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Gooo evaluation!
« on: January 14, 2010, 11:14:59 PM »
Shit!

My cover was blown, as the sirens all around the god forsaken base began to fill the sudden silence with a discord of blaring. Cursing more, I gritted my teeth and quickly revealed myself from the shadows, readying my pistol. The three unlucky soldiers that just so happened to be at the end of the rather poorly lit hallway were my target. With barely enough time to even bat an eye at me, they fell one after another, the bangs from my pistol combated the sirens' apparent blaring. Not having any time to waste, I rushed forward down the hallway.

"Freeze!" A voice shouted behind me, followed quickly by gunfire. A bullet blazed past by my head, as I immediately reacted by falling to the ground. "... Did I get him?" He seemed to question his aim, as he walked slowly over to me. His footsteps grew louder with each second... and once he was close enough...
Bang. He never knew what hit him. Killing him while playing possum apparently was a good plan. I should incorporate this tactic more often... I mentally noted, the sirens still droned on, as if they'd only stop if even God got annoyed with them. I lifted my eyes to the end of the hallway, a double door quickly came into view. Smirking, I got up from my possum position and bolted for it.
Of course, things are never that easy.
The moment I opened those doors to meet the cold, winter air that plagued the region, I also met...

... well, most likely my death. I swear a small battalion of soldiers met me outside, surrounding the door as if they knew I was going out this way. No way... I disabled the cameras! They shouldn't have been able to know that I was going this way! My thoughts screeched in disarray, as I quickly tried to formulate a plan of escape.

They raised their SMGs.

I had to think of a plan... Any plan! Anything at all!
But I couldn't.

They fired. The last moments of my life, I could only remember my daughter...
Why... Everything I had done was in vain. I couldn't even carry out my revenge...

Everything faded to blackness.


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Yeah, in case you couldn't tell already, I took one of K2's pre-thought up scenarios. I'm seeking basically evaluation (and classes if I feel I actually need them) .
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Re: Gooo evaluation!
« Reply #1 on: January 15, 2010, 04:15:58 PM »
According to the placement formula, Zaikanata, you are an advanced roleplayer, with a final score of about 7.67 / 10 in average. Because you specifically stated you were taking the test more as an evaluation, we have included below your study plan and a score sheet on your sample post.

Literacy - 8.6/9
Don'ts - 8.65/9
Characterization - 8.55/9
Interaction - 7.5/9
Battle - .8/1 (Please note battle is scaled different due to specifications within it.)
Detail - 7.5/9

Final Score: About 7.67 / 9 (Advanced Roleplayer)

The following information is your study plan. Included are the classes you need to take and a basic schedule.

Advanced
Advanced Interaction
Advanced Battle
Advanced Detail

Please post a sample post in the forums of all of the listed classes. If you would like, you may take it one class at a time, or alternatively you can take the classes simultaneously. Good luck!

Other Classes You May Want To Take
Advanced Literacy
Advanced Don'ts
Advanced Characterization

We wish you luck in your roleplaying training. If you believe there has been an error in the grading, do not hesitate to say so. Thank you, and have a nice day.