Shattered Planes Archives (Seasons 4 & 5)
The Hub => Hangout => Creative Corner => Topic started by: Ghost on February 05, 2013, 01:19:37 AM
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(http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2013/035/e/d/_update__yuki_shiotaro__neko_ver__by_swiftyuki-d5tw5gy.png)
Yuki has a new look.
That is all.
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Oh! Oh! Draw me a Chase next. :3
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What does he look like, again? :P
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No offense but the head is completely off. The head is placed one direction and not just looking that way but completely turned it while the body is going the opposite direction. If you tried to do that pose right now you'd break your neck. The head doesn't turn that direction while the body is going the other direction, it can turn, but the body would have to be better balanced.
...Curious do you only know how to draw heads one way? Kinda seems it.
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No offense but the head is completely off. The head is placed one direction and not just looking that way but completely turned it while the body is going the opposite direction. If you tried to do that pose right now you'd break your neck. The head doesn't turn that direction while the body is going the other direction, it can turn, but the body would have to be better balanced.
...Curious do you only know how to draw heads one way? Kinda seems it.
I think your critique is a tad bit off. Our heads can turn a little over a 180° for an angular measure. Her head is turned at an angle that will not break her neck. It's almost in the same direction of her shoulder, sure, however it's not there or past it. It's still a frontal view. If you want a near accurate "measure", she's facing at about 2-3 o'clock. Now a 4 oclock is almost impossible unless you turn your body.
And no, I draw heads however I draw them. I just draw them. I used to do a circle and then add the chin, but I'm trying the technique where you use an ellipse for the head and then shape the chin out of the ellipse's border. On ocassion, I'll draw a realistic head. But that's for statues.
If you mean face shape, then no. Those aren't the same. This one's a tad bit different because I was trying one of the many "anime" face types out there.
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Go try that pose in the mirror. You have to either bend your neck to an angle, or curve it foreward more. It won't bend that far sideways while staying straight up. If I have to take a picture to illustrate and prove this I can.
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Uh... Like me? I was Visioning like a full picture of that one drawing of me as an anime character on my FB.
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Uh... Like me? I was Visioning like a full picture of that one drawing of me as an anime character on my FB.
I don't have any pictures of you, more or less good enough a quality. :P
Go try that pose in the mirror. You have to either bend your neck to an angle, or curve it foreward more. It won't bend that far sideways while staying straight up. If I have to take a picture to illustrate and prove this I can.
I think it's humanly possible. I just did it. (http://fc00.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2013/036/2/e/yukineko_by_swiftyuki-d5tyar6.png)
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Yes you did it except your head is tipped downwards and slightly turned to an angle. The drawings head is turned to the side like a bobbel head on a popsicle stick.
And yeah Lyoko, she's right. You've given like no reference for any of us to draw you by.
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Yes you did it except your head is tipped downwards and slightly turned to an angle. The drawings head is turned to the side like a bobbel head on a popsicle stick.
Really the main issue was that her neck was too long. Anywho, you do remember I'm not the best with humans. I just wanted to play with this pose.
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Okay, she's colored! :U
(http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2013/036/a/4/_update__yuki_shiotaro__neko_ver__nonanimated_by_swiftyuki-d5tzr1x.png)
Animated version (http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2013/036/e/1/yukineko_by_swiftyuki-d5tzqf7.gif)
Side note: Markings only show if she's using magic
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(http://fc04.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2013/040/9/b/i_think_it_likes_me_by_swiftyuki-d5ue95j.png)
I THINK IT LIKES ME.