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The Hub => Accepted Requests => Accepted Characters => Topic started by: Nisorin on March 24, 2011, 02:14:04 AM
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Name: Leirra Tseiroc
Age: Older than Time
Race: Perfect/Embodiment of Love/Caorrn Relorian
Alliance: None
Biography: Once one of the Perfect, she refused to give up her power or to fight in the war between the Perfect and Imperfect. Instead, she stages an elaborate ruse, destroying her former body and crafting new ones for her and her companion. They've spent an impossible to measure time with each other, both before and after the War. They witnessed the Splitting of Eli and Ararus, His sealing, survived the myriad of wars between the various Sage and Mortal factions during their time living amongst both. Shortly before the Aralangs began their travels across dimensions, she set about linking a new Dimension to the Outerverse, crafting it with her own hands and seeding it with a new race. Tall, winged humanoids with such a connection to magic as to make the two nigh inseparable. Together with Neirron, she taught them personal honor. From the honor of a knight serving his lord, to a theif stealing from the fat, pompous rich and spreading the wealth about those who truly needed it most, even to the pirate sailing the seas in search of plunder.
Over the millenia since the creation of the Caorrn, Leirra and Neirron had become one being, called at first by the name of Arianos and hailed as the creator of the Dimensional Plane. Now, she stands as the Embodiment of Love, after crafting a set of rituals that tie two people nigh inseparably through their love.
Weapons: Anything and everything she creates
Equipment: Anything and everything she creates
Magic Level: 6
Appearance: (http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2010/231/3/0/Anima__Shara_Visnu_by_Wen_M.jpg)
Name: Neirron Tseiroc
Age: Older than Time
Race: Perfect/Embodiment of Protection/Caorrn Relorian
Alliance: None
Biography: Once one of the Perfect, she refused to give up her power or to fight in the war between the Perfect and Imperfect. Instead, he stages an elaborate ruse, destroying his former body and crafting new ones for him and his companion. They've spent an impossible to measure time with each other, both before and after the War. They witnessed the Splitting of Eli and Ararus, His sealing, survived the myriad of wars between the various Sage and Mortal factions during their time living amongst both. Shortly before the Aralangs began their travels, he aided Leirra in crafting the new Dimension by tightly controlling his power over Destruction, creating a refined purple light that completely disassembles everything it touches to its absolute base components, which Leirra promptly made use of.
Together, he taught their 'children,' the Caorrn, the ways of honor. From a politician serving his people as opposed to himself, to a revolutionary speaking out against the oppression of a tyrant.
He watched over the Caorrn as they grew and spread across the Dimensional Plane, often hand in hand with Leirra. For one steeped in destruction, playing part in the creation of a race was something that truly boggled his mind, awaking new feelings. It was these that caused him to broach the idea to Leirra that they truly become one. And so they set out, ever together, creating the Orion and the seven Orias rituals. They themselves were the first to complete the Seven, and so far the only. He encouraged love of all kinds, familial, friendly, romantic all. He taught the Orien, those who had undergone an Orias, the ways of Protection, soon taking up the mantle of Embodiment of Protection.
He has only entered the Avenger once, during a war in a distant negative dimension where Leirra was, physically, critically wounded. The dimension still exists, though now perforated with holes and decaying, cut off from the negative Core.
Weapons: Twin swords, twin shields, anything he may conjure up
Equipment: Anything he may conjure up
Magic Level: 6
Appearance: (http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs10/i/2006/089/7/5/Anima__Defending_by_Wen_M.jpg)
They are both, due to their heritage, subgrounded, and partially surgrounded due to their Embodiment status. Currently they are still one body, Animas, but that will change once these requests are approved.
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1. If they became embodiments and shed their Perfect state, they would not be subgrounded any longer. There's no way of getting that state back.
2. Two lvls 6s? Um no... not approving that, I thought one could only have one?
3. Two embodiments? Same as the lvl6. What happened to only 1?
4. K2 only agreed to the change in Animas if you didn't use the powers of Destruction and Creation for yourself. "Weapon/Equipment: anything she creates" is not allowed then. In fact... neither would have those powers when split.
5. Older than Tme? No... Even if there was no embodiment of Time, time would have still been around, the force. That's how Asura knows what went on even though she wasn't around...
6. If he had Destruction, wouldn't he have been an Imperfect?
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Each point explained in IM.
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Copy and paste? I lost the IM and didn't see it.
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...I'll see if I can find it on my phone, but I know for sure that all but #1 was solved.
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So approved or not?
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Yeah, so unless anyone wants to brief me on everything regarding Magic, Embodiments, Lore, and existance, i cant make an informed decision... Sorry Nis.
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..I really feel this request should be denied for several reasons.
I don't like people having embodiments. The only reason I have my embodiment (two if you include Fatet, who isn't technically awake yet, though he's waking up) is for the plot. Seriously. That's it. After this event, I'm done with embodiments.
There was only supposed to be one embodiment, this being before we realized that Koty and Eli are embodiments. That was Anarchy. He was supposed to be the only PC embodiment. Why? For the plot. For an event.
Then a few more embodiments came along, and we were like, "Sure? Why not? It can't hurt anything."
Now everyone wants an embodiment, and they're hardly even neutral anymore. The supernatural element of the RP is fading because we're explaining it all. I probably play a fairly decent role in that, but I try to keep mystery and supernatural elements to the RP alive by introducing new things here and there. Either way, there weren't even supposed to be PC embodiments after this event in the original conception of it all..
If I have a hard time with embodiments, do understand that I really will not be approving these two. The Perfect are still supernatural and uncontrolled, ancient extinct people. I don't want us ruining that too. Not to mention that the Perfect are way stronger than embodiments.
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You were one of the ones who gave your approval for these two, I'd even gone to you asking for your opinion. They were supposed to have lost their Perfect abilities during the fight on the Outerverse, but your own actions prevented that from happening. I know you don't like the amount of Embodiments we have, and it's one of the reasons why I was going to have Leirra and Neirron be the first of my characters to have their endings. 'Course, I'd intended that even before I'd requested them as Embodiments, but still.
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1. If they became embodiments and shed their Perfect state, they would not be subgrounded any longer. There's no way of getting that state back.
2. Two lvls 6s? Um no... not approving that, I thought one could only have one?
3. Two embodiments? Same as the lvl6. What happened to only 1?
4. K2 only agreed to the change in Animas if you didn't use the powers of Destruction and Creation for yourself. "Weapon/Equipment: anything she creates" is not allowed then. In fact... neither would have those powers when split.
5. Older than Tme? No... Even if there was no embodiment of Time, time would have still been around, the force. That's how Asura knows what went on even though she wasn't around...
6. If he had Destruction, wouldn't he have been an Imperfect?
I still need the answer to these.
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I'm a bad listener. I thought you wanted to reawaken their Perfect abilities in the Outerverse.
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@K2, they've had the powers, never used them to keep themselves hidden. The powers were going to get split up, as said in the Aelirtras Venefircra (http://shatteredplanes.com/forum/index.php?topic=3371.0) thread, which was going to get made IC in the Outerverse fight between Iroku, the Sons and Hikaru.
1: One would think there's be no way of taking the contradiction that is the Perfect and turning them into a tautology.
2: They're only lvl 6 to qualify as Embodiments, don't intend for them to stay that way for long. And besides, I can't believe I'm the only one with two lvl6's. K2? Orph?
3: You have two. Orph has numerous ones, K2 has at least two.
4: So even normal magical creations are out of the question? My, that's going to make things rather difficult.
5: I did mean Asura, Hikaru.
6: If I remember correctly, the Perfect held all domains, did they not? Or did they not have specialties?