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Title: Grand Retribution Master Sage
Post by: Zero on January 16, 2010, 08:57:37 AM
I don't intend to use him but someone else might be able to



Name: Otu
Age:  16
Race: Sage
Alliance: None but pretends to serve Lorei.
Biography: He has discovered Retributon by age 8 and as such was highly respected by all the other sages on his planet. He then decided that it was time for him to leave his planet. He then left in search of people who could further his magical abilities to allow him to triumph. Once he learned his planet had been destroyed by an ancient curse woven to eradicate mages like him who could access the power of Retribution and control it he decided it was time to deal with this threat personally and so went to Lorei where he forged a blade for himself. He then struck a deal with the leader there gaining permission to allow him to live there. However as part of the deal he would not rely on his abilities. He however is remembering his past lives currently in which he got more training than he currently has.
Weapons: Short Sword
Equipment: Animites, Silver Retribution Staff (Contains Retribution abilities. )
Magic Level: 4 And in events 5
Psion Level: 3 (He is not that advanced at Psionics)
Appearance:  http://andreibressan.deviantart.com/art/Second-shot-150531521

Orph however is forbidden from using this character.
Title: Re: Grand Negion Master Sage
Post by: Orph on January 16, 2010, 01:37:05 PM
Wasn't Avidan supposed to be the last of the Negion users from the past? God damn Hawk, if you make a plot stick to it. Don't modify it so you gain more power, that's just cheap as Hell.
Title: Re: Grand Negion Master Sage
Post by: Nisorin on January 16, 2010, 01:55:23 PM
I agree with Orpheus. Actually, couldn't that be considered metagaming?
Title: Re: Grand Retribution Master Sage
Post by: Zero on January 17, 2010, 06:42:22 PM
He will actually be using

Retribution
This Magic type is made completely from the innate abilities supplied by it combined with the magic of a basic sage and is the only known counter to Negion. This magic was made by a group of monks who hated the fights between Negion Users and so they made this magic which nullifies Negion on contact meaning a Negion blast and a Retribution Shield, the Retribution Shield would overpower the Negion Blast as one small example.

Innate Abilities
Energy Blasts
Energy Constructs
Flight
Precog
Telepathy
Mind soothing
Emotion Manipulation
Weapon Creation

As his power set instead of Negion.
Title: Re: Grand Retribution Master Sage
Post by: Gaserlake on January 18, 2010, 06:11:43 PM
Age 18 and lvl 5 magic and lvl 3 psionics? Uh...
Title: Re: Grand Retribution Master Sage
Post by: Gaserlake on January 18, 2010, 06:14:30 PM
So... 18 to 16... 2 years would equal an increase from lvl 4 to lvl 5? No. 16 years old is too young, I believe, especially since he learned unique magic. I'm gonna leave this to the others.
Title: Re: Grand Retribution Master Sage
Post by: Zero on January 18, 2010, 06:24:25 PM
He isn't mine, but whoever adopts him.
Title: Re: Grand Retribution Master Sage
Post by: Nisorin on January 18, 2010, 06:32:17 PM
Character is not approvable, and so is invalid.
Title: Re: Grand Retribution Master Sage
Post by: Gaserlake on January 18, 2010, 06:49:35 PM
Why?
Title: Re: Grand Retribution Master Sage
Post by: Nisorin on January 18, 2010, 06:55:55 PM
Your previous post in this thread, Gaserlake.
Title: Re: Grand Retribution Master Sage
Post by: Gaserlake on January 18, 2010, 09:45:35 PM
At least offer an explanation why with your opinion. I thought you saw something that I didn't see.
Title: Re: Grand Retribution Master Sage
Post by: Nisorin on January 18, 2010, 10:18:30 PM
So... 18 to 16... 2 years would equal an increase from lvl 4 to lvl 5? No. 16 years old is too young, I believe, especially since he learned unique magic. I'm gonna leave this to the others.

That's why.
Title: Re: Grand Retribution Master Sage
Post by: Gaserlake on January 23, 2010, 12:42:04 PM
I know that. I meant for future reference.