Shattered Planes Archives (Seasons 4 & 5)
The Board => Archive => Void => Topic started by: Zero on September 09, 2010, 09:00:41 PM
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Name: Shrike
Age: 250 but appears to be 25.
Race: Cyborg, Warrior Human Race.
Alliance: Lord Montreal
Biography: When the Warrior Humans had their own world Militaria they conducted a top secret experiment. An experiment to create a being that was the perfect combination of both technological might and magical experience. Choosing a baby for this task they made the young one into a cyborg and wiped his memories clean of everything. Lord Montreal was secretly hired to train this warrior and so it continued that way for 250 years that the warrior human cyborg was taught by Lord Montreal. Eventually he pledged his loyalty to Lord Montreal. However he like all the others had to go to False Heaven and then lastly to Nap. Once on Nap he began searching for Lord Montreal again so he can resume his training.
Weapons: http://browse.deviantart.com/?q=staff&order=9&offset=384#/d1r6tii This is one of the weapons he wields, a staff capable of channeling his own power. He also has a sword that he sometimes uses.
Equipment: He has a tool kit which are for repairs to his body. Further he has a pendant he always wears that has AAM and amplification enchantments on it. He can activate either but never both. In addition he has a box with black material and strange golden runes on the box. Other than that he also has spare parts he can use to replace his limbs should they stop functioning. He also has a ring which a dozen spirits have been put in and that he has learned to tap into the energy of.
Magic Level: 4 (He will never be as strong as his mentor due to the metal covering some of his skin)
Appearance: http://fc06.deviantart.net/fs29/i/2008/121/3/6/Phoenix_Military_by_McGibs.jpg He looks like all of those. However the armor is red and gold instead of grey. The robes are black and silver instead of black and gold. The brown becomes a light blue.
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Hello no. I refuse. And I advise the rest of the staff to refuse too.
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Why not?
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UnStellar, at the least give a reason why. I dont actually see much of anything wrong...Though it could just be me.
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Approve please?
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I'm interested. Why didn't you approve, UnStellar? As much as I don't want to approve it, I don't see anything wrong with it. You know, besides the cliche and copying. We have what, like, five androids/cyborgs/robots now? They all have some interesting story. This one doesn't.
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I changed the story to be original.
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Didn't the Warrior Humans have Militaria for like... two months?