Author Topic: Griffin Race Request + Character Request (Read 1487 times)

Zero · « **on:** July 28, 2010, 02:15:01 PM »

Name: Tremor Magma
Age: He appears to be a teen but is actually 1000 years old.
Race: Griffin Sage (See below)
Alliance: None yet.
Biography:
Born underground on Militaria which contained a paradise like area that was concealed from the Lorcar by means of magic and also from the former inhabitants by means of magic, Tremor was a rather unique Griffin. He had a certain trait that other griffins had but his trait namely the ability to do Umbrakensis and Photokensis was far stronger than that of other Griffins.

As he grew older he was taught magic by his mom and dad by the time he turned ten years old. Slayers came to capture the griffins and kill them and it was then that he took his first lives by killing them with the power of darkness and using his Umbrakensis to strangle them with their own inner darkness to death.

More came the next year and he used Photokensis by accident and rendered all of them blind before teleporting them off world earning him more respect from the griffins. At 11 he learned how to perform a variety of spells his specialties being in those that involved either light or darkness as he could use them both easily without magic anyway.

He eventually found a library on Militaria and studied magic. He was caught though by the parents of Perridas and sealed inside Perridas in hopes that he would give the child a magical boost. However no such thing occurred. When he managed to whittle away at the seal Ace tried to reseal him with Assassin's help. However things worked out as Ace had secretly hoped and he now had a Griffin he himself could control.

Weapons: http://browse.deviantart.com/?q=Axe&order=9&offset=24#/dcmsrk This axe except the handle is made from copper.
Equipment: Various scrolls, talismans, potions, tablets and books and tomes. Also has a few amulets and crystals.
Magic Level: 5
Appearance:
http://browse.deviantart.com/?qh=&section=&global=1&q=Griffin#/d2m67v5 When in the Griffin form he looks like this.
When in Sage Form
http://browse.deviantart.com/?qh=&section=&global=1&q=Mage#/d1pobj5 He looks like that.

Griffin
A beast from legend and lore. Like the legends once it mates and the mate dies it remains single for life after that, never seeking another mate. It does indeed have the body of a lion and the head of an eagle but it also has wings and claws. The claws are metallic as are the wings. It is one of the most powerful magical beasts there are and has the power of a sage at it's disposal. Besides that however it can do Umbrakensis and Photokensis.

The griffins found it wise to take Human form during the time of the egyptians on earth and to flee the planet as the egyptions worshipped them a little too much for their taste. Leaving to other worlds the Griffins made their own civilization which they eventually abandoned and most of them hid or died off. Only about 120 Griffins remain.
Over time they developed the mechanism so that they would keep secrets of whoever told the secrets to them until either they were dying or the person granted permission.

Zero · « **Reply #1 on:** July 28, 2010, 06:44:54 PM »

Bump!

K2 · « **Reply #2 on:** July 28, 2010, 07:20:32 PM »

Why were they created in the realm?

Zero · « **Reply #3 on:** July 28, 2010, 07:22:07 PM »

Knowing that the Griffin would be the target of the Phoenix, God wisely put them inside the Realm of Delatrius so that they would be safe. Exposed to the magic of the people there, the magic inside the Griffins activated and they were transformed into sages themselves fully complete with soul organs.

Read the bio

K2 · « **Reply #4 on:** July 28, 2010, 09:00:45 PM »

Approved.

Queen Bright · « **Reply #5 on:** July 28, 2010, 10:02:05 PM »

Not approved... Why would they be a target of the Phoenix?? WTF? No.

Zero · « **Reply #6 on:** July 28, 2010, 10:15:47 PM »

Fixed.

Gaserlake · « **Reply #7 on:** July 28, 2010, 11:16:42 PM »

Approved.

Queen Bright · « **Reply #8 on:** July 31, 2010, 09:36:01 AM »

Um... why was this approved? He didn't even say how he found the realm of Deletrius. And there's no time in Deletrius at all. Time doesn't pass there. So even if he lived there (not saying that's allowed.) He would still only be 50.

Also... don't say Hikari would fight him if she would not. That's character control.

And another thing. You mention healing in the bio, but don't give it in abilities. Um, what?
And did you even research Griffins? Because if you're making all this up without even giving some base to it, you're lame -.-

Zero · « **Reply #9 on:** July 31, 2010, 09:38:54 AM »

If I edit the bio, will you stop complaining?

Gaserlake · « **Reply #10 on:** July 31, 2010, 05:04:26 PM »

Hik has a point with Deletrius and Hikari. I'll be removing my approval until that's fixed. Hikaru still has her personal approval, if this includes Hikari.

K2 · « **Reply #11 on:** July 31, 2010, 05:30:55 PM »

I remove my approval.

Zero · « **Reply #12 on:** July 31, 2010, 11:01:43 PM »

Fixed

K2 · « **Reply #13 on:** August 01, 2010, 03:44:52 PM »

Again, did you research the griffins?

Zero · « **Reply #14 on:** August 01, 2010, 03:46:05 PM »

Yes.

K2 · « **Reply #15 on:** August 01, 2010, 03:47:27 PM »

Approved.

Zero · « **Reply #16 on:** August 01, 2010, 03:57:36 PM »

Gaser, add your approval.

Gaserlake · « **Reply #17 on:** August 01, 2010, 05:08:24 PM »

Approved.

Admiral Regis Hermitage · « **Reply #18 on:** August 02, 2010, 01:14:04 PM »

Note- Deceased

K2 · « **Reply #19 on:** August 02, 2010, 01:17:34 PM »

Admiral Regis Hermitage · « **Reply #20 on:** August 02, 2010, 01:18:06 PM »

HOORAH!!

K2 · « **Reply #21 on:** August 02, 2010, 01:20:04 PM »

I feel like I'm in the army.

Zero · « **Reply #22 on:** August 02, 2010, 01:20:38 PM »

The race is not extinct.

K2 · « **Reply #23 on:** August 02, 2010, 01:20:55 PM »

Admiral Regis Hermitage · « **Reply #24 on:** August 02, 2010, 01:21:27 PM »

Yet is the key word...as well as the only one