
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It can't be a "Magical Cancer," though. That's NOT how Cancer is done.
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Lrnurcancer
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Fixed it.
B.Gloves
These gloves are a relic of the times long past that Gallaghar has found and had mass produced. They fire some sort of weird energy discharge that infects people with a magical virus. The virus in turns eats away at whoever it hits until their magic is completely removed. It is very hard to remove the virus without the original set of gloves used to do the blasting of the person. However such a task is made easier if your magic exceeds that of the person even by 1 level or even half a level. Ancient power was used in the creation of the gloves, specifically Negion and so Negion users are impervious to said weapon.
But here it is again.
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1. How did you put a virus in gloves? Because right now I'm picturing spider-man style the way you explained it. Explain better.
2. How does the virus eat their magic? It has to have a way, if you're going to do Medical things, then explain to me how it medically works.
3. The Negion IMMUNITY (LEARN WHAT TO CALL THINGS,) What causes it to give them this immunity?
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Cancer is cells dividing uncontrollably. I think it is caused by DNA mutation, where the reproduction can't be controlled. Magic can do the thing that causes cancer.
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Cancer is cells dividing uncontrollably. I think it is caused by DNA mutation, where the reproduction can't be controlled. Magic can do the thing that causes cancer.
This is Hawkeye. Do you think he knows how to explain that right when using it? When he goes to use it, it'll be soo godmoddish.
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B. Gloves
These gloves discharge a pulse of energy that causes the body to actually eat it’s own magic. The pulse of energy is made from a dark form of Negion Magic. It is unfortunately unable to effect the Negion users as the magic it is made from it too similar to their magic thus causing it to be ineffective. Once this infects the only cure is a transference of untainted magic. If your magic is tainted by this your body will totally eat your own magic completely.
Magical Amplification Fortress
http://www.albanyinstitute.org/Collections/Painting/images/sage.jpg
This fortress has a quality that amplifies magic. None know what this quality is but the fortress is hidden away on Novasia. It will soon be discovered by Gallaghar and put to use by him.
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B.Gloves
I'm still not sure whether to approve them or not....your medical knowledge doesn't seem to match being able to use those right...
Defoliation Bomb, Defoliation Grenades, Defoliation Guns.
Not approved. Go into more detail on what types of acid. It doesn't hurt to research you know. That's what the rest of us do. Just saying acid could make a person think cyanide.
Clipper Laser Swords
Uh if they're machetes, give a description of how they look. You say sword...but I picture a machete type laser, which IS NOT a sword.
Magical Aural Amplifier
Not approved. Give more information. "Boosting magic 10 fold," does not really tell us how it does it.
Plasma Stave
Explain the plasma blasts, what type, how they appear/work when used.
And a stave is like a staff, not a spear......do you even know your weapons?
Magical Amplification Fortress
No.....For a fortress to amplify magic it would have to set over something to cause amplification, a vortex, etc. Something to amplify powers. Again, RESEARCH.
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Uggh.
Defoliants
These are filled to the brim with herbicide, Napalm and a variety of toxins that kill plant life including specialized acids and some corruption magic has also been added to these bombs/grenades to make them corrupt the plant life.
Clipper Laser Machetes
These machetes have been modified to allow them to be 'charged' with energy thus enabling them to slice through plant life like a hot knife. Usually Phoenix Crystals are implanted inside these to allow them to do so but since those crystals are getting rarer, technology has been used instead.
Magical Adapter
You attach this to a soul of a person and you gain control of their magic in that you can use their magic but so can they, but yours will be stronger than theirs.
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Defoliants
About time. Take out the corruption magic, and then it'll be approved.
Clipper Laser Machetes
WTF? Phoenix crystal? And that is? NO. Take out the crystal, make it just tech, then approved.
Magical Adapter
You'd have to get a persons soul to attach it. You can only get a soul through forcefully stealing with magic (which you don't know how,) or if they contract it. Not approved, never approved.
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Defoliants
These are filled to the brim with herbicide, Napalm and a variety of toxins that kill plant life including specialized acids and a unique virus has been added that erodes Sentience.
Clipper Laser Machetes
These machetes have been modified to allow them to be 'charged' with energy thus enabling them to slice through plant life like a hot knife. Crystal lenses are used to focus the charging of the energy.
Aura Drain Disc
You put this on a person and it takes all magic in their body and then seals it behind an impenetrable barrier that they can't access.
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Defoliants
God dammit Hawkeye. Why do you take something out and add something stupid? I said it'd be approved if you took out the corruption, so you add a virus? JUST TAKE WHAT IT WAS OUT, DON'T ADD.
Not approved till you leave it at everything but the virus.
Clipper Laser Machetes
Approved.
Aura Drain Disc
Not approved. Sounds godmoddish.
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Defoliants
These are filled to the brim with herbicide, Napalm and a variety of toxins that kill plant life including specialized acids designed to totally devour all plant life on the planet.
Grubs
These are energy draining slugs that burrow into a planet and eat away all sentience there.
Clipper Laser Machetes
These machetes have been modified to allow them to be 'charged' with energy thus enabling them to slice through plant life like a hot knife. Focusing lenses made out of diamond are required to make these things function correctly.
Aural Drain Disc
(No this isn't godmodding)
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MAA not approved, too powerful to do 10-fold.
How much energy can a grub do?
ADD is godmodding. You can take someone's magic, and make the barrier impenetrable? No.
CLM approved.
MA not approved. It's like ADD, except you use said magic.
The G. Gloves seem godmodding to me, as it's like a way of ADD, except you destroy it.
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CLM Approved.
Defoliants finally approved.
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You do know Sentience is just a word to describe higher thinking? You can't eat higher thinking unless you're eating their brain.
Sounds like Hawk could use some high thinking powa.
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I meant as regards to what Gaserlake did with Novasia. It would eat the planet's ability to do much besides exist.
Noverian Class Battle Cruiser
http://media.photobucket.com/image/space%20ship/shadow12k/space.jpg?o=19
This has 7 turbo lasers and 2 mass missile launchers on it in addition to a hyperdrive. It looks exactly like the picture.
Konoro
http://media.photobucket.com/image/space%20ship/mutinchops/_ship3c.jpg?o=14
This ship boasts only one weapon, a huge turbo laser wired through the ship on the top of it as a cannon. It also has hidden torpedo tubes in addition to a hyperdrive.
Xelsion Cargo Ship
http://media.photobucket.com/image/space%20ship/Josyroth/space/Space20Fiction20Andromeda20Spaceshi.jpg?o=18
This is your ordinary Cargo Ship. No Weapons. Light Armor.
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For the ships you need to mention the ship class in the tech request, so we know how big they are.
Planets themselves are simply homes for various species of flora, fauna, bacteria, fungi, and viruses. All a planet does is exist, while things live on it. Even weather and climates are done through other factors, possibly the only factors the planet itself contributes is the strength of its gravitational and EM fields, and those are simply properties of the materials used in the planet itself that add up.
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What I planned to do with the grubs was eat away Novasia's sentience or whatever part of it Gaserlake had used against me.
Noverian Class Fighter
http://media.photobucket.com/image/space%20ship/shadow12k/space.jpg?o=19
This has 7 turbo lasers and 2 mass missile launchers on it in addition to a hyperdrive. It looks exactly like the picture. Fighter.
Konoro
http://media.photobucket.com/image/space%20ship/mutinchops/_ship3c.jpg?o=14
This ship boasts only one weapon, a huge turbo laser wired through the ship on the top of it as a cannon. It also has hidden torpedo tubes in addition to a hyperdrive. Capitol Ship.
Xelsion Cargo Ship
http://media.photobucket.com/image/space%20ship/Josyroth/space/Space20Fiction20Andromeda20Spaceshi.jpg?o=18
This is your ordinary Cargo Ship. No Weapons. Light Armor. Frigate Ship Class.
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The classes are Fighter, Corvette, Frigate, Capital, Super Capital, and Titan. There is no Battle Cruiser or Cargo Ship class.
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There. It is fixed.
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Yet again, the Cargo Ship class does not exist.
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Scorpion Tank
This tank has a laser cannon mounted on the back of it. It is used for heavy artillery attacks and is one of the weapons of the Legacy Empire.
http://abeowitz.deviantart.com/art/SteamPunk-Scorpion-Tank-82212111
Ignore the girl in the picture.
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Konoro, Xelsion, and Noverian approved, need more details on the tank. What weapons are on it? How armored is it? How fast is it? How many people can it hold?
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The Scorpion Tank can go 30 mph. It is heavily armored and it is armed with plasma beam style weaponry on the tail of it in addition to the head lights which are actually disguised turbo laser batteries. It can fit 17 people comfortably and 34 if they all cram together.
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How many guns? And that's a lot of people cramming in where 17 will fit comfortably. I'd say maybe 24, where 17 would fit.
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24 then limit for the ship.
3 guns on the tail, and 6 torpedo tubes running down the tail and the on the main part there will be a Plasma Cannon, an Energy Disc Launcher and of course my favorite, A nuclear warhead. The Armor on the tank is resistant to nuclear radiation as the sages would shield from the blast. To protect from the explosion, they can teleport the Tank out of the way about 150 miles away from the explosion.
AntiMagic Technology
This encompasses AM fields, AM Guns, Am Drugs, and AM lasers, AM Collars.
This is basically technology that nullifies magic.
Magical Amplification Towers
When mages stand in these towers and put their hands in the gloves, they can link their power with that of other mages or sages and then use that power to do pretty much anything that isn't godmodding. Like for example covering the space around th e planet with a transparent dome of energy to protect it.
Carver Magical Detection and Disruption Defense system.
This is basically a large group of missile silos that blast any unauthorized magical signature that is in orbit above the planet. The missiles are the size of Rockets that can go into outerspace. It also includes laser cannons attached to a space station that blast any unauthorized magical signatures. (ORPH THAT MEANS YOU And K2 that means you)
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The nuclear radiation isn't the blast, it's the after effect. The actual explosion would kill it.
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3 guns on the tail, and 6 torpedo tubes running down the tail and the on the main part there will be a Plasma Cannon, an Energy Disc Launcher and of course my favorite, A nuclear warhead. The Armor on the tank is resistant to nuclear radiation as the sages would shield from the blast. To protect from the explosion, they can teleport the Tank out of the way about 150 miles away from the explosion.
AntiMagic Technology
This encompasses AM fields, AM Guns, Am Drugs, and AM lasers, AM Collars.
This is basically technology that nullifies magic.
Magical Amplification Towers
When mages stand in these towers and put their hands in the gloves, they can link their power with that of other mages or sages and then use that power to do pretty much anything that isn't godmodding. Like for example covering the space around th e planet with a transparent dome of energy to protect it.
Carver Magical Detection and Disruption Defense system.
This is basically a large group of missile silos that blast any unauthorized magical signature that is in orbit above the planet. The missiles are the size of Rockets that can go into outerspace. It also includes laser cannons attached to a space station that blast any unauthorized magical signatures. (ORPH THAT MEANS YOU And K2 that means you) The missiles and/or lasers are magically resistant meaning that no magic whatsoever will work on them.
Barrage Fighters
These fighters are giant flying tanks. They have only missiles and a lot of missiles but the missiles these use are lances of energy made from magic. The outside of the ship however is magically resistant.
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Nuclear warheads require large shells, which in turn require equally large storage spaces, unless the tanks can only carry one shot of the nuke each. Not only that, but having a nuke be standard on a tank sounds very unreasonable.
You need to be more detailed regarding the AM tech.
The MAT is fine, but remember that EVERY dome of energy can be destroyed after taking enough damage.
Remember, the Carver system can be thwarted just like any ship firing missiles and cannons.
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The Tanks can only carry 1 shot of the Nukes. I am merely doing that if there is anything like Sentient Trees and/or people I want to eradicate quickly.
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Bump! Xelsion and Other ship need one more approval. Carver Defense requires one more approval.
Am Tech
This Technology supresses magic and comes in many forms. Collars, Shields, Fields, and many other varieties that can be used to neutralize magic. This allows for those without the abilities of magic users to actually fight them and hope to win since without their magic they would be helpless. (Not a Request, but an Elaboration)
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Non-magic users can still fight a magic user, even if the magic user is able to use his/her magic.
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Noverian Class Fighter
http://media.photobucket.com/image/space%20ship/shadow12k/space.jpg?o=19
This has 7 turbo lasers and 2 mass missile launchers on it in addition to a hyperdrive. It looks exactly like the picture. Fighter.
Konoro
http://media.photobucket.com/image/space%20ship/mutinchops/_ship3c.jpg?o=14
This ship boasts only one weapon, a huge turbo laser wired through the ship on the top of it as a cannon. It also has hidden torpedo tubes in addition to a hyperdrive. Capitol Ship.
Xelsion Cargo Ship
http://media.photobucket.com/image/space%20ship/Josyroth/space/Space20Fiction20Andromeda20Spaceshi.jpg?o=18
This is your ordinary Cargo Ship. No Weapons. Light Armor. Frigate Ship Class.
These lack only one approval.
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It's capital, not capitol...
Approved.