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Title: Refining Skills
Post by: Queen Bright on January 20, 2010, 07:01:23 PM

My placement said Advanced, but when a person can't word things and has a hard time transitioning between events in paragraphs, I don't think they're advanced.
So I choose to take intermediate to refine what I already know.

Ready!

Title: Re: Refining Skills
Post by: Nisorin on January 20, 2010, 07:11:31 PM

So then, tell me why you think you can't word things?

Title: Re: Refining Skills
Post by: Queen Bright on January 20, 2010, 07:24:06 PM

I'm not really sure. When trying to think of a post, I can go as far as planning it out, each part I want to do. But then when it comes to typing it into words...mental block!
Whatever I seem to type doesn't make sense or it reads choppily...

And then when trying to transition from events in paragraphs. Like paragraph1- reply, paragraph2 - react, paragraph3 -whatever else.... I can't word it to make it a smooth transition. It just seems off.

Title: Re: Refining Skills
Post by: Nisorin on January 20, 2010, 07:53:21 PM

Alright. Choose a series of posts you participated in from this board, and show me why it seems off.