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Re: Arrarrorians
« Reply #25 on: July 14, 2011, 02:25:01 PM »
Added some more information.

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Re: Arrarrorians
« Reply #26 on: July 14, 2011, 02:34:02 PM »
Still could be improved upon greatly, but as I said before, approved.

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Re: Arrarrorians
« Reply #27 on: July 18, 2011, 06:01:52 PM »
Now all that remains is one more approval.


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Re: Arrarrorians
« Reply #28 on: September 03, 2011, 03:35:41 PM »
Bump, someone approve or deny.

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Re: Arrarrorians
« Reply #29 on: September 05, 2011, 12:23:26 AM »
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They naturally produce AAM stronger than that of sages.

Remove it. Races don't naturally produce AAM. AAM IS NOT natural . It's technology unless you went and pulled a K2 and used technology to change your inner whatevers to produce it. But born producing it? In that case you have to explain what it is, how it interacts with the body, why the race was born with it, how its produced, etc. Fill it out or remove it.

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