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Offline Zero

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« on: February 02, 2012, 05:40:38 PM »
Territory Name: Imperia
Territory Description: Celso realized the need for the Neo Narrikian Empire to have a world and since Setus Prime had fallen a new one would be made. Sending his ships including quite numerous frigates and corvettes supplied by the K Empire, debris of several planets would be collected as would meteors, asteroids and other space junk. It would be shaped into a planet and environment would be made on the planet but before it was finished Celso had fused part of his mind to the planet. It means that now whatever happens on the planet has to have his permission or not at all. This includes but is not limited to those who would use black marks or other similar tactics to conquer the planet.  This was not an easy task and Celso cannot repeat the process or he will die.  The Structures on the planet have become highly advanced ones using modern and ancient to be more potent. What he used to connect to the planet was a bit of his own mind and some magic.  The part of his mind Celso used was the compassion that has been sealed which allows him through the seal the K Empire put on him to have absolute control over the planet.  Celso has also added a feature to the planet to cancel the abilities and weapons and other things of those not loyal to him who come here.
Galaxy: Rakon
Ownership: Neo Narrikian Empire
 

« Last Edit: February 04, 2012, 09:44:36 PM by Zero »

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Re: Imperia
« Reply #1 on: February 04, 2012, 09:12:17 PM »
Bump!

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Re: Imperia
« Reply #2 on: February 04, 2012, 09:34:56 PM »
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Re: Imperia
« Reply #3 on: February 04, 2012, 09:41:23 PM »
One thing wrong and one thing you need to realize you did.

1. How can it be fatal to just Sages of Anrufe variety? Their DNA? Then you need to explain where you got it all and which ones. Their magic signature? Same thing with DNA. The fact they're Sages? Then you'd be making it fatal to all sages yet no sages because not everyone is the same.

2. If he used his being/his spirit know this. You are providing a direct link to his spirit. If the planet is attacked you are leaving him open to spells that can link to his spirit if the right mage comes along.

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Re: Imperia
« Reply #4 on: February 04, 2012, 09:44:44 PM »
Edited.

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Re: Imperia
« Reply #5 on: February 08, 2012, 05:30:54 PM »
Void this, I have a better idea.