Ararus Kal Raev'eri

[Admiral Regis Hermitage]

Nowhere does the template say. "This is for new people." or "this is for everyone but Orph."

2 staff members are asking for a simple RP sample. You not doing it is showing us that you can't write one, and therefore cannot roleplay the character.

[Kalorph_]

Well fuck it; I can flesh a small one out in two seconds.

Ararus was a blur as he and his fellow Hellions broke the sound barrier, and then continued to accelerate during their mission on Shore. They were too nimble, and too quick for anything to get a lock on them as they ravaged the planet below. Intense beams of thermal energy swept through the enemy lines as the Hellion Brigade began spread out and focus on their own personally assigned objectives. Each had been designated a target to destroy or an area to cleanse of enemy forces. Activating his AMP Ararus flew into the outer-atmosphere before his tactical VI marked his own target on his HUD; a heavily armored building was being used as a command base and an armory for the native forces. If destroyed they'd lose communications and it would eliminate the commanding officer of the forces they had currently engaged. He stopped and just floated there for a second; upside down with a smile even as the blood rushed to his head. Bending his knees and the rest of his body like he was about to jump off the ground he shot downwards at an incredible speed. A massive sonic boom heralded his take off as he accelerated, but he wasn't slowing down or stopping. It looked like he was going to intentionally crash into the enemy command center.

His armor looked like it was coated in a royal purple flame, and he easily burnt through the top layers of the armor when he made contact. His fist outstretched as he focuses his AMP's destructive energies into a few small areas. His knuckles.

A brilliant flash of purple before a blast of energy ricocheted straight back into the atmosphere; following Ararus trail upwards. A mere backlash of the force the blow had, and when he cut through all the layers of armor and hit the bottom floor; it was as if his first was a bomb, and making contact was the detonator. A gigantic sphere of energy engulfed the nearby area, and anything caught within it was reduced to atoms. When the dust finally settled there stood Ararus; his armor burnt black by the sheer power of the explosion. A crater a mile wide and a couple hundred feet deep was all that was left the command center, but they've only taken out their outlining defenses. The real battle was a thousand miles north, and in the enemies capital city. The Hellion Brigade had been ordered to cut a path through the entire enemy army, and in the process pave a road for Magister ground forces.

The enemy had lost thirteen thousand veterans soldiers in eight minutes, but the Hellion brigade hadn't lost a single soul.

[King Jeebus]

There we go, approved.

[Queen Bright]

The enemy had lost thirteen thousand veterans soldiers in eight minutes, but the Hellion brigade hadn't lost a single soul.

If this had been a real battle you'd be godmodding. Therefore I won't approve it with this sample. The rp sample is supposed to show us how you roleplay the character, not just skill. Instead of posting a sample of that however, you instead elected to show off how much of a badass you think the character is. Which did nothing but show it as overpowered and godmodding.

And NO, I am not being unfair or attacking you with this. That whole damn sample was godmodding.

[Kalorph_]

It was to show samples of the Magister in practice; it's not like I can make a fucking RP sample's attack take two posts to charge.

[Kalorph_]

I'm gonna assume your lack of a post means you've retracted your statement.

All approved; mind moving it?

[Admiral Regis Hermitage]

Im satisfied. Approved.

[Queen Bright]

I'm not. Again, his post was nothing but godmodding. If that's a sample of the character than the character is obviously godmodding.

[Kalorph_]

Again you forget to take into account a charge time that cannot be applied in one post without writing. "And he waited for a second charging his superpowas." It's a post that ignores charge times and doesn't give a fake NPC mind baby a chance to defend itself; who cares? You arguing stupid semantics before the actual worth of the character.

[Queen Bright]

Even taking that into account Orph. Destroy ALL the enemy without even losing ONE person?  That's the part that's freakin' godmodding.

[Admiral Regis Hermitage]

Even taking that into account Orph. Destroy ALL the enemy without even losing ONE person?  That's the part that's freakin' godmodding.

Well not exactly.. US Special forces do it all of the time.

[Kalorph_]

I'm so sorry for not giving the nonexistent player a chance.

[K2]

Approved.