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Title: ....wait, what?!
Post by: swiftyuki on January 22, 2010, 10:24:26 PM
Ok.... Before I start-- ideas based off of warrior cats books/series.... So yeah..... What? I'm doing a book report on one....bluestar's prophecy....

Ok. Onto the post(before I get sidetracked....again)
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The wind chilled in the air, but something strange was felt through all clans. There was a tension in the air. Every cat knew it. The kits(kittens) shivered in the nursery den. The nursing queens wrapped their fluffy tails around the kits protectively. The warriors' pelts rippled in the shadows, each ready for any anbush attack.

The RiverClan warriors swam swiftly along the lake. WindClan dashing across the moor. ShadowClan was slinking it the shadows. ThunderClan padded among the brush.

The moon showed. Though it was full meaning a truce.

As the cats headed for the clearing the leaders went up to meet.

A silver she-cat had leaf green eyes and nodded at a black tom"hello Blackstar."

blackstar was leader of thunderclan."ah, leafstar good to see you. I hope windclan is well?"
Leafstar"ah yes..."

the leaders nodded and started to begin. Fangstar the shadowclan leader said"shadowclan has been good. Our prey was

(finishing later)
Title: Re: ....wait, what?!
Post by: swiftyuki on January 24, 2010, 12:54:22 PM
Ok.... Before I start-- ideas based off of warrior cats books/series.... So yeah..... What? I'm doing a book report on one....bluestar's prophecy....

Ok. Onto the post(before I get sidetracked....again)
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The wind chilled in the air, but something strange was felt through all clans. There was a tension in the air. Every cat knew it. The kits(kittens) shivered in the nursery den. The nursing queens wrapped their fluffy tails around the kits protectively. The warriors' pelts rippled in the shadows, each ready for any anbush attack.

The RiverClan warriors swam swiftly along the lake. WindClan dashing across the moor. ShadowClan was slinking it the shadows. ThunderClan padded among the brush.

The moon showed. Though it was full meaning a truce.

As the cats headed for the clearing the leaders went up to meet.

A silver she-cat had leaf green eyes and nodded at a black tom"hello Blackstar."

blackstar was leader of thunderclan."ah, leafstar good to see you. I hope windclan is well?"
Leafstar"ah yes..."

the leaders nodded and started to begin. Fangstar the shadowclan leader said"shadowclan has been good. Our prey was plentiful."

blackstar"we had a fox in our grounds but we chased it off. Check around for the fox in your territory."

the leaders finished at the meeting and the clans started to leave. Just then the shadowclan leader's deputy yowled"shadowclan! Attack!"

the shadowclan warriors attacked all the clans. The deputy brushtail had killed Fangstar. The full moon went dark as large thunder clouds. Lightning lashed the sky as the clans fought. A streak of lightning flashed deadly close to all cats and the fighting stop

(finishing later)
Title: Re: ....wait, what?!
Post by: K2 on January 24, 2010, 06:09:52 PM
I'll wait till you finish.
Title: Re: ....wait, what?!
Post by: swiftyuki on January 25, 2010, 07:50:04 PM
Last word=typo=*stopped.
Guitar practice cuts down on my time a bit......^^'

IC-

Hostility could be sensed
Pelts prickled.
Eyes flashed coldly.
and the tension in the air was crustal clear.

All of Starclan's warriors, kits, past leaders, queens, (Etc...) was there. The branches shiverred at a harsh wind. the ancestor's showed their rage. Thunder rang out, Lightning blazedthe sky, winds bitter cold whipped in their face, droplets of water piecred every pelt. Firestar"You were born under the code!"

Spottedleaf"You dare disobey what you were born under?"

Yellowfang rasped"I'm dissapointed in Shadowclan"

Swiftpaw"How could you?"

Mews of dispair and regret of Starclan rang out.

Leafstar saw every single living cat bow their heads and their claws dug in the earthy soil.

Jayfeather, a blind medicine cat"This is a truce"

Hollyleaf"You dare break it?"

Lionblaze"If I still lived, you each would either have your pelts ripped out with your life or a 'reminder' of the truce"

Blackstar"We are deply sorry for breaking the truce...."

Leafstar"Forgive us!"

All other cats were in deep fright and shock to even mew.

Jayfeather"This time since the sun is rising.... however.... if this dares happen, who knows what the punishment is"

The ancestors left back toqards Silverpelt. and the clan cats went back to the clan camps




DONE!!!\XP
ok
Silverpelt-To humans; the part of the milky way galaxy we see in summer. to cats; the ancestors of their warrior blood. Tiherstar and Hawkfrost are dead but are in a dark dimension, not Starclan. Silverpelt is referred as heaven.
Title: Re: ....wait, what?!
Post by: Nisorin on January 25, 2010, 08:23:32 PM
I recommend basic battle, detail, literacy, characterization and character interaction, as well as intermediate Don'ts. That sound about right, K2?
Title: Re: ....wait, what?!
Post by: swiftyuki on February 08, 2010, 11:49:21 PM
i made a typo--tiger star (tiherstar)