Author Topic: My New Characters (Jeffrey and Angel void) (Read 1957 times)

Zero · « **on:** September 16, 2009, 10:00:59 PM »

Name: Joseph Star
Age: 30
Race: StarClan
Alliance: StarClan
Biography: He was spirited away by his mother the Empress of the StarClan Angel Star when she realized that she was getting sick. So she took him to a family with the last name Korr who weren?t very rich but were excellent at fighting. She then dropped him off that day and never came back to get him. He studied and as the years progressed he learned to control his force and magic and his skill with the Knight Sword Energy Blade he built when he traveled through the republic and obtained use of the force.
Equipment:
Magic Level: 4
Force Level: 5
Appearance: http://www.tektek.org/avatar/31150297

Gaserlake · « **Reply #1 on:** September 17, 2009, 08:22:26 PM »

Approved.

Nisorin · « **Reply #2 on:** September 17, 2009, 11:50:57 PM »

Biography's too short I think.

Zero · « **Reply #3 on:** September 18, 2009, 05:40:48 PM »

New bio

He was spirited away by his mother the Empress of the StarClan Angel Star when she realized that she was getting sick. So she took him to a family with the last name Korr who weren?t very rich but were excellent at fighting. She then dropped him off that day and never came back to get him. He studied and as the years progressed he learned to control his force and magic and his skill with the Knight Sword Energy Blade he built when he traveled through the republic and obtained use of the force.

Nisorin · « **Reply #4 on:** September 18, 2009, 08:26:04 PM »

Looks good, just do me a favor and detail how he himself looks.

Zero · « **Reply #5 on:** September 18, 2009, 08:55:29 PM »

http://www.tektek.org/avatar/31150297 is what he looks like sans the blades.

Nisorin · « **Reply #6 on:** September 18, 2009, 08:58:12 PM »

Edit that into the original post and you're good.

Zero · « **Reply #7 on:** September 18, 2009, 09:46:43 PM »

It isn't letting me edit for some odd reason Nisorin.

Gaserlake · « **Reply #8 on:** September 19, 2009, 10:36:46 PM »

Edited it for you, Hawk.

Zero · « **Reply #9 on:** September 27, 2009, 10:03:00 AM »

Name: Lena Solaris
Age: 30
Race: StarClan
Alliance: StarClan
Biography: She was born on a world full of slavers who quickly enslaved her the first chance they got and then a mere teenager came and killed all her slavers with his bare hands and then she began to date him and now that she is 30, she is the empress of the StarClan
Weapons: Kunai, Shruiken, Scrolls as well as a pink lightsaber
Equipment: None
Magic Level: 1
Force Level: 5
Appearance:

Gaserlake · « **Reply #10 on:** September 27, 2009, 04:48:07 PM »

Appearance?

Zero · « **Reply #11 on:** September 29, 2009, 05:05:56 PM »

She usually wears a blue silk dress.

Nisorin · « **Reply #12 on:** September 29, 2009, 06:41:29 PM »

Hair color? Eye color? Skin color? Height? Weight?

Zero · « **Reply #13 on:** September 29, 2009, 10:32:25 PM »

Scrap Her. I will just redo it again.

Zero · « **Reply #14 on:** October 01, 2009, 10:29:19 PM »

Name: Lena Star
Age: 30
Race: StarClan
Alliance: StarClan
Biography: She was born to a slave family in the outer rim of the republic where the republic doesn?t exist. She was brutally beaten for not delivering the food the slavers wanted. However hope came to the planet when the StarClan came. Joseph wasn?t one who would tolerate slavery as the slavers would soon find out and it cost them their lives, their money and their world.
Weapons: 3 bladed knife with handle inside Circle. Pink Lightsaber.
Equipment:
Magic Level: 2
Force Level: 5
Appearance: She usually wears a light blue dress, has piercing green eyes about 5?1 and has auburn colored hair.

Gaserlake · « **Reply #15 on:** October 01, 2009, 10:33:43 PM »

Approved.

Nisorin · « **Reply #16 on:** October 01, 2009, 11:36:06 PM »

No equipment? Well, approved.

Zero · « **Reply #17 on:** October 07, 2009, 04:41:34 PM »

A 3rd

Name: John Timpani
Age: 20
Race: He is a cross between StarClanner and Sage.
Alliance: StarClan
Biography: He when he was but a mere boy at 7 was hired by Joseph as his personal elite body guard. Now at age 20, He leads the guardian corps which were his idea of protecting Joseph because he thought that one man would fair worse than 10 or 20,000 to protect Joseph. He has had extensive training in both magic and the force and spent 7 years perfecting each. He is also skilled at a few martial arts. His power though he was born with it naturally being at a high level since his mother was a sage, and his father was a force using StarClanner.
Weapons: Kenarachi (This is a circle with three knife blades on it. The Handle is in the middle of the blade.) Katana Energy Blades x 2, Lightsaber, Twin Assault Laser Rifles and Twin Assault Laser Pistols
Equipment: Comm Link, Teleport Belt, Blast Ring, Gravitrax.
Magic Level: 5
Force Level: 5
Appearance: Usually he wears white robes with a hood that covers his face so no one can see who he is. Underneath the robes is a Kevlar vest along with a CEJS and on his arms are special bands that fire stun bolts.

Nisorin · « **Reply #18 on:** October 07, 2009, 07:29:15 PM »

It would take a lot longer than 7 years to become a level five in either magic or the Force. 14 years is not enough to have a level five skill with them both. Maybe, emphasis on maybe one, but not both.

Zero · « **Reply #19 on:** October 08, 2009, 05:58:34 PM »

There is a reason he has both at 5. StarClan sometimes have high force power. Sages have High magic ability.

Orph · « **Reply #20 on:** October 08, 2009, 07:02:55 PM »

Yes, but since he is only half of each he would be around 2-3 at the most. But with training he could reach a level five.

Gaserlake · « **Reply #21 on:** October 08, 2009, 08:28:46 PM »

Upping the age would make more sense, probably in the hundreds would make perfect sense.

[16:55] PhoenixLord: Hey
[16:55] PhoenixLord: how could I get him to have level 5?
[17:02] PhoenixLord: on GE Nisorin disagrees
[17:02] PhoenixLord: so maybe if I up the age?
[17:02] PhoenixLord: to about 45?
[17:27] Gaserlake: No.
[17:27] Gaserlake: Older than that.
[17:27] PhoenixLord: How old?
[17:27] Gaserlake: in the hundreds
[17:27] PhoenixLord: In the hundreds?
[17:27] Gaserlake: yes
[17:28] Gaserlake: why?
[17:28] Gaserlake: You can't live that long?
[17:28] PhoenixLord: Good Point.
[17:28] PhoenixLord: I guess I could make him 700
[17:28] PhoenixLord: and have served StarClan Emperors before Joseph

Zero · « **Reply #22 on:** October 08, 2009, 08:55:30 PM »

Name: John Timpani
Age: 20
Race: He is a cross between StarClanner and Sage.
Alliance: StarClan
Biography: He when he was but a mere boy at 170 was hired by Jeffrey as his personal elite body guard. Now at age 20, He leads the guardian corps which were his idea of protecting Jeffrey at that time. because he thought that one man would fair worse than 10 or 20,000 to protect Joseph. He has had extensive training in both magic and the force and spent 70 years perfecting each. He is also skilled at a few martial arts. His power though he was born with it naturally being at a high level since his mother was a sage, and his father was a force using StarClanner. However he intends to protect Joseph as he did to Jeffrey and all the previous emperors.
Weapons: Kenarachi (This is a circle with three knife blades on it. The Handle is in the middle of the blade.) Katana Energy Blades x 2, Lightsaber, Twin Assault Laser Rifles and Twin Assault Laser Pistols
Equipment: Comm Link, Teleport Belt, Blast Ring, Gravitrax.
Magic Level: 5
Force Level: 5
Appearance: Usually he wears white robes with a hood that covers his face so no one can see who he is. Underneath the robes is a Kevlar vest along with a CEJS and on his arms are special bands that fire stun bolts.

Nisorin · « **Reply #23 on:** October 08, 2009, 11:18:28 PM »

...The age still says he's 20...

Gaserlake · « **Reply #24 on:** October 09, 2009, 11:54:00 PM »

Yeah. Unapproved until you explain why the character is so powerful with magic and the force.