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5 Race Requests
« on: April 13, 2010, 03:57:14 PM »
Wraiths
Beings literally created from the darkness within the hearts of others, they are about 20 fold stronger than an average human and 20 fold faster than an Average Human. In darkness they can see better than humans can without night vision goggles. In addition to that they have a proficiency for dark style magic including all forms of it which means that they are also good at Necromancy. They can infect others with poison via a touch that shuts down their entire nervous system. 

Silverian
An off shoot of the Tidean race lacking the ability to perform magic in any form they have honed their speed and strength to levels beyond what a Tidean can normally perform and due to that are known as the best hunters in the galaxy. Where humans would be weak they are strong. Where humans can’t survive they thrive. The explanation for this is that when Veritas died the spells that he used to help the Tideans gain their abilities faded from existence creating this off shoot of the race by accident.

 
Smiths
These are beings with a unique ability namely that whatever they forge is resistant to extreme heat as are they. Most of them have skin like the scales of a dragon and that acts as the armor that they use protecting them from harm.  They have a pristine lack of magic and can’t even perform magic alternatives for some odd reason.  Whatever they forge though has magical properties since they are like sponges to magic and soak it up and release it when they create weaponry. 


Talon
Large winged creatures like the Pterodactyls of old they have claws and can fly. They have the ability to use magic to enable them to fire energy blasts from their eyes, but their talons are their main weapons. Besides the talons being one of their weapons they can also use their spiked tails to hammer their foes with a rapid series of blows.

Maker
Beings with incredible intellect that is up to par with that of the Aralangs. They lack the ability to do any form of magic however and instead rely on their science and technology in order to give them an advantage. Being smarter than humans they have three brains and enhanced speed along with agility thanks to the implants they have put inside themselves. Usually blonde haired or black haired, this race views Intelligence as all there is.  Due to this they have come to be rivals to the Aralangs  in inventiveness.
 
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Re: 5 Race Requests
« Reply #1 on: April 13, 2010, 06:53:40 PM »
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A race of intellect and iron will. They have green pigment in skin and have small scales on their arm. Their origin is based off of human adaptations to their environment, and they have been indigenous to Jihad for quite some time now.
So you want us to PM yourself? And what the hell is Jihad? IRL it means "Struggle in the way of god," you're using it.... how?

Silverian
An off shoot of the Tidean race lacking the ability to perform magic in any form they have honed their speed and strength to levels beyond what a Tidean can normally perform and due to that are known as the best hunters in the galaxy. Where humans would be weak they are strong. Where humans can’t survive they thrive. There is no explanation to the abilities that they have.
Stop being lazy and give an explanation. Also they can't be "the best," as that's naming a race before it's even made and being arrogant.

Dragons
Winged Scaled Creatures that can breathe fire. They have large amounts of magic at their disposal but are usually sealed inside humans or sages or Tideans or other magic sensitive races in order to protect themselves. When they hatch they are small and powerless. When they grow up they are large and more powerful.

NO. You cannot request dragons. They've been used in the RP so many times, they don't need requesting. Dragons aren't a race, they're a species. Sage Dragons are a race, but that's different. With them being around for so long in the RP, you requesting them, would mean ONLY you get to say who plays them. So again, No.

Smiths
These are beings with a unique ability namely that whatever they forge is resistant to extreme heat as are they. Most of them have skin like the scales of a dragon and that acts as the armor that they use protecting them from harm. Besides this however there is one other unique thing about them namely their pristine lack of magic and the ability to be unaffected by magic.
If they're going to be unaffected by magic, like some races are. Give a reason why. Start being creative, damn you Hawkeye. A race wouldn't just be unaffected. You need to say what about them does it. You're just trying to get a race that can't be killed. So until then, no.

Talon
Large winged beings like the Pteradactyls of old they have claws and can fly. They have the ability to use magic to enable them to fire lasers from their eyes, but their talons are their main weapons. Besides the talons being one of their weapons they can also use their spiked tails to hammer their foes with a rapid series of blows.
.....Laser beams? OMG. That wouldn't be a race if they're a pteradactyl, it'd be a species. Races are sentient. And get a better name. Talon's are what a bird has, naming them that, would be odd.

Maker
Beings with incredible intellect that is up to par with that of the Aralangs. They lack the ability to do any form of magic however and instead rely on their science and technology in order to give them an advantage. Being smarter than humans they have three brains and enhanced speed along with enhanced strength and agility thanks to the implants they have put inside themselves. Usually blonde haired or black haired, this race views Intelligence as all there is.
Take out Extreme strength. Speed makes sense, but strength doesn't. You say this race views intelligence as all there is? Then they would be against bruteforce. You never have the intelligent type wanting strength, they're usually against each other. Other than that approved.
« Last Edit: April 13, 2010, 07:03:47 PM by Hikkaberry »

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Re: 5 Race Requests
« Reply #2 on: April 13, 2010, 07:08:23 PM »
I agree with Hikaru.

Please start trying to use some creativity in your requests, Hawkeye.
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