Shattered Planes Archives (Seasons 4 & 5)
The Board => Archive => Void => Topic started by: Beware Ye Who Enter Here on September 07, 2010, 09:23:11 PM
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Ok, here is the place that whoever posts either reviews the poetry or quotes of another person or posts poetry him or herself.
Here is one of mine
You
You are like the golden sun, ever glowing
With inner joy, and happiness
As unique as the sun-set upon the sandy shores
More beautiful than any creature of the Earth
Your hair is like a golden ray of the sun, supple and smooth
Your eyes are piercing and as brilliant as the sea's blue depths
Your teeth as perfect and white as the beach's bleached sand
You and your fiery passion; your religious passion and devotion
And that face, that face that, when sad, urges me to make it smile
Once more And this barely scratches the surface of you
My words mean nothing, and are but words, and as such they cannot
Fairly describe you in my mind