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Title: The First
Post by: Orph on May 19, 2010, 09:09:59 PM
Name: Pestilence, The First, The Pacifist, Magimeta, and Conquest.
Age: Unknown.
Race: Demi-God, but legends hint at a different nature.
Alliance: Currently neutral in all affairs that do not involve Magimeta.
Biography: Conquest was the first of Koty's sons, his date of birth is unknown but legends say that he was created before the Harbinger or when Koty and Lucifer led the rebellion against God. He like his other brothers followed in his Father's footsteps and performed various actions throughout existence according to the Devil's plans. That was until his Father sent him to destroy and entire realm, the realm was populated by highly-advanced virologists who were currently working on a virus that could eliminate all disease in the entire realm.  "Him" saw this as a threat, but not one that required his attention. So he sent Pestilence to quell the realm. By reducing it to ash.

The First refused, and stood up to his Father. He was obviously struck down by his unsealed Father, who at that time was a God. He was neither killed or locked away, but cursed. If he was to ever kill a living sentient being he'd be instantly be destroyed. And so he became a wandering pacifist, unable to fight back as his Father's minions attacked and destroyed his mortal form over and over again. Legends say that Koty gave him a choice, a way to undo the curse.. If he vows to be loyal once again, the curse would be lifted.

This is where the legends stop, supposedly he disappeared or died. No one really knows.
Weapons: None.
Equipment: None.
Magic Level: 5. 5.5 under special conditions.
Appearance: His appearance has never been verified, but a sketch was created by an artist who supposedly befriended the entity.

http://browse.deviantart.com/?qh=&section=&q=Monk#/dfn496 (http://browse.deviantart.com/?qh=&section=&q=Monk#/dfn496)
Title: Re: The First
Post by: Nisorin on May 19, 2010, 09:14:24 PM
He seems awfully cheery considering he's Conquest...


Anywho, approved.
Title: Re: The First
Post by: Queen Bright on May 19, 2010, 09:17:47 PM
I say he can't be stronger than the other characters, and forcing him to be a pacifist isn't an excuse for that. Make him the same lvl, then I'll approve.
Title: Re: The First
Post by: Orph on May 19, 2010, 09:23:30 PM
If you read it says legends report. AKA Fucking legends.

Hell in truth he can't even use magic, that's the funny thing. 8D
Title: Re: The First
Post by: Queen Bright on May 19, 2010, 09:25:19 PM
Yes, but you said closest to Koty and God. Even if it's 'legend report,' I know the result that will bring if it's left open. Loophole for later. Not another god. Make him the same lvl.
Title: Re: The First
Post by: Orph on May 19, 2010, 09:27:29 PM
Because he is, or all in all closest thing there is to an Embodiment without being an Embodiment.
Title: Re: The First
Post by: Queen Bright on May 19, 2010, 09:28:26 PM
That wouldn't make him close to God. Lvl 5, or no approval.
Title: Re: The First
Post by: Orph on May 19, 2010, 09:29:06 PM
Level zip. 8D
Title: Re: The First
Post by: Queen Bright on May 19, 2010, 09:32:45 PM
0? Then if that's it, put it. But remove, the close to God's power, part.
Title: Re: The First
Post by: Orph on May 19, 2010, 09:34:51 PM
Nah, because it's true. Magic isn't the only power out there. ;D
Title: Re: The First
Post by: Queen Bright on May 19, 2010, 09:37:29 PM
Can. Not. Be. Close. To. Gods. Power.
Title: Re: The First
Post by: Orph on May 19, 2010, 09:39:27 PM
Suck. My. Dick.

It's funny when she's yelling at me when I'm going to use something CLOSE to God's power.

When's she is literally playing God.
Title: Re: The First
Post by: Queen Bright on May 19, 2010, 09:43:06 PM
Because you already have a god. I know full well what you're trying. By putting that in the lvl, you've opened something unspecified, that you can go back an exploit later, if you need to. Such as the true-names, instead of magic, or such. By having you remove that part, it removes the later exploit. You have one god, too many. This one can't be close to God, and it's possibility left open for exploition.
Title: Re: The First
Post by: Orph on May 19, 2010, 09:44:29 PM
Derp he uses true names, I told you this already.
Title: Re: The First
Post by: Queen Bright on May 19, 2010, 09:48:23 PM
Derp he uses true names, I told you this already.

Which shouldn't be allowed. Because the law of true names in magic. (The usual one,) states that knowing an objects true name, gives you complete control of them, and can even kill them if they choose. I don't know what law of it we're using on here, but the usual one would be godmodding, unless said it can't be used on living beings. But it being used before in the RP, contradicts that. Thus, godmodding. ESPECIALLY, if you say the only thing closest to god.
Title: Re: The First
Post by: Orph on May 19, 2010, 09:51:49 PM
Exxceept he can't kill anyone without blowing himself up and dying instantly.

And the closest thing is basically he's an unaligned Embodiment, he can use true names to gain temporary Control over practically anything if he knows the name. But like Control it's dangerous to use and if it is used it excess he'll die.
Title: Re: The First
Post by: Queen Bright on May 19, 2010, 09:53:19 PM
IF your concept of Control is accepted, first.
Staff debate?
Title: Re: The First
Post by: @Pokemon Master Red on May 19, 2010, 10:34:28 PM
She has a point, you know...Your being vauge to get away with loopholes...
Title: Re: The First
Post by: Beware Ye Who Enter Here on May 19, 2010, 11:11:17 PM
Loopholes are for lawyer. Kivith, you'd be a really crappy lawyer.
Anyway. Yet another super powerful character for Kivith. Guess I shouldn't be really surprised.

Oh And Kivith, don't be a dick.  :P
Title: Re: The First
Post by: K2 on May 22, 2010, 11:20:02 PM
Approved.
Title: Re: The First
Post by: Gaserlake on May 22, 2010, 11:34:28 PM
Basically, what Orph's trying to do with this character is metagaming, because of reasons Hik described. Deliberately creating loopholes so you can take advantage of them later is metagaming, as this loophole is OOC knowledge. We need OOC knowledge, if we suspect something, if you want it approved, to be approved.
Title: Re: The First
Post by: Orph on May 22, 2010, 11:36:40 PM
I already told Nisorin and Hikaru it. Hikaru wont approve it until I put in on the template, which I refuse to because fuck that.
Title: Re: The First
Post by: Gaserlake on May 22, 2010, 11:38:28 PM
If they approved it, it would have to be posted here to be official.
Title: Re: The First
Post by: @Pokemon Master Red on May 22, 2010, 11:39:03 PM
I already told Nisorin and Hikaru it. Hikaru wont approve it until I put in on the template, which I refuse to because fuck that.
Then guess what?
ITS NOT APPROVED!
Title: Re: The First
Post by: Gaserlake on May 22, 2010, 11:40:40 PM
Depends on what Nisorin said.
Title: Re: The First
Post by: @Pokemon Master Red on May 22, 2010, 11:44:18 PM
I'd consider his silence a non-approval...
Title: Re: The First
Post by: Orph on May 23, 2010, 12:00:55 AM
Nisorin did approve it, and as did K2.

So fuck yeah.
Title: Re: The First
Post by: Nisorin on May 23, 2010, 12:14:00 AM
I've been busy with work and life, as I've said multiple times. I did indeed say that I thought it to be fine, though I do not remember what the issue was, nor why it was an issue to begin with or what the resolution was.
Title: Re: The First
Post by: Queen Bright on May 23, 2010, 07:29:47 AM
Nisorin did approve it, and as did K2.

So fuck yeah.

Even if it is approved. I'm calling it out.
For the reason of the loophole, that even Gaser notices.
And because The Law of True Names, its too powerful for this board. And you intend to use it for this character.
It's a godmodding law, it should not be used on SP, ESPECIALLY, by you. And unless you intend to give the First a new power, then I'm calling him out.
Title: Re: The First
Post by: Orph on May 23, 2010, 02:45:29 PM
He only knows the names of certain things, if he wants to learn lets say K2's true name he'd have to figure it out. And that would require contact with K2 who would be able to fight back, and even then when their true name is used they can fight back. He cannot use it as a way to kill, as that would instantly lead to his own death. If anything he can only use it to pacify or for defense.
Title: Re: The First
Post by: Queen Bright on May 23, 2010, 02:47:47 PM
It's still too powerful of a law that shouldn't be brought to SP. We have all other magic laws. Don't bring True Names into it too.
Title: Re: The First
Post by: Orph on May 23, 2010, 02:52:58 PM
Has already been brought into it.
Title: Re: The First
Post by: Queen Bright on May 23, 2010, 03:01:52 PM
And was disputed not to happen again. As it leaves the rest of the characters at an unfair disadvantage.
Title: Re: The First
Post by: Nisorin on May 23, 2010, 03:39:27 PM
Please at least detail the Law of True Names so we all know what one you're talking about.
Title: Re: The First
Post by: Queen Bright on May 24, 2010, 12:52:39 AM
Denied.

1. Due to the loophole, even if it is a legend. Since when are legends used as the bio? If you use a legend of non facts. Then add that before or after and give the real bio, since this is OOC approval, not IC.
2. Law of True Names, you didn't put in the template or request it, because you plan on just using it. Due to its power, if you INSIST on using it, should have to be requested or detailed in template. I still vote it doesn't even come on the board. It can be used to godmod.
Title: Re: The First
Post by: Gaserlake on May 24, 2010, 01:01:09 AM
If it is suspicious, we should be able to have OOC knowledge. Otherwise, there would be no way of telling.
Title: Re: The First
Post by: Nisorin on May 24, 2010, 01:01:41 AM
I agree with Hikaru, on both counts. I remove my approval.
Title: Re: The First
Post by: Orph on May 24, 2010, 04:37:29 PM
Blah blah blah, the only reason I see for it is OOC reasons? Eaaassily fixed!
Title: Re: The First
Post by: Queen Bright on May 24, 2010, 04:37:57 PM
And The Law of True Names needs to be disputed.
Title: Re: The First
Post by: Nisorin on May 24, 2010, 10:18:02 PM
If it's so easily fixed, fix it.
Title: Re: The First
Post by: K2 on July 19, 2010, 01:42:08 PM
Alright, so, approved without the use of Law Of True Names..
Title: Re: The First
Post by: Orph on July 29, 2010, 12:16:41 AM
I'm going to edit this and stuff. :D

Edited.
Title: Re: The First
Post by: K2 on July 29, 2010, 08:29:13 PM
Alright, so, approved without the use of Law Of True Names..

This.
Title: Re: The First
Post by: Orph on July 30, 2010, 09:47:25 PM
Bump.
Title: Re: The First
Post by: Nisorin on August 02, 2010, 07:45:11 PM
Since it's done without the Law of True Names, I approve.
Title: Re: The First
Post by: Queen Bright on August 08, 2010, 05:32:45 AM
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Magic Level: His exact power level is unknown, but in a way he can be compared to Michael, who is the General of God. He's obviously very powerful. Level five, but when fighting Divine Entities, like Angels and the like, he's a level six. As he was created as a weapon against him.

Get rid of 6, or no approval.
Title: Re: The First
Post by: K2 on February 06, 2011, 09:13:49 PM
Using
Title: Re: The First
Post by: Queen Bright on February 06, 2011, 09:14:39 PM
He hasn't been approved.
Title: Re: The First
Post by: K2 on February 06, 2011, 09:16:36 PM
Then approve him.
Title: Re: The First
Post by: Queen Bright on February 06, 2011, 09:24:35 PM
Not until the magic level is fixed.
Title: Re: The First
Post by: K2 on February 06, 2011, 09:26:28 PM
Fix'd
Title: Re: The First
Post by: Queen Bright on February 06, 2011, 09:51:16 PM
Approved.