Shattered Planes Archives (Seasons 4 & 5)
The Board => Archive => Void => Topic started by: UnStellar on January 06, 2010, 09:36:27 PM
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Technology explained here: http://galacticempires.raylon.org/index.php?topic=201.0
Name: Benjamin South
Age: 23
Race: Bellicus
Alliance: Himself/Pax Empire to a degree
Biography: The Bellicus are a chaotic, destructive race who runs all off of emotion. Few exemplify this better then Benjamin. From the day he was born it was known his magic was stronger than usual, but his extra power remained dormant. He grew up more aggressive than most Bellicus boys, and his parents were worried that his anger might trigger his power. At what seemed to be the peak of his anger, it slowed down. The cure? Love.
Teenage Benjamin fell in love with Imbellis girl named Nikariam. He knew their races were enemies, yet, her inner magic soothed him and calmed his inner magic, getting him under control. As they continually arranged secret meetings, their love grew deeper and deeper as they grew older and older. When they came to marrying age, they were wed, secretly. They spent two happy years together. Although Ben’s parents didn’t know the cause, they were relieved his power would never be unleashed.
It seemed this Romeo and Juliet tale wouldn’t end in tragedy. But unfortunately, that wasn’t the case.
You see, there’s a place of high magic called Telepitus, it is a place that greatly aids your teleportation skills. It is in Imbellis territory, and Nikariam frequently used it to meet with Benjamin. However, Telepitus acted as a sort of attracting force to teleportation spells anywhere. Evidence of this is Veritas Star’s accidental landing on Pax.
I note that because, on a planet far, far away, called Earth, a group of humans had discovered an ancient spell book. It was the powerful Ex Omni teleportation book, so powerful that even those with little magic could use it. And, accidentally, they did. They landed in Telepitus in the middle of Nikariam’s secret teleportation ritual.
The humans were scared out of their wits; they were caught in a totally alien environment with what appeared to be a fairy. Nikariam, ever the compassionate girl, drew close to the terrified humans. She used her inner magic to sooth them.
However, terrified and hysterical, the blue energy flash Nikariam was charging in her hand frightened them even more. Out of sheer terror and temporary insanity, they killed her. And they didn’t do it clean. They brutally clobbered her in one, big, flurry of fists, and stomped and kicked her when she hit the floor.
When they were done with Nikariam, one of her wings had been torn off, the other had been stomped repeatedly, her ribs were shattered, along with many other limbs. Oddly, the only thing untouched was her face. The look it permanently froze into was that of pure terror.
The humans, hysterical and unbelieving of what they had done, ran away in a mob and escaped to the wilderness. Hours later, Benjamin, made a bold move and snuck into Telepitus on the Imbellis side and found his bride, dead in brutal, garish display.
To describe his emotional state would be impossible. But this was actually the emotional traumatic event that could trigger the unleashing of his inner power. And unleash it he did.
A storm tore across the entire planet of Pax. Not a serious one, mind you, but it seemed as if the whole world wept and thundered with him.
A complicated process which involved finding the energy signature that last teleported through Telepitus told Benjamin the last form to pass through was Human. After he found that out, he went out on a hunt. By tracking down the magical energy in the book one of them still carried, he found them. All of them.
His revenge was swift, painful, and merciless. He took the book from the aftermath, wiping the blood from it. He sat back, having avenged his wife. And yet, he wasn’t satisfied. No, he never would, until every single human being shared the fate of this unfortunate group of people. With this in his heart, Benjamin read the book, and used it to teleport off planet. He would get his vengeance.
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In the midst of a hard battle between Zere and Vincent, the telepitus was crumbling, ready to collapse. Benjamin was weakened by a barrier spell, and decided to use the Telepitus instead of his own ability. Unfortunately, the damage it had taken lead to unforeseeable consequences.
Weapons: Last Justice, SPLITTER gloves.
Equipment: xPod Deluxe, Ex Omni, Jakleauti
Magic Level: 5
Force Level: 0
Appearance: He stands at average height, about 5’ 10â€, he is well built. On most days, he wears Legacy Empire trooper space pants, metal spacefaring boots that he hasn’t taken off in weeks, a dingy, ill-smelling white beater under his maroon Jaklauti, and Spacefarer starglasses. His hair is a mop of dark brown that he never takes care of, and he has the usual lilac eyes and kinder like ears of his species. The sleeves of his Jakleauti are kept long to cover his illegal SPLITTER gloves, but in times of battle, one word will retract them to elbow length to easily use the gloves and to stay out his way.
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Woah, that totally fits into the planet. (That doesn't have a purpose.)
Great job and great story. Drama, violence, tragedy, excellent!
Approved.
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Thank you very much.
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Well, since Hikaru obviously approves of you using her stuff, I approve as well.
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Well, since Hikaru obviously approves of you using her stuff, I approve as well.
Of course, I asked permission before making the character. Thank you for your approval.
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Approved.
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^Read new title and description. I'm disowning, so he no longer counts to my 15 character limit.
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Would you like me to move the topic to the Adoption Center so he can still be played?
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No. I want to keep him around but I've got big plans and I'm not going to be use him, so I'm just going to say the malfunctioning telepitus sent him though time.
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Apparently, now he's dead. Change the title accordingly, please.