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[Approved]Cepheus Solaris (3rd genetic experiment)
« on: November 09, 2010, 06:54:40 PM »
Name: Cepheus Solaris
Age: He is 30 years old.
Race: Genetic Experiment (Engineered by Veldorians)
Alliance: Veldorian  Emperor
Biography:
Raised by the royal council that was in charge of the Veldorians until a suitable empire could be found Cepheus did not make many friends. In fact those that he did make were under the control of the council and used to keep him from trying to go against any directive. The council in short thought they could rule him. Forcing him to go through training in the magical arts and learn how to fight with a sword,the council knew the time was coming. The time that would cause them to move back to the SP Dimension in search of their lost rulers.

But his childhood was not lacking of anything a normal child could want. No, because of his wealth he was treated extremely well at the royal academy. Yes he did earn a lot of the priveleges by helping a lot of the teachers out and by being an above average student. But still wealth was a key factor in his life. Not that he would learn about how wealthy he truly was until later on. Part of his studies dabbled in the art of Alchemy, but he is not very good at it.

In preparation training intensified and a variety of educations including those in unarmed combat were given to him specifically those of the iron fist style of martial arts so that he could defend himself effectively. In addition to that he was forced to learn other ways to manipulate energy besides magic so that he could have the advantage he would need. Yes returning to the dimension would soon occur and they wanted a prepared ruler. So in order to have a prepared ruler they decided he must be forced to learn to control all aspects of his life. A strict diet and exercise regime was applied to him so that he would get tougher when he got into his teen years.

By the end of the time he was a teenager he had burnt all of the body fat he had on his body. It had all been converted into energy for him to use. Now instead of flab he had pure muscle. His body had changed drastically and evolved no longer requiring as much food or water as a normal Veldorian, because the other portions of his DNA were going into overdrive.

To complete his training 5 additional years were spent honing his skills with the martial arts, with his weapons of choice and with his alchemy. Now he seeks to come to the SP dimension and take down all that have hurt the Veldorians in the past. But will he be successful in his quest?


Weapons:   In accord with the training he was given he does not really need to use a weapon in combat as his hands are already a formidable weapon. But at the insistence of the council he has adopted two weapons that he always uses in combat situations in case the need is grim for him to have a weapon. 

Burning Justice
In order to arm the emperor that would lead them into the coming battle the Veldorians did a lot of archeological digs throughout their dimension and found quite the cache of magical artifacts. One such artifact they found was the artifact known as Burning Justice. It was a glaive that had unique properties to it. The properties of this glaive allow it to be up to par with most powered weapons easily as it has ancient magics woven into it. Ancient magic that is not well known in the SP-Dimension as it was kept in the Veldorian dimension up until this point. Rumor has it that the glaive will at some point teach the wielder the ancient magic Pyres if they prove themselves worthy.   

Verdict Metal Knuckles
http://browse.deviantart.com/?q=metal%20knuckles&order=9&offset=48#/dqgt1o He has two of these metal knuckles. Yet what they do besides hurt a lot more than normal metal knuckles is unknown for the time being.

Of course every warrior is also equipped with a 3rd weapon but for now his 3rd weapon shall remain a mystery.

Equipment: Well since he is the emperor he was given access to a pocket dimension that contains all sorts of magical and technological marvels produced by the Veldorians so that he could come into battle prepared.
Magic Level: 5
Appearance:
http://browse.deviantart.com/?q=crystal%20weapons&order=9&offset=288&offset=336#/d26g1p4 Except the daggers are replaced by a glaive. And he looks more like a 30 year old.
« Last Edit: December 18, 2010, 01:47:41 PM by Galaxy »

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Re: Cepheus Solaris (3rd genetic experiment)
« Reply #1 on: November 10, 2010, 05:29:12 PM »
Approved.

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Re: Cepheus Solaris (3rd genetic experiment)
« Reply #2 on: November 11, 2010, 08:01:21 PM »
For Gravity control and Dark Attacks, if they aren't magic, then what is it?

Dark Rifts: So, it's a wormhole?

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Re: Cepheus Solaris (3rd genetic experiment)
« Reply #3 on: November 11, 2010, 08:26:37 PM »
Pretty much.

And the gravity and darkness are abilities that were programmed into his body. They were scientifically given to him.

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Re: Cepheus Solaris (3rd genetic experiment)
« Reply #4 on: November 11, 2010, 10:28:48 PM »
Hardly explains them...So far as I know, you cant 'program' a ability into someone's DNA or something like that...
Do you have what it takes to change your destiny, to defy FATE itself?
Let us test the limits of your abilities, and see if you have the WILL to do what no one else tries.

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Re: Cepheus Solaris (3rd genetic experiment)
« Reply #5 on: November 11, 2010, 10:40:32 PM »
He was CREATED with those abilities. In short the ability to do so was added to him during his creation.

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Re: Cepheus Solaris (3rd genetic experiment)
« Reply #6 on: November 11, 2010, 10:41:30 PM »
Yes. He was created with the ability. Doesn't explain what the ability itself is. If it isn't magic, then what is it?

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Re: Cepheus Solaris (3rd genetic experiment)
« Reply #7 on: November 12, 2010, 09:01:23 PM »
Edited.

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Re: Cepheus Solaris (3rd genetic experiment)
« Reply #8 on: November 12, 2010, 09:27:25 PM »
That doesn't answer any of my questions. You didn't edit the ones I questioned, either.

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Re: Cepheus Solaris (3rd genetic experiment)
« Reply #9 on: November 15, 2010, 09:42:07 PM »
Edited. Gravity Control and all of that removed.

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Re: Cepheus Solaris (3rd genetic experiment)
« Reply #10 on: November 16, 2010, 02:43:37 PM »
Well...Approved, I guess...
Do you have what it takes to change your destiny, to defy FATE itself?
Let us test the limits of your abilities, and see if you have the WILL to do what no one else tries.

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Re: Cepheus Solaris (3rd genetic experiment)
« Reply #11 on: November 20, 2010, 04:23:18 PM »
I revoke my approval and ask that this character's topics be suspended until this character is fixed.

Please expand on the biography and the character as a whole. Give the character some... life.

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Re: Cepheus Solaris (3rd genetic experiment)
« Reply #12 on: November 21, 2010, 09:05:53 AM »
Improved upon.

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Re: Cepheus Solaris (3rd genetic experiment)
« Reply #13 on: November 21, 2010, 03:21:41 PM »
Still not good enough. Let me show you a sample of a character that would be acceptable.



INTRODUCING[/b][/i][/u]


[Zeke Sullivan]





Character's Full Name:[/b][/i][/u] Ezekiel Williams Sullivan II
Alias:[/b][/i][/u] Zeke
Species:[/b][/i][/u] Human
Gender:[/b][/i][/u] Male
Age:[/b][/i][/u] 24
Birthplace:[/b][/i][/u] Diego Space Station
Current Location:[/b][/i][/u] Diego Space Station
Affiliation:[/b][/i][/u] Diego Syndicate.


PERSONALITY[/b][/i][/u]

Zeke is a good man with values. He values family and religion. This makes him an odd fit in the Diego Syndicate. He often clashes with co-workers because of their lack of morale and values. It could be said that he seeks to instill his values in the hearts of others.

Zeke, despite his conservative nature, is very big in business. He's a pushy kind of guy. If he needs to do something to get ahead, he does it. He's very direct, in that. Blunt, for the lack of a better word. He doesn't sugarcoat things.

Zeke is very trusting. It's one of his flaws. He doesn't see the darkness in people over the good. He believes people won't take him for granted. It can sometimes result in his getting in trouble. He trusts people a little too much. That's not a flaw you need when you live at the Diego Space Station.

Likes:[/b][/i][/u][/font]
    • Business
    • Naked Bowling
    • Naked Golf
    • Java
    • Politics
    [/list]Dislikes:[/b][/i][/u][/font]
      • Diego Family
      • Liberals
      • UTF loyalists
      • Beer
      • Cigars
      [/list]Strengths:[/b][/i][/u][/font]
        • Corporate management
        • Persuasive arguments
        • Cooking
        [/list]Weaknesses:[/b][/i][/u][/font]
          • He trusts people too much.
          • His conservative views can sometimes hold him back in his career.
          • Physically, he's pretty weak.
          [/list]
          APPEARANCE[/b][/i][/u]

          Zeke isn't particularly handsome, nor is he truly ugly. He wears his hair in a buzz cut fashion and typically wears nice clothing. He makes sure that he looks clean groomed. After all, he doesn't want to hurt his image. That means that he has to be clean shaved and well dressed. Always.

          When he's not in the eye of the public... Or at least, when he's in private... He's a slob. It's his time to unwind. He's a very disorganized person in the first place. He'd like nothing more than to wear a T-Shirt and shorts all day. Unfortunately, his profession doesn't quite allow for that. So, it's not very often that he is in loose clothing.

          Face Claim:[/b][/i][/u] Track Palin.



          INVENTORY[/b][/i][/u]

          He owns a ship which he received as a gift from his father. The ship is old but it runs great. An older model based off a privatized design, it was originally a ship for racing. Zeke makes sure that the ship (which bears the name "The O'Sullivan) is in top condition.



          HISTORY[/b][/i][/u]

          Zeke was born to Ezekiel Williams "Will" Sullivan I, a big business man who worked for Johnny Diego as an advisor, and Nel Sullivan. He was, as a kid, not really interested in business. He grew up on the station, shielded (thanks to his mother) to what really went on around him. When he was a teenager, he began to see what was before him. When he was sixteen, he was tricked by the Diego family into signing a contract which basically made him a slave to the Diego Family, forcing him to work for the family for next to nothing over the next ten years.

          When Will found out about the contract, he went to Johnny Diego himself to try to get his son out of the situation. Will was shot on the spot by Mr. Diego. Zeke would not be let off the hook. Zeke had to work for Mr. Diego. So, Zeke began to work towards the next best thing short of freedom... Taking over the Diego Syndicate from the inside.

          Zeke started off working small jobs. Mopping floors, helping bartenders, waiting tables. His break came when he was 18. He got a job at one of the clothing outlets owned by the Diego family. One day, Zeke was working the register when a corporate executive for Terran Paper Inc., a large mining company doing business with Mr. Diego, entered the store looking for a new suit. His old one had gotten ruined that morning. Zeke, by the end of the morning, had convinced the executive to invest in the clothing company.

          Zeke, following his success, was promoted quickly to assistant manager and, by the time he was nineteen, was manager of the clothing store. His boss was so impressed by his success that he asked Zeke to speak before the board of the clothing company about business. The board made him a corporate advisor. It was then that he began to buy stocks in the company. Two years later, he was voted CEO.

          As CEO of the company, he reported directly to Johnny Diego himself. Mr. Diego was not as pleased with Zeke. He decided to take extremes. He had just started writing a message to a hitman in regards to Zeke when the news broke.. Zeke has just roped in tons of cash in a deal with 38 ship crews. Diego did not eliminate Zeke, but ordered his men to keep an eye on the young man.

          Zeke, at age 22, left his spot in the fashion world. He became CEO of one of a company owned by Johnny Diego... Go?t Restaurantes, better known as a chain restaurants which typically take the name "Taste Restaurants". Zeke began to use his status there to advance his place within the cooperate world. To do this, he began to network with other corporates and associates within the syndicate and even with members of the Diego family... But Johnny Diego was keeping him out of the loop.

          That year, Zeke met May Harris. May, a year younger than him, seemed to be the girl of his dreams. She was the daughter of a farmer who supplied crops to Taste Restaurants. They hit it off. Zeke thought he was in love.

          Fast-forward six months. May's 22nd birthday party. Zeke took her out on O'Sullivan for the weekend. The two were enjoying the peace and quiet away from the bustling space station they called home. That's when Zeke stumbled across her mobile device... And the text messages she had sent and received about her 'mission'.

          May worked for the Diego Family and had been given the assignment of watching Zeke and preventing him from advancing up the cooperate ladder. It was a wonder Zeke hadn't been eliminated by the Diego family. But Zeke, of course, was crushed when he learned of May's true identity. He steadily broke it off with May without revealing what he knew.

          Relations between Johnny Diego and Zeke have become more and more stressed over the last year. Soon, somebody's going to go too far. Who's going to react first, though?
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          [/color]Okay, so.. Work on your character and let me know when you're ready.

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          Re: Cepheus Solaris (3rd genetic experiment)
          « Reply #14 on: November 21, 2010, 04:24:05 PM »
          Edited.

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          Re: Cepheus Solaris (3rd genetic experiment)
          « Reply #15 on: December 18, 2010, 01:47:11 PM »
          I approve.

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          Re: [Approved]Cepheus Solaris (3rd genetic experiment)
          « Reply #16 on: June 15, 2011, 06:21:56 PM »
          Revive this please.
          http://shatteredplanes.com/forum/index.php?topic=2426.15 
          This is being revived as the Character will play a great role in things I have planned to come. Of course at the moment being on probation slows down those plans, but still. Reactivate!

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          Re: [Approved]Cepheus Solaris (3rd genetic experiment)
          « Reply #17 on: June 15, 2011, 08:29:58 PM »
          Did this character die? If so, how?

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          Re: [Approved]Cepheus Solaris (3rd genetic experiment)
          « Reply #18 on: June 15, 2011, 08:32:30 PM »
          He didn't die. Just haven't used him yet.

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          Re: [Approved]Cepheus Solaris (3rd genetic experiment)
          « Reply #19 on: June 15, 2011, 08:34:07 PM »
          Reactivated.