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Shrike (Divae Relorian, member of sons of plunder)
« on: September 19, 2010, 05:10:26 PM »
Name: Shrike
Age: 250 but appears to be 25
Race: Divae-Relorian.
Alliance: Sons of Plunder
Biography:  
People are all different. Relorians are far from the exception to that rule actually as each one of them has a different personality. Most aren't born with disorders though or pyschosis both of which Shrike was born with. As he grew older raised by the Relorians of the Divae Sphere and then later by his friends the Sierrensa he learned how to control his abilities to an even greater scale.

When the Relorians and the Sons of Plunder split again it took him a while to make his decision. Eventually though his desire to help the sons of Plunder succeed with their mission came to fruition. So he rejoined the sons of Plunder as he was one of the original members of the sons of Plunder.

While not like the others he is well rounded in the divae sphere able to do all of the Divae  Abilities at the cost of being highly proficient with one. His fighting style usually involves a set of curved schimitars which he uses on the battle field along with a customized Sons of Plunder Fighter. Also as a Divae he learned how to do many of the arts that a normal Divae could, but as a Sierrensa he also had the ability to use energy from his weave to boost his physical attributes. He seeks to help the sons of Plunder.

One of his problems is that he is easily set off and made volatile and angry however. A key reason why he rejoined the Sons of Plunder so that he did not get angry at the normal Relorians and decide they would be better off with their organs on the outside rather than on the inside. He still thinks he needs training in the Divae path and trains himself brutally every moment he has spare time other than sleeping or eating as he is not much of a person who enjoys idle chit chat.
Weapons:     http://browse.deviantart.com/?qh=&section=&global=1&q=scimitar#/d14jjsh Two of these are the weapons he fights with on the battle field. He is also known for fighting with spiked wristguards that he uses to impale an opponent if his scimitars are taken away from him.

Equipment: His clothes are a major set of equipment for him actually. He has 12 sets of the clothes that he wears hidden in his pocket dimension.
 
Magic Level: 4
Appearance:  
http://heise.deviantart.com/gallery/#/dqbef7 These are the garments he normally wears. 
« Last Edit: September 29, 2010, 08:37:11 PM by Odd Dellarobia »

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Re: Shrike (Divae-Sierrensa Relorian, member of sons of plunder)
« Reply #1 on: September 19, 2010, 05:17:46 PM »
Did Nisorin say you could have this?

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Re: Shrike (Divae-Sierrensa Relorian, member of sons of plunder)
« Reply #2 on: September 19, 2010, 05:22:03 PM »
He even helped with the idea somewhat Hik.

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Re: Shrike (Divae-Sierrensa Relorian, member of sons of plunder)
« Reply #3 on: September 19, 2010, 08:10:21 PM »
He still doesn't understand.

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Whatever. Probably won't get it no matter how many times I explain it. Approved. Probably be dead by the time I start my job though.
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Re: Shrike (Divae-Sierrensa Relorian, member of sons of plunder)
« Reply #4 on: September 29, 2010, 07:01:32 PM »
Denied. Expand and elaborate the bio.

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Re: Shrike (Divae-Sierrensa Relorian, member of sons of plunder)
« Reply #5 on: September 29, 2010, 07:58:10 PM »
Edited. Bio improved upon.

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Re: Shrike (Divae-Sierrensa Relorian, member of sons of plunder)
« Reply #6 on: September 29, 2010, 08:17:42 PM »
Despite the fact that some of my characters have bios of 'TBA', yours needs to be longer.

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Re: Shrike (Divae-Sierrensa Relorian, member of sons of plunder)
« Reply #7 on: September 29, 2010, 08:25:38 PM »
Honestly, HAwkeye. Learn how to spell, or stop using that shitpile that is Internet Explorer, and get a real browser that actually has a spell checker. Schimitars don't exist. Scimitars do.

Ditch the sub-classification because it doesn't fucking exist. Ditch the Sierrensa clothes because there's no such friggen thing. I dunno how many times I have to tell you this, but the Sierrensa are not a sphere.

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I'm really getting tired of having to constantly correct you. Shape the hell up already, we all know you can pull it off.
Seeing the world through a child's eyes is truly a unique experience. It helps you to retrieve that sense of awe, magic and wonder that you lost as you lost your innocence. Tell me, when was the last time that you thought of those childhood dreams? You know, the ones that you used to spend all your time wondering and fantasizing about? Have you forgotten them so easily? Have you forgotten what it felt like to see something for the first time, to see the magic in the mundane? Everyone says you should take the time to 'Stop and smell the roses'. But you should also take the time to look for the fairies, embrace the wind and enjoy the rain. Just once today, stop for a moment and look into that little piece of nature you pass everyday. Perhaps you may see something you did not notice before.

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Re: Shrike (Divae Relorian, member of sons of plunder)
« Reply #8 on: September 30, 2010, 01:26:32 AM »
Edited completely Nisorin.

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Re: Shrike (Divae Relorian, member of sons of plunder)
« Reply #9 on: October 02, 2010, 03:41:24 PM »
Barely fixed, but fine. Approved.
Seeing the world through a child's eyes is truly a unique experience. It helps you to retrieve that sense of awe, magic and wonder that you lost as you lost your innocence. Tell me, when was the last time that you thought of those childhood dreams? You know, the ones that you used to spend all your time wondering and fantasizing about? Have you forgotten them so easily? Have you forgotten what it felt like to see something for the first time, to see the magic in the mundane? Everyone says you should take the time to 'Stop and smell the roses'. But you should also take the time to look for the fairies, embrace the wind and enjoy the rain. Just once today, stop for a moment and look into that little piece of nature you pass everyday. Perhaps you may see something you did not notice before.

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Re: Shrike (Divae Relorian, member of sons of plunder)
« Reply #10 on: January 23, 2011, 07:11:14 PM »
Approved.

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Re: Shrike (Divae Relorian, member of sons of plunder)
« Reply #11 on: February 03, 2011, 05:58:17 PM »
Going to be using him soon.