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Oshtenbrutal( Osh-Ten-Brutal
« on: January 25, 2012, 11:29:46 PM »

Character Name:---Oschtenbrutal (osh-ten-brutal
Age:--- 30
Gender:--- Male
Race:--- Shadow stalker
Appearance:
Alliance: shadowstalkers

Personality---- Aschtenbrutal is a lone wolf who dosnt like creating emotional
attachments with other people. He is relatively calm and can strategically plan out a situation if need be, but don't tempt him with sin
or he will go completely insane by just the mere scent of sin. He dosnt know exactly what he is or the full extent of his abilities so he tends to go his own way
just to find out exactly what he is, his abilities, or even why he is. Although he dosnt like creating emotional attachments with people, for some reason he tends,
to show a compasionate side when people are in need of help or trouble, He does like to fulfill any of the grudges he has bore withing him his whole life because like anyone
he has a abudence of regrets that hes just itching to atone for.

Inventory ---  Aschtenbrutals primary weapon is a sword that he has learned to imbue with shadow power. He also carries a pouch that that has many different items in it, that help him in different situations that the shadowstalkers created
such as breakable bottles that when release throws different sized shadows around the field giving him a advantage if a area is scarce
in shadows.

Combat Level: 4
- Magic  Level: 4
- Physical Strength: 4

Character's History--- 
Oshtenbrutal was born a gifted shadowstalker. At age 10 he was accepted into the military, at age 15 Oshten created his primary weapon, when he hit 20 he learned his birth name. All of these accomplishments are astounding simply because it took other shadowstalkers 10 years to learn there birth name, then another 10 to create there primary weapon.Oshtens success can be credited to his childhood rival Zetsu. Growing up they would compete with each other on everything, when they both were accepted into the military, that only fueled there already ambitious rivalry with each other.

Oshten and Zetsu ultimately had the same goal, to join the military, but when they both joined the military Oshten and Zetsu had a new dream. Oshten aspired to become member zero, and Zetsu aspired to be a dark ops for a council member. Although both there dreams were admirable one could not help but notice they were for the wrong reasons. Oshten only wanted to be member zero because member zero insists complete obidiance over other fellow shadowstalkers, Zetsu on the other hand wanted to become a dark ops merely to get close to the council members and assassinate each one,one dream Zetsu had that Oshten new nothing about.

After 5 more years of training, member zero approaches Oshten one day and deems him dark ops of member 13.Astounded by this news Oshten cant wait to find Zetsu and rub it in his face. Oshten was about to go look for Zetsu when he remembers that being a dark ops was his dream and if Oshten would have told him, Zetsu would never forgive him, so Oshten decides to stop his search and never aspire to find Zetsu again.

About five months pass after that and Oshten manages to establish a respected relationship with member 13. One night when the council rests, Oshten hears a disturbance in the council chamber. When he opens the council doors Oshten is stunned at what he sees. Member zero is slowly deteriorating laying flat on the floor with Zetsu standing above him with his weapon drawn. Zetsu turns around and greets his old friend when Oshten decides to draw his sword and attack. After Zetsu decides to stop playing around, he delivers a blow that leaves Oshten kneeing down trying to stay alive. Zetsu is about to deliver the fatal blow when he hears footsteps outside the room. Zetsu mumbles something under his breath then jumps out the window leaving the entire council to barge in, having to watch while there member zero deteriatres from existence. With only Oshten to blame for this treason, Oshten is sent to confinement while a emergency council meeting is held with Zetsu righning as the new member zero. While Oshten is trying to contemplate what just aspired, Oshten decides to use his telepathic abilities to telepathically link with Zetsu, before Zetsu manages to push Oshten out of his mind, Oshten is able to disipher two words form Zetsu, kill Oshten. Learning this, Oshten quickly eyes a shadow below a rock outside and teleports to it, now on the run.

Although Oshten may seem to be alone there is still member 13 to account for. Member 13 does not believe that Oshten would do something this dangerous, he new OShtens desire to become member zero, however he knows that no matter the temptation Oshten wants to become member zero by going through the ranks, by climbing the ladder, not by taking the easy way out.Member 13 however does not want to try to defend Oshten in what aspired, for fears of trying to aid a criminal. Since member 13 and Oshten are so close, OShten is able to telepathically link with member 13 for a prolong period of time and vise versa. So member 13 does aids Oshten in tech, ships, a crew, and whatever else he needs on his journey to prove his innocence.


RP Sample (Depending On Combat Level): New to roleplaying, break can I haz?
« Last Edit: February 04, 2012, 08:43:22 PM by Frowny10 »

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Re: Oshtenbrutal( Osh-Ten-Brutal
« Reply #1 on: January 27, 2012, 04:14:42 PM »
Please make the history a few more paragraphs longer, this is so we can assure the development of the character.

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Re: Oshtenbrutal( Osh-Ten-Brutal
« Reply #2 on: January 27, 2012, 07:56:37 PM »
Further the biography and give us a roleplay sample. ALSO, we have a template for characters, GO USE IT!
« Last Edit: January 27, 2012, 07:59:56 PM by ~Hikaru »

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Re: Oshtenbrutal( Osh-Ten-Brutal
« Reply #3 on: February 04, 2012, 08:45:27 PM »
bump, edited <(-_-<)

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Re: Oshtenbrutal( Osh-Ten-Brutal
« Reply #4 on: February 04, 2012, 09:01:30 PM »
Approved.

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Re: Oshtenbrutal( Osh-Ten-Brutal
« Reply #5 on: February 04, 2012, 09:28:33 PM »
Approved.