Shattered Planes Archives (Seasons 4 & 5)
The Board => Archive => Void => Topic started by: Maya-kohai on January 12, 2010, 07:19:32 PM
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(This is based on an essay I wrote, so it's part-fact)
The cold air registers, and her eyes snap open. She's not greeted by a familiar face, or the soft aura of light peeking through her bedroom window. Instead, artificial tungsten invades her vision, along with various monitors and lights from machines.
She attempts to speak, but can't. Her words are parried by three hollow plastic cylinders. Vexed by them, she raises her left hand. Three intra-venous lines penetrating the soft skin, how lovely.
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(Sorry, I had to cut it in half. I'm using a PSP)
She grasps the plastic firmly, and pulls it out. Ever been hit in the neck by a paintball? That's what it felt like, only it was internal. She was alone and in agony, and she expected it.
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Maya-kohai, the following information is your study plan. Included are the classes you need to take and a basic schedule.
Intermediate
Interaction
Advanced
Literacy
Characterization
Detail
Other Classes You May Want To Take
Beginner Battle
Advanced Don'ts
Please postr a sample post in the forums of all of the listed classes. If you would like, you may take it one class at a time, or alternatively you can take the classes simultaneously. Good luck!
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Well, you've got basic and intermediate detail, literacy, and characterization down. But, from the sample, we can't really tell for Character Interaction, the Don'ts, or Battle.
And I agree, the character limit on the PSP is rather annoying. I have one myself.
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Arrgh. Does that mean I have to post another sample?
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Arrgh. Does that mean I have to post another sample?
It would be helpful. I apologize for the confusion.