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Re: Rest o' my characters
« Reply #25 on: March 21, 2010, 04:07:53 AM »
You didn't have to separate them, Red. It's fine, Hawk had no reason to ask you to break them apart.

Anyway, next time just make it easy for us to know which ones are already approved, and which are pending requests.
Seeing the world through a child's eyes is truly a unique experience. It helps you to retrieve that sense of awe, magic and wonder that you lost as you lost your innocence. Tell me, when was the last time that you thought of those childhood dreams? You know, the ones that you used to spend all your time wondering and fantasizing about? Have you forgotten them so easily? Have you forgotten what it felt like to see something for the first time, to see the magic in the mundane? Everyone says you should take the time to 'Stop and smell the roses'. But you should also take the time to look for the fairies, embrace the wind and enjoy the rain. Just once today, stop for a moment and look into that little piece of nature you pass everyday. Perhaps you may see something you did not notice before.

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Re: Rest o' my characters
« Reply #26 on: March 21, 2010, 12:34:27 PM »
Eh, I kinda had said it. Anyways, the last one is still pending, and unless Im mistaken, I THINK I've only requested one character this week, Flora. Which, by tomorrow, I wouldn't have requested for in the same week. XP
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Re: Rest o' my characters
« Reply #27 on: March 22, 2010, 03:25:47 PM »
...Denera still needs to be approved guys...Its the last one put up here...
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Re: Rest o' my characters
« Reply #28 on: March 22, 2010, 03:49:13 PM »
Looks good to me. First approval!
Seeing the world through a child's eyes is truly a unique experience. It helps you to retrieve that sense of awe, magic and wonder that you lost as you lost your innocence. Tell me, when was the last time that you thought of those childhood dreams? You know, the ones that you used to spend all your time wondering and fantasizing about? Have you forgotten them so easily? Have you forgotten what it felt like to see something for the first time, to see the magic in the mundane? Everyone says you should take the time to 'Stop and smell the roses'. But you should also take the time to look for the fairies, embrace the wind and enjoy the rain. Just once today, stop for a moment and look into that little piece of nature you pass everyday. Perhaps you may see something you did not notice before.

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Re: Rest o' my characters
« Reply #29 on: March 24, 2010, 01:27:46 PM »
...Anyone else?
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Re: Rest o' my characters
« Reply #30 on: March 25, 2010, 09:01:39 AM »
...Hello?
*echo, echo*
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Re: Rest o' my characters
« Reply #31 on: March 25, 2010, 03:32:23 PM »
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Re: Rest o' my characters
« Reply #32 on: March 27, 2010, 12:15:46 AM »
...I feel like Im spamming characters, yet I only have five, six with this next one, and I've been following the rules concerning applying for characters(no more than two a week). Its weird. XP
Decided to import a character I liked, but never really got to use, from CE.

Name:Lauren Vain(notice a pattern in the last names, yet? XP)
Age:19
Race:Human...?
Alliance:Freelance currently, but could be pursuaded to join another faction...
Bio:Lauren was a orphan for most of her life. If asked about it, she'd reply that she doesn't care. Obviously, her parents didn't care about her, so she couldn't be bothered to give a damn about them. That was that. So, she lived in a orphanage. Not the best place, but the people there were good people; the only problem was a small lack of money, but the donations were enough to keep them all alive.

Now, the orphanage had a odd policy, that they allowed the children to go to places in the city unchaperoned. They couldn't always actually go with the children due to understaffment, but they couldn't make them stay in one place. Its not like they were being irresponsible or anything; the children were only allowed to go to certain places, which they'd negotiated with the mayor of the city to provide increased security. Lauren usually went to a market.

On one of these days, at the age of 5-6, she went there with a small bit of money, a few of this place's equivelent to the quarter. On this particular time, a virus had been going through the security teams that usually patroled this area, and so the market didn't have the usual security. While looking for something to buy, she was grabbed by a man, as she was crossing a alley. He and his 'friends' tried to muffle her, and stuff the little girl into a bag to be sold into slavery, and then get the f*ck out of there before a security personell came to investigate the screams to find a bunch of kidnappers. As they were about to leave, Lauren in the bag, one of them screamed. The rest hardly noticed, as they were used to the people they forced into slavery all the time, and had in fact turned only to find out why their friend was taking so long. When they saw it, however, any fears of being charged with slaving were soon changed for something else...As a skeletal hand had broken through the concrete of the alley, and was pulling the rest of the skeleton out of the ground. They turned to see still more, some brandishing bone spears and axes, as they climbed out of the earth and marched to the slavers, weapons at the ready.
The remains found at the site were described by police the next day as,"Unidentifiable hunks of flesh and bone, that seem to have been ripped, shredded, and torn to peices by bone claws".

After the skeletons had butchered the men, they turned their attention to the small struggling bag. One of them reached for it, and oh-so-carefully tore it open, being sure not to harm the child inside. While Lauren probably should have feared her skeletal saviors, being a mere child of not even 7 years, she giggled at the sight of them. These skeletons, while not in decay(everything that could possibly rot was gone from them), were bloodied and horrifying, yet made this girl laugh...For you see, she didn't know it entirely then, but she'd caused it. She was a born necromantress. As time went on, she learned to better control this gift, and while at first the people at the orphanage thought she might abuse her power to take over, as it turned out, their kindness over the years had been imprinted to her, and these undead became guardians. In fact, she'd been mocked by a few about it for her 'friends', which almost always triggered the skeletons to attack these people before Lauren would invariably tell them that it wasn't worth killing a few bullies. As she grew older, she started experimenting with her magic, and tried to see if she could bring the dead back to life. By doing this, she found that she could indeed raise the dead, but not completely alive; the closest she ever got was a rotting revenant that was apparently late for a cup of tea...Yet this person in life hated tea. And the zombie had no personality, just kept mumbling that it needed to find its tea, over and over as it walked through the town. Well, technically it never got out of the building, as Lauren had removed whatever force she implanted in the poor creature, so as not to mock the dead.

At the age of eighteen, she left the orphanage to continue her studies of her magic, and hopefully learn to master necromancy to truly bring back the dead. She did many more experiments, and noted that plants seemed to be the only thing she was truly able to bring back. All animal life invariably ended up as a skeleton or a zombie, never truly alive. She didn't give up, and often looked around markets to find things that might help her. Only one such item has worked...A small black book, with unintelligible runes covering its pages. She didn't buy it, but rather it was given to her by a old man who walked with a cane. At least, she presumed he was old, and his voice was raspy, and, again, he had a cane. No part of his body was shown, as he had clearly taken measures so that nobody would see his body. He had beckoned for her, and when she went to him, he said only this:"My name is unimportant, as is my goals. I can see around you the aura of a kindred spirit, however...And so, I have not waited this past week here for nothing. Take this book, and use its power to aid in your fate..."

She took the book he'd offered her, and without a word he left, ignoring all attempts at communication. As if to answer her last question of who he was, his glove fell off...Revealing a necrotic, rotted hand. Quick as a flash, he retreived the glove and put it back on, and continued to walk away. She has only that book left of him, that undead...Whatever he was. Clearly a sentient undead, much farther than she'd achieved, but she couldn't place it...He'd claimed she was a kindred spirit...
Soon after, figuring that she'd have no luck with her studies on that planet, she bought a ticket on a space station, and traveled the galaxy, in hope of finding a cure for death. Her current home is on a very vegetated planet(cant remember its name...Not Terraguove, I think, but some other planet with lots of plant life), and keeps her own garden in it. She travels reguarly, but always makes sure her plants get enough water.

Weapons:She carries a pocketknife with her, in case she's jumped or her skeletons cant protect her.
Equipment:She carries with her, among other useless trinkets, a black book filled with arcane runes. She cant read a word of it, but she has noticed it aids her in her magic.
Magic Level:3
Appearance:She has dark blue hair, not dark enough to look black, but still pretty dark, and her eyes are red. When she uses her power, her eyes glow with a purple light. She doesn't have a usual attire, and cant seem to follow a dress code, always wearing either customized clothes or just whatever looks good.
« Last Edit: March 28, 2010, 08:48:24 PM by Pokemon Master Red »
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Re: Rest o' my characters
« Reply #33 on: March 27, 2010, 11:46:00 PM »
Uh...Guys?
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Re: Rest o' my characters
« Reply #34 on: March 28, 2010, 12:35:03 AM »
It's a bit difficult to read. Do you mind if I edit in some blank lines and bold the category names to make it easier?
Seeing the world through a child's eyes is truly a unique experience. It helps you to retrieve that sense of awe, magic and wonder that you lost as you lost your innocence. Tell me, when was the last time that you thought of those childhood dreams? You know, the ones that you used to spend all your time wondering and fantasizing about? Have you forgotten them so easily? Have you forgotten what it felt like to see something for the first time, to see the magic in the mundane? Everyone says you should take the time to 'Stop and smell the roses'. But you should also take the time to look for the fairies, embrace the wind and enjoy the rain. Just once today, stop for a moment and look into that little piece of nature you pass everyday. Perhaps you may see something you did not notice before.

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Re: Rest o' my characters
« Reply #35 on: March 28, 2010, 12:07:20 PM »
Sure.
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Re: Rest o' my characters
« Reply #36 on: March 28, 2010, 03:31:07 PM »
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Re: Rest o' my characters
« Reply #37 on: March 28, 2010, 08:35:31 PM »
How come it looks like the bio's been cut off?
Seeing the world through a child's eyes is truly a unique experience. It helps you to retrieve that sense of awe, magic and wonder that you lost as you lost your innocence. Tell me, when was the last time that you thought of those childhood dreams? You know, the ones that you used to spend all your time wondering and fantasizing about? Have you forgotten them so easily? Have you forgotten what it felt like to see something for the first time, to see the magic in the mundane? Everyone says you should take the time to 'Stop and smell the roses'. But you should also take the time to look for the fairies, embrace the wind and enjoy the rain. Just once today, stop for a moment and look into that little piece of nature you pass everyday. Perhaps you may see something you did not notice before.

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Re: Rest o' my characters
« Reply #38 on: March 28, 2010, 08:47:20 PM »
Ah, blast. It looks like when I was merging the posts(I was using the DSi, so there was a limit to the amount of characters I could use) I accidentally put the parts of the bio in the wrong place. Sorry about that. XP
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Re: Rest o' my characters
« Reply #39 on: March 28, 2010, 09:45:29 PM »
Nisorin? I fixed it, ya know...
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Re: Rest o' my characters
« Reply #40 on: March 29, 2010, 12:33:54 AM »
Sorry, got caught up in the tournament. Looks fine to me, Approved!
Seeing the world through a child's eyes is truly a unique experience. It helps you to retrieve that sense of awe, magic and wonder that you lost as you lost your innocence. Tell me, when was the last time that you thought of those childhood dreams? You know, the ones that you used to spend all your time wondering and fantasizing about? Have you forgotten them so easily? Have you forgotten what it felt like to see something for the first time, to see the magic in the mundane? Everyone says you should take the time to 'Stop and smell the roses'. But you should also take the time to look for the fairies, embrace the wind and enjoy the rain. Just once today, stop for a moment and look into that little piece of nature you pass everyday. Perhaps you may see something you did not notice before.

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Re: Rest o\' my characters
« Reply #41 on: April 06, 2010, 05:16:26 PM »
Name: Void/Null
Age: Immeasurable.
Race: Emptiness Embodiment Fragment. Just that, they're fragments of Emptiness Incarnate.
Alliance: They seems to be currently allied with Pedalo for unknown reasons...
Biography: Void and Null are fragments of the Embodiment of Emptiness. They were made, because while the embodiment was indeed powerful, it grew lonely of its isolation, and split itself into two different beings, Void and Null. Void was given the Embodiment's negative magic proficiency, while Null was given its proficiency in positive magic. Void became the 'dark' side of Emptiness, while Null became the 'light' side of Emptiness. There were a few things the being hadn't realized, however-that it had never attributed any good into them, that its own mind would not survive the separation into two beings, and that it hadn't given them the protection against its own power that it had separated itself to gain. The result of the separation were two beings that could wield the magic of emptiness and of whom had no inclination to help others. After they were made and they first saw each other, full of despair and lacking any positive emotions or even any personality, they turned on one another. For countless millennia, the two fought each other for lack of any reason other than the fact that the other existed, ignoring pain or tiredness for fear of being destroyed when they showed such weakness. As they fought each other, they formed personalities, and eventually began to wonder why they were fighting in the first place. The only reason they ever came to a stop was that they both realized that the closer they were, the more powerful they became, which led them to the conclusion that without the other, they'd become literally powerless. After this, they decided to stay together, and then roamed the plane they existed in. One day, they found a way out of this pocket dimension, and into our own plane of existence. As they roamed around, they spread the feelings of despair, depression, loneliness, and other emotions of the sort. They have recently allied themselves with Pedalo, for reasons unknown to anyone other than themselves. The reason? Because they are attracted to the growing evil inside of his heart...
Weapons:
Void: Dark Gear, a weapon that symbolizes the fact that he and Null are no longer a single being. With it, all Dark magic he uses, especially those related to the power of despair, are strengthened, and it is a powerful close-combat weapon in its own right.
Null: Light Gear, a weapon that symbolizes that he and Void are no longer a single being. With it, all Light magic he uses, especially those related to the power of loneliness, are strengthened, and it is a powerful close-combat weapon in its own right.
Equipment: Nothing as far as I can think up.
Magic Level: 4
Appearance:
Void:
Null:

Other Notes:The further they are apart, the weaker they become, and if one if killed, the other loses most of his power. They can revive each other with whatever power they'd have left, but before they can do that, the surviving one of them would have to get himself and the other's corpse to a safe location, as the process takes anywhere from about a week to three months IC, depending upon how grievous the injury is or any lingering effects from any magic. If they are both killed, thats the end of both of them, but only if they're BOTH killed.
« Last Edit: April 06, 2010, 09:28:58 PM by Pokemon Master Red »
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Re: Rest o' my characters
« Reply #42 on: April 07, 2010, 05:58:28 PM »
I'd say they look good but I am not a member of the Staff.

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Re: Rest o' my characters
« Reply #43 on: April 07, 2010, 11:16:14 PM »
Void/Null approved
« Last Edit: April 07, 2010, 11:16:49 PM by Nisorin »
Seeing the world through a child's eyes is truly a unique experience. It helps you to retrieve that sense of awe, magic and wonder that you lost as you lost your innocence. Tell me, when was the last time that you thought of those childhood dreams? You know, the ones that you used to spend all your time wondering and fantasizing about? Have you forgotten them so easily? Have you forgotten what it felt like to see something for the first time, to see the magic in the mundane? Everyone says you should take the time to 'Stop and smell the roses'. But you should also take the time to look for the fairies, embrace the wind and enjoy the rain. Just once today, stop for a moment and look into that little piece of nature you pass everyday. Perhaps you may see something you did not notice before.