Placement Test (SMARTAgentKC)

[SMARTAgentKC]

Alright, I'm going to post something I wrote for a story based off the series Code Lyoko known as Shadows of the Internet. I know for a fact that my grammar is most likely beginner quality because I don't speak English I speak Californian Slang American, southern dialetic.

Code Lyoko: Shadows of the Internet
Written by: Kevin Fulmer (SMARTAgentKC)

In an office like throne room, a tan faced Middle Aged human with black hair slicked neatly to the back with two long bangs that hung freely to the side stood at a large window overlooking a city with a red sky. His reflection showing in the window showing calm black eyes but he gave off a vibe of power and control. “Hmm…”

A simple two tap knock was heard on the door a silhouette was in the doorway having been the one that had knocked

“Come” was the man command

A teenage boy about 16 to 17 in a black and purple outfit and emerald green eyes emerged from the silhouette equipped with a blade shaped like a red pointed wing with a black hilt and a large blue gem in the middle at his side sheathed though a metallic pouch on his belt “Father,” The boy said “I have returned”

The man smiled slightly which reflected in the window. “And did you get what I requested, my son”

“Yes Father” was the boy response. “She is right here.” The boy waved his right hand forward and a white hovering and glowing pad slowly entered carrying a pink and silver outfitted teenage girl about 16. The boy walked with the Pad and both stopped at a small set of stairs in front of a large office desk. The boy kneeled down and showed respect to the man holding his right fist in front of himself and lowering his head

“Hmm, Hmm” The Man chuckled while turning and looking at the girl with an expression of delight “Well done my son did you leave the note like I told you to do”

“Yes I did, Father” The boy said in a tone of respect

“Excellent” The man said as he turned back to the window looking at his son through the reflection “Soon my son we shall be rid of the only threat that prevents us from taking over the world.” He chuckled “The Lyoko Warriors thought they got rid of me but I shall let them know I still exist.”

“Father?” The boy questioned still in his kneeled pose “Why do we need to let a few human children who think you are dead know that you exist? Surely they will try to destroy you and me again if they find out.”

The man looked back at his son “Xanatos,” He called the boy by name if he was teaching something to him “the humans have a saying that revenge is a dish best served cold…” He looks to the girl on the platform. “That girl and her friends are your murders and my creator sacrificed himself to destroy me. I must show them that you can not destroy me or those I care about and get away with it… They must pay one way or another. The Lyoko Warrior will be shown that no one and I mean no one destroys XANA and gets away with it.”

Xanatos nodded slightly “I understand Father,” He said “but wouldn’t it be easier to just use this world power and attack them like you used to on Lyoko?”

“It would be my son.” XANA responded then sighed slightly “however this world still believes I am not a hostile threat to the real world and that humans want to destroy this world no matter what the Chosen One said. We must keep that charade up. That is why I’ve captured Aelita and using her to lure the rest of the warriors into my trap.”

Xanatos asked “What if they survive your trap Father?”

XANA said “Then I let them free. If they prove they can adapt when a new challenge is shown then they are worthy to live for now.”

Xanatos nodded again “hmm…”

The girl started stirring on the platform and slowly woke up

Xanatos noticed this and said “Father, she is waking up.”

The girl opened her eyes and tried to move when she noticed she couldn’t due to a force that was generated from the pad “What?”

XANA chuckled and said, “Good Morning Aelita.”

Aelita turned her head to see XANA and suddenly turned fearful “Zh… Zh…” She stuttered.

XANA laughed again, “Yes it’s me, it’s been a while since our last meeting; you look well.”

Aelita was panicked “But how, you, my father he”

XANA said in a calm manner “tried to destroy me using that Multi Agent System…” He turned cross “It almost worked too” He smirked “but a piece of me survived and now I’ve upgraded thanks to this world I discovered just after my supposed deletion”

Aelita looked around “Another Lyoko?”

Xanatos smirked slightly “You wish…”

Aelita tilted her head to see Xanatos “what…” she blinked “William?”

XANA shook his head and smirked “not quite, allow me to introduce you to my son Xanatos”

Xanatos stood up and looked at her with a bit of an evil grin “I am looking forward to meeting your friends that killed me not so long ago…” He said “I owe them a painful death for what they did me”

Aelita blinked “what they did?”

Xanatos said “To bring the kid you called William back to the real world you had to destroy me. My Father’s only son the one he truly cared about.” He unsheathed his blade and held it to Aelita head “I should start with you since it was you who figured out how to do it but…” he removed the blade “I would have much greater pleasure in destroying you in the heat of a battle along with the rest of your friends”

XANA said “You will get your chance my son. However you must be patient.”

Xanatos nodded “Yes Father” He sheathed his blade “How long do you think it will take for them to get here.”

XANA looked at a watch that was on his wrist “Hmm… They should just be getting up now… it is eight o-clock now I expect them within the hour”

Xanatos nodded “If they haven’t shown up by 9:01 then I’ll have to settle for the pleasure of destroying only you Aelita” He started laughing uncontrollably

XANA joined in on the laugh

Aelita stared up into the ceiling of the room and remained silent taking it all in “Somebody Anybody” Her mind screamed “Help ME!”

The laugh could be heard outside of the building as it echoed through a city with a dull red sky with Various XANA Monsters patrolling it, The sound went past that city borders and even to other cities nearby it all with a red tilt to their skies and red paths connecting them all.