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Faotemaru Veintarlach Derahnad
« on: July 14, 2011, 11:40:00 PM »
I'm just putting him back out to be added into accepted characters. However, if someone has an issue with him as he is now, speak now or forever hold your peace. Other than that, he's pretty much the same ever since I first requested him except for the fact that...

1. Epoch Circles (Read up on that here.)
2. He has a Divine Weapon (Read up on that here.)
3. He's level 6.

Faotemaru Veintarlach Derahnad
Age:
He's been around since the OK. I'm guessing maybe a 1,000+.
 Gender:
Male
Race:
Chimeran Human. He has changed his body structure and biology to a point that although he takes the human form, he is far from his humanity. He even used to have wings and raven-like organs in him.
Place Of Birth:
Earth, somewhere in Europe
OCCUPATION:
Was head admin of False Heaven, now just a simple alchemist.
 Personality:
Faotemaru does not think highly of himself and finds himself scared in front of many situations to the point where all hope seems to drain from him. He is constantly fearing attacks from a god, as if he is to be punished for all the sins he committed in alchemy ever since he was merely 25, and constantly compares himself negatively towards others that may or may not even be stronger than him.
But, there is another side of him that comes up very rarely. This side, is pure anger towards everything, a wish to see all before him dead if needed. He has only ever shown this side on certain, select fights such as in the tournament against one of Orph's characters, or when he is dead set on protecting his homunculus (Whom he regards as his own daughter.) to any means necessary. To see this side of Faote is something to be feared, for if this side is to ever surface, he will stop at absolutely nothing, no matter how impossible it may be, to accomplish what he has set forth to do. Even if it means his own death or to fall into insanity.

Alliance:
False Heaven, but mostly himself.
Biography:
Faote was born somewhere in Europe, during the OK timeline. His entire extended family along with his mother and father lived together, worshiping a single entity. Zere. Rather than getting the love he needed as a growing child, he was instead pushed aside and forced to worship this entity along with his parents. This did not sit with him all that well, and eventually began to hate the supposed 'god.' After a few years of this continued treatment towards him, there was a day where his entire family laid before him, dead, their blood splattered all over the place, dying the Derahnad family estate in a deadly crimson. Fire, smoke, the stench of all of those dead filled the air, and Faote saw the only other person beside him that might have caused it. Zere. It was through smoke, but he was absolutely sure it was him.
His family treated him like crap. But, they were family nonetheless. And for his own family to be killed at the hands of their own 'god' was something that even he pitied. And he began to research the Philosopher's stone. A stone that, would give him power beyond everything imaginable, and the object that would first delve the Alchemist into the world of magic. And for multiple years, he researched and through thousands of cycles through trial and error, he had made it. A Philosopher's stone. And with it, he warped to the Midnight Align, the supposed place that Zere once dwelled. And in this place, he trained himself through rigorous trials, even going so far as to injure himself, to burn away pieces of his flesh even, only to heal and start anew. By the time he was done, he was a level 4 or 5 magic wielder, no doubt about it. Later, he would create Katherine, the Homunculus in the form of a giant black Raven, whom would help him in battle. But soon enough, this homunculus ceased to be considered a tool for battle and instead a valued family member. Where his parents had failed to take care of him, he would attempt to succeed with Katherine.
However, in (Not posted anywhere, it's assumed it happened at some point.) Faote and Zere's next encounter, there was a fight. And in this fight, Zere had slain Katherine and fled. Unable to house his guilt and unending regret, and fully knowing that Katherine's spirit would not be accepted in any afterlife, he took Katherine and placed her spirit in his body, and his wings, forever being the container for Katherine, to forever be the house that allows Katherine's spirit to rest in peace. Through this synthesis between Katherine's Spirit and Soul with Faote, his magic level shot up to level 6. It was, however, unimportant to him. He now had another reason to kill Zere. And it was a personal reason.
Faote, when he entered the realm of SP, was killed by Prophet, and the prophet stole his Philosopher's stone. And through the afterlife, Faote was given another chance to live, despite every defiance and act of god he had committed, and was given a body to live with through the help of Vincent. Of course, this was something that had to be done. If it wasn't, Katherine's spirit would have dissipated to nothingness, and he would have failed as a father.
His activities between then and the construction of False Heaven are unknown, all except for the tournament. In this tournament, he had slain Koty with the Lance of Longinus, a spear he had summoned from the very heavens above, and impaled Koty 8 times, all at once with 8 'copies' of the spear, along with gaining another Philosopher stone in that same fight. It was mentioned that a person with a weak spirit would not be able to wield the lance, and despite the Alchemist's meek personality, he wielded it with no problem. In fact, one could say it's abilities were multiplied by some number with him wielding. It was then, after the tournament, Prophet met him, and after a heated argument, instructed him to flee to another time to escape the wrath of Hikaru. This was impossible, so Faote did the next best thing: create a near impenetrable space station known as False Heaven. Why it would take anyone and everyone, providing everyone a place to live at absolutely no cost was a mystery to everyone but Faote himself. One may assume it was his fatherly side that allowed this to happen. Nevertheless, the alchemist hid out here until it was confirmed that he wasn't being chased.
Ever since then, Faote participated in a few events of no real importance, in which any involvement he had was next to nil. However, there was one thing that did happen to him though. He was drafted by some of Nisorin's characters (their names escape me.) to help them in a war that would affect the balance between magic and technology. After some pushing from Prophet, Faote decided to go through with it, allowing Captain Hasley to take over as Head admin and said his goodbyes to Katherine, Shu 001, along with a few other androids and acquaintances. And after he left False Heaven, he disappeared into his lab of an undisclosed location, never to come out again.
To this day, it is assumed that Hasley has absolute control of False Heaven along with Eve, the space station's power source and core of everything.

 Weapons:
  • Various Firearms
  • A celestial enchanted Scythe
Magic Level:
6, though his epoch circles make him pretty powerful.

Fears:
  • Death of Katherine, Eve, Shu 001, or any of the homunculi or androids he's created.
  • Dying before he finished what he set out to do in the first place: kill Zere.
  • Failing
Interests:
  • His 'children' that he creates.
  • Keeping up with False Heaven
  • Alchemy
Not much else.
Aspirations:
  • Kill Zere.
ORIENTATION:
He doesn't give a damn about companionship. As long as he can protect his loved children, all is right in his love life.
RELATIONSHIP/MARITIAL STATUS:
Single Father. *Ba dum pish!*
« Last Edit: July 15, 2011, 12:09:25 AM by Gunslingah »
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Re: Faotemaru Veintarlach Derahnad
« Reply #1 on: July 14, 2011, 11:45:51 PM »
The magic level thing is the only iffy part. 6 is allowed but I don't think anyone on the board at all has been allowed to go passed 6.

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Re: Faotemaru Veintarlach Derahnad
« Reply #2 on: July 14, 2011, 11:51:00 PM »
It's the epoch circles that give it an extra .2, since he kinda has the power to mess with a buncha laws of existence in them. If it weren't for them, he'd just be a level 6. However, I'll also say that since he created the circles, he is practically the master of using them (Or Katherine is, but I'm letting Nisorin keep everyone else such as Eve.), so they can probably be considered as part of his magic level.

But I digress. However you and the rest of the staff view it is pretty absolute, so if it definitely needs to be tweaked, I'll do so.
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Re: Faotemaru Veintarlach Derahnad
« Reply #3 on: July 14, 2011, 11:56:37 PM »
I get why it's 6.2, but does it have to be given a number?  Can it just be assumed IC that he has great power? It's just if you put 6.2, Orph or K2, or someone down the line will try to trick the system as well.

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Re: Faotemaru Veintarlach Derahnad
« Reply #4 on: July 15, 2011, 12:08:29 AM »
Probably. Rather than making Faote more powerful than he was though, I'm rather just giving an evaluation of his current magical strength that had changed since the last request.

I sometimes see K23's and Orph's characters already over level 6, the negi attack on False Heaven being a good example: Negi energy overpowering a level 6 magic, albeit 7.3 billion of them all at once. And then Eve gets a power boost on all of them, probably raising them above level 6, and K23's negi stuff overpowers all 7.3 billion of them again.
I'm not saying that it should be nulled or whatever, but it kinda bothered me. After seeing that, I kinda figured that if stuff like that can happen, then adding a .2 for Faote's total power up till this point is probably appropriate, but I suppose not.

Lowered to 6.
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Re: Faotemaru Veintarlach Derahnad
« Reply #5 on: July 15, 2011, 12:33:51 PM »
You are an exceptionally skilled RPer so I approve, don't usually approve of Level 6s much