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My slightly Angelic Character
« on: January 10, 2010, 04:26:19 PM »
Name: Vailen Neanderthus
Age:  Unknown but he appears to be 25.  
Race: Fallen Angel/Sage
Alliance: Heaven
Biography: As a guardian angel he was assigned to watch his person who just so happened to be JT, however when he was supposed to be paying attention, instead he got caught with porn, and in result the person died. The Angel's didn't like this one bit, and kicked him down to the dimensions, relieving him of his wings and halo.

Forced to make up his mistake by adding more work, Vailen must ally with every empire he possibly can, and protect anyone he allies with. If he does this, when the Angel's have seen enough, he will be redeemed and can go back to Heaven. But if he opens a porn book, jsut once, accident, or purpose, it adds another year to his sentence.

Sadly for Vailen he has a terribly embarrassing quality. He can’t concentrate for long periods of time, as he has been cursed with ADHD since his birth. This makes it difficult for him to do his job and guard people, and makes it even more difficult to ignore his male urges.

He prefers to fight with a giant hammer and a set of short blades that he stores within a miniscule pocket dimension to store the things he uses including his set of blades even though he always carries his hammer with him. His powers are that of divine, but weakened considerably by his inability to pay attention to the battle or his opponents.

Weapons: Giant Hammer, set of short blades (10 of them accessible in a pocket dimension)
Equipment: None
Magic Level: 5
Force Level: 0
Appearance: http://kairi-moon.deviantart.com/art/Boy-Angel-11368509
« Last Edit: January 10, 2010, 04:40:52 PM by Hawkeye »
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Re: My slightly Angelic Character
« Reply #1 on: January 10, 2010, 04:27:47 PM »
Approved, since I so totally helped you make this one.

This is a test in your RP studies, Hawkeye. If you can get out of your usual personality zone and play a humerous and flawed character,  you're not a total lost cause.
« Last Edit: January 10, 2010, 04:37:52 PM by Hikaru »
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Re: My slightly Angelic Character
« Reply #2 on: January 10, 2010, 04:55:53 PM »
Guardian Angels aren't level five, if anything they are around level three. They are intended to help their charges in subtle ways, therefore power is not needed.
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Re: My slightly Angelic Character
« Reply #3 on: January 10, 2010, 04:56:39 PM »
Quote from: Orph on January 10, 2010, 04:55:53 PM
Guardian Angels aren't level five, if anything they are around level three. They are intended to help their charges in subtle ways, therefore power is not needed.

Who says you get to decide? You and K2 are doing Hell, I'm doing Heaven. You don't get to choose everything, Orph.
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Re: My slightly Angelic Character
« Reply #4 on: January 10, 2010, 04:58:29 PM »
Since when did you have complete control over Heaven?

People just love pressing the smite and applaud button for me.

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Re: My slightly Angelic Character
« Reply #5 on: January 10, 2010, 05:00:09 PM »
Quote from: Orph on January 10, 2010, 04:58:29 PM
Since when did you have complete control over Heaven?

Since when do you?
No one does, which leaves it open to have characters from it.
In heaven, yes, a guardian angel would be lower powered. But if it's kicked out to do a job as annoying as the ones they assigned, I would think their power would be raised so they'd be able to survive as a mortal.
You try to decide EVERYTHING, just because you have original ideas, doesn't mean it all has to go your way, and fuck everyone else.
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Re: My slightly Angelic Character
« Reply #6 on: January 10, 2010, 05:01:45 PM »
If they got kicked out of Heaven I would be pretty sure they wouldn't be allowed back in, falling from grace would be the ultimate punishment..

He'd become a demon.
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Re: My slightly Angelic Character
« Reply #7 on: January 10, 2010, 05:03:15 PM »
Quote from: Orph on January 10, 2010, 05:01:45 PM
If they got kicked out of Heaven I would be pretty sure they wouldn't be allowed back in, falling from grace would be the ultimate punishment..

He'd become a demon.

It wasn't a full exile because it wasn't as bad as a sin.
Just because it's based on Christian principles, doesn't mean it has to be fully IRL. It is an anime type RP after all.
You want to find flaws in every character? Then lets take a lot at all of yours that don't make sense in terms of story.
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Re: My slightly Angelic Character
« Reply #8 on: January 10, 2010, 05:09:48 PM »
Then he wouldn't of been removed from Heaven. Falling from Grace is the ultimate punishment, if they want to punish him lightly they would've like demoted him.
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Re: My slightly Angelic Character
« Reply #9 on: January 10, 2010, 05:11:24 PM »
Quote from: Orph on January 10, 2010, 05:09:48 PM
Then he wouldn't of been removed from Heaven. Falling from Grace is the ultimate punishment, if they want to punish him lightly they would've like demoted him.

AGAIN, does not have to follow IRL.
Heaven hasn't been focused on yet, it's completely up to the imagination. ANYONE'S, not just YOURS.
Maybe this heaven is more comical, or lenient. God.
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Re: My slightly Angelic Character
« Reply #10 on: January 10, 2010, 05:13:25 PM »
If it was more lenient he wouldn't go down to Earth. And it's funny how you're yelling at me for putting my input, and yet you're trying to control Heaven one hundred percent.

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Re: My slightly Angelic Character
« Reply #11 on: January 10, 2010, 05:14:26 PM »
Quote from: Orph on January 10, 2010, 05:13:25 PM
If it was more lenient he wouldn't go down to Earth. And it's funny how you're yelling at me for putting my input, and yet you're trying to control Heaven one hundred percent.



Control? No?
Trying to get it usable.
If you have your way, no one would be able to use it in plots AT ALL.
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Re: My slightly Angelic Character
« Reply #12 on: January 10, 2010, 05:16:23 PM »
No, you haven't even had the common decency to hear mine. I just have it in what I think a better system, not just "Oh he looked at porn! ULTIMATE LENIENT PUNISHMENT!"
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Re: My slightly Angelic Character
« Reply #13 on: January 10, 2010, 05:37:04 PM »
Kindly take the Spam to the C-Box or better yet ELSEWHERE off the board.
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Re: My slightly Angelic Character
« Reply #14 on: January 10, 2010, 05:40:53 PM »
It's not spam if it's a discussion on how to better the character. Stop being an idiot Hawk.
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Re: My slightly Angelic Character
« Reply #15 on: January 10, 2010, 06:36:03 PM »
You need to stop flaming Orpheus. There is no excuse for it, regardless of your personality.

I approve the character, as I don't see anything wrong with it. Study well, Hawkeye.
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Re: My slightly Angelic Character
« Reply #16 on: January 10, 2010, 06:38:18 PM »
((Thank you. Oh and Nisorin, check the C-box. )
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Re: My slightly Angelic Character
« Reply #17 on: January 10, 2010, 10:22:08 PM »
Approved.

Rogue, as much as you have control over Hell, Hik has control over Heaven, so it's even.
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