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New First Characters
« on: December 20, 2009, 09:48:55 PM »
Name: Jonathan Talon  J.T.  Star.
Age: 1500 but appears to be 15.
Race:   StarClanner
Alliance:   Orpen Tideus (Ruler)
Biography:   Jonathan Talon Star was the Only other Star that Veritas found on his journey throughout the galaxy. In case of the death of  Veritas he would take charge of the Orpen Tideus if Duro also died.  That happened and so he came out of hiding to rule the Orpen Tideus.
Weapons:   Katana etched with mystic runes.  Magic Glove.   Sonic Collar (Artifact)    Shruikens,  Knives and a boomerang, Three bladed knife.
Equipment: Magic Cape.  Other than that, Nothing.
Magic Level: 5
Force Level: 5
Appearance:   He is usually clad in white body armor reinforced with Kevlar and other types of plating up to the neck and wears a mask that covers his face so no one knows what he truly looks like.  5?3  and has black hair,  a scar running from his shoulder down to his leg.  It actually contains a knife.   He wears a special cape that can make him invisible to people.   He also wears a crown that can fire energy blasts out of it at random. 


*Duro is still alive*   



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Re: New First Characters
« Reply #1 on: December 20, 2009, 09:53:26 PM »
A 15-year-old-in-appearance?
Weird.

Well wersher bersher, I approve. You need another admins approval as this is not your first character.

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Re: New First Characters
« Reply #2 on: December 20, 2009, 10:27:27 PM »
Don't know about Duro, but the character is approved.

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Re: New First Characters
« Reply #3 on: December 22, 2009, 05:13:46 PM »
orph made a valuable point I over looked.

[17:11] elkune15: Why the hell does Hawk have a double five character?
[17:11] elkune15: Five in magic and Force?
[17:11] Iamawhale2323: what the hell
[17:11] Iamawhale2323: which one
[17:11] elkune15: JT.
[17:11] elkune15: The one you accepted.

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Re: New First Characters
« Reply #4 on: December 22, 2009, 06:59:34 PM »
I do not approve. Characters with level five magic AND level five Force ability are only permissible during certain extenuating circumstances, and even then only during Events.
Seeing the world through a child's eyes is truly a unique experience. It helps you to retrieve that sense of awe, magic and wonder that you lost as you lost your innocence. Tell me, when was the last time that you thought of those childhood dreams? You know, the ones that you used to spend all your time wondering and fantasizing about? Have you forgotten them so easily? Have you forgotten what it felt like to see something for the first time, to see the magic in the mundane? Everyone says you should take the time to 'Stop and smell the roses'. But you should also take the time to look for the fairies, embrace the wind and enjoy the rain. Just once today, stop for a moment and look into that little piece of nature you pass everyday. Perhaps you may see something you did not notice before.

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Re: New First Characters
« Reply #5 on: December 22, 2009, 07:01:14 PM »
Abel has em, but can only use on at a time. OTHERWISE HIS BRAIN WOULD EXPLODE.
The world is a mess..and I just need to..rule it.

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Re: New First Characters
« Reply #6 on: December 22, 2009, 07:22:15 PM »
Ah Man. Gotta redo him. 

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Re: New First Characters
« Reply #7 on: December 22, 2009, 07:23:22 PM »
Name: Jonathan Talon  J.T.  Star.
Age: 1500 but appears to be 15.
Race:   StarClanner
Alliance:   Orpen Tideus (Ruler)
Biography:   Jonathan Talon Star was the Only other Star that Veritas found on his journey throughout the galaxy. In case of the death of  Veritas he would take charge of the Orpen Tideus if Duro also died.  That happened and so he came out of hiding to rule the Orpen Tideus.
Weapons:   Katana etched with mystic runes.  Magic Glove.   Sonic Collar (Artifact)    Shruikens,  Knives and a boomerang, Three bladed knife.
Equipment: Magic Cape.  Other than that, Nothing.
Magic Level: 5
Force Level: 4.5
Appearance:   He is usually clad in white body armor reinforced with Kevlar and other types of plating up to the neck and wears a mask that covers his face so no one knows what he truly looks like.  5?3  and has black hair,  a scar running from his shoulder down to his leg.  It actually contains a knife.   He wears a special cape that can make him invisible to people.   He also wears a crown that can fire energy blasts out of it at random. 

That better?  Oh and he will never have magic or the force. 

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Re: New First Characters
« Reply #8 on: December 22, 2009, 07:28:17 PM »
Name: Jonathan Talon  J.T.  Star.
Age: 1500 but appears to be 15.
Race:   StarClanner
Alliance:   Orpen Tideus (Ruler)
Biography:   Jonathan Talon Star was the Only other Star that Veritas found on his journey throughout the galaxy. In case of the death of  Veritas he would take charge of the Orpen Tideus if Duro also died.  That happened and so he came out of hiding to rule the Orpen Tideus.
Weapons:   Katana etched with mystic runes.  Magic Glove.   Sonic Collar (Artifact)    Shruikens,  Knives and a boomerang, Three bladed knife.
Equipment: Magic Cape.  Other than that, Nothing.
Magic Level: 5
Force Level: 4.5
Appearance:   He is usually clad in white body armor reinforced with Kevlar and other types of plating up to the neck and wears a mask that covers his face so no one knows what he truly looks like.  5?3  and has black hair,  a scar running from his shoulder down to his leg.  It actually contains a knife.   He wears a special cape that can make him invisible to people.   He also wears a crown that can fire energy blasts out of it at random. 

That better?  Oh and he will never have magic or the force. 
Make the Force 3.
It won't matter anyway hes about to be killed in Outerverse.

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Re: New First Characters
« Reply #9 on: December 22, 2009, 07:38:47 PM »
I agree with Sirius, however you cannot use Magic AND Force simultaneously. In other words, you have to wait until any effects created through magic (webs, fire, etc) are gone before you can start using the Force, and vice versa.
Seeing the world through a child's eyes is truly a unique experience. It helps you to retrieve that sense of awe, magic and wonder that you lost as you lost your innocence. Tell me, when was the last time that you thought of those childhood dreams? You know, the ones that you used to spend all your time wondering and fantasizing about? Have you forgotten them so easily? Have you forgotten what it felt like to see something for the first time, to see the magic in the mundane? Everyone says you should take the time to 'Stop and smell the roses'. But you should also take the time to look for the fairies, embrace the wind and enjoy the rain. Just once today, stop for a moment and look into that little piece of nature you pass everyday. Perhaps you may see something you did not notice before.

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Re: New First Characters
« Reply #10 on: December 22, 2009, 07:40:18 PM »
He's dead. Already.
The world is a mess..and I just need to..rule it.

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Re: New First Characters
« Reply #11 on: December 22, 2009, 09:16:35 PM »
Lolz.

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Re: New First Characters
« Reply #12 on: December 22, 2009, 09:30:33 PM »
Thanks to Hikky and I.