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Re: Class
« Reply #25 on: February 06, 2010, 03:33:29 PM »
Yue Yan had no time to deal with these muggers. This confrontation in his opinion was quite useless. He then thought of the stone pillars on either side. He could crush them with those and thus save his bacon. 

The Mugger commander Alfonso said "Yue Yan, hand over your money. "

Yue Yan then held out his hand and focused. A small green sphere appeared in his hand. He then fired the orb hitting one of the structures. Once the orb collided with the structures.

The Muggers saw the structures begin to fall and quickly erected a field. Well some of them erected a field. The others however fired magical flames at Yue Yan to kill him.

Yue Yan upon seeing those annoyances spouting the flames at him concentrated. He then focused and between the time it took for the flames to get closer and to start burning him, he had effectively returned their own attack back at them though stronger than when they had sent it.
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« Reply #26 on: February 06, 2010, 04:10:01 PM »
Yan Yue a woman of high caliber and a student at that. She decided when she saw the muggers coming that she had to act fast. She wouldn't be mugged by them and have her one ticket to mastery yanked out from her. She focused and saw the structures. She would simply make the structures be her weapon and crush them with the structures when they got too close.

The Mugger leader Alfonoso said to Yan Yue "Surrender your money. We will also be using you as a toy. "

Yan Yue thought about what they had said. She then concentrated and a shattering noise was heard. The structures had broken. She held in a smile and then threw the structures via Telekensis at the Muggers.

The muggers formed an impromptu shield of magic but alas the shield against the weight of the structures didn't hold.
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« Reply #27 on: February 06, 2010, 04:20:51 PM »
Slowly Yue Yan walked through the streets alone by herself. She was not scared of anyone on these streets yet. She knew that her reputation as a student along with her temper would hold off most muggers. She was impatient to get to her destination and decided without further ado to take an alley shortcut. The moment she stepped into the alley however the muggers surrounded her. All of them were armed and had magic. In addition to that Yue Yan was only a level 3 magic user.

Yue "Please be gone. I have no desire to fight you and yet if I must I shall. "

Alfonso "You are going to be our prisoner. " He looked gruff and was by far the most powerful one in that group of muggers. He also had a heavy battle axe capable of splitting a skull in his hands.

Yue came to a decision and let her mind go blank for a moment. She remembered the sayings of her old mentor. Don't think, just act. It was time for actions and not thoughts. These muggers must be punished she decided. She then took a bird's eye view of the place by magically melding her mind with a bird. She saw the structures and then released the mind of the bird from her control.

Yue decided she would simply act by making the structures fight for her. In actuality what she intended to do was to make the structures fall on them and run.  She had been shaken when she noticed that all of them had weapons. All she had in the way of weaponry was a slender knife. It wasn't much good against someone with an Axe that could split your skull.

Alfonso "Are you going to surrender?"

Yue "No!"

Alfonso then made a gesture to his men. All of them drew their weapons and focused their magic. "Very well then." He then gracefully spun towards her and swung the axe down at her as fast and as powerfully as he could.

Yue was a quick thinker. By utilizing her power of thought she came up with the perfect strategy to combat these brutes. It was true she was only a student and yet she had a way to bring them down. She removed a flower from her hair given to her by a boyfriend. "Animus Simalcram. " A simalcrum of a female appeared nearby. It looked identical to her. Perhaps this would bait them away from her.

Alfonso and his men saw two of Yue. They weren't sure at that moment which one to go after. Alfonso came to the conclusion that both should be captured. 2 of the level threes at his barked command went after Yue. The other two went after the simalcrum.

Yue then saw her moment to shine. She thought of peaceful and loving things. She needed to relax and let the power flow through her like water flowed through a stream or river. Finally she was relaxed enough. She then enveloped them in an illusion of their most pleasant desires.
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Re: Class
« Reply #28 on: February 06, 2010, 04:32:42 PM »
The mere fact that she's a student would entice them even more because it would make her an easier target. Think about it Hawkeye. She's only a student, and she's up against several fully grown adults, former soldiers no less. Not only that, but the leader is a level 4, while Yue Yan's a level three, making him not only a great deal more experienced than her, but more powerful as well. She would not be able to win the battle alone. Hell, she may not even be able to adequately fight back out of simple fear.

Do it again, better this time. Always, always always remember that you will not always win. You must be realistic. A teenage student would only be able to defeat a battle hardened, fully grown ex soldier with great amounts of luck.
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Seeing the world through a child's eyes is truly a unique experience. It helps you to retrieve that sense of awe, magic and wonder that you lost as you lost your innocence. Tell me, when was the last time that you thought of those childhood dreams? You know, the ones that you used to spend all your time wondering and fantasizing about? Have you forgotten them so easily? Have you forgotten what it felt like to see something for the first time, to see the magic in the mundane? Everyone says you should take the time to 'Stop and smell the roses'. But you should also take the time to look for the fairies, embrace the wind and enjoy the rain. Just once today, stop for a moment and look into that little piece of nature you pass everyday. Perhaps you may see something you did not notice before.

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« Reply #29 on: February 06, 2010, 04:37:54 PM »
When Yue Yan saw them coming she was very scared of fighting them. She knew that on her own without any support whatsoever she would get her butt kicked and probably end up raped too. However she would even the odds somewhat by calling in the authorities with her magic. She quickly conjured up a flare in the sky signaling the authorities to come to her rescue.

Alfonso the leader of the muggers looked at her with a wicked gleam in his eye. It served to frighten her even more. Now she was scared and going to be raped. Could this day get any better for Alfonso? He didn't at that moment think so.

No Authorities came and so Yue Yan decided it was time to flee. The best laid plans go awry often. It was a life lesson she had learned. Fleeing would preserve her dignity and her virginity thus far and so fleeing is what she must accomplish. She muttered a spell so they couldn't hear it and caused a portal to open.

Yue Yan then fled through the portal. She thought she was safe finally. However Alfonso had changed the portal to bring her right back to where she was before going through it. Yue Yan would have to be creative. Teleportation was the only thing she hadn't as of yet tried to perform to escape. She would transcend the mortal plane temporarily and so she teleported out of there to a middle ground where they couldn't come.
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Re: Class
« Reply #30 on: February 06, 2010, 05:03:35 PM »
...a level three mage would be able to walk through different dimensions on her own? Yeah, I didn't think so either. Face it Hawkeye, the situation's hopeless for her. The best she can pull off on her own would be to take down as many foes as she can before being taken. That's how life is sometimes, you cannot escape the inevitable.

But, as far as the literal value of the post, B. Still have some grammar to work on, as well as wording things more interestingly. Less passive wording, more detail. Instead of having her mutter the spell, actually detail the incantation and gestures used to cast the spell. But, it is an acceptable post.

So, how difficult was that?
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Seeing the world through a child's eyes is truly a unique experience. It helps you to retrieve that sense of awe, magic and wonder that you lost as you lost your innocence. Tell me, when was the last time that you thought of those childhood dreams? You know, the ones that you used to spend all your time wondering and fantasizing about? Have you forgotten them so easily? Have you forgotten what it felt like to see something for the first time, to see the magic in the mundane? Everyone says you should take the time to 'Stop and smell the roses'. But you should also take the time to look for the fairies, embrace the wind and enjoy the rain. Just once today, stop for a moment and look into that little piece of nature you pass everyday. Perhaps you may see something you did not notice before.

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« Reply #31 on: February 06, 2010, 06:44:17 PM »
It was easy. Oh and on an off topic thing, check your PMs.
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« Reply #32 on: February 07, 2010, 02:11:51 PM »
if it's that easy, why don't you do that with every single IC post you write?
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Seeing the world through a child's eyes is truly a unique experience. It helps you to retrieve that sense of awe, magic and wonder that you lost as you lost your innocence. Tell me, when was the last time that you thought of those childhood dreams? You know, the ones that you used to spend all your time wondering and fantasizing about? Have you forgotten them so easily? Have you forgotten what it felt like to see something for the first time, to see the magic in the mundane? Everyone says you should take the time to 'Stop and smell the roses'. But you should also take the time to look for the fairies, embrace the wind and enjoy the rain. Just once today, stop for a moment and look into that little piece of nature you pass everyday. Perhaps you may see something you did not notice before.
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