Here's a better one.
"Give me one second, " Nik said just before darting out of the tank and down the street. He didn't know if it was just a hallucination. He didn't care. He just had to get to her. He could swear he had seen her slip into an alleyway. He had to make thing right. He was now on a bridge, and she was standing in front of him.
"What is it," He asked her.
"It's my father," she answered. "He came to me yesterday and told me to leave the city because everyone would die. I told him to leave. He never loved me anyway, and I don't trust him, but I'm still scared."
"Don't worry about it," Nik replied. "Charly, why would all these people die? And also how could he know?"
"Maybe some epidemic? He is a huge part of a Pharmaceutical company," Charly replied. She looked like she may begin to cry.
Nik hugged her, and reassured her that everything would be alright. After a little bit he asked her, "So are you leaving?"
She looked at him and a faint smile began to stream across her face. "Never," was her response. Her phone rang, and she had to go. That was the last time Nik saw her before the outbreak. Six months later he was running after her, and as he turned to run down the ally, he tripped on the curb. When he looked up, there was nothing in the ally save a dumpster. He has skimmed his elbow, and his singed hand. Just when he himself was about to break down, he heard a faint whimper. Something wet slid across his ear. He looked up into the eyes of a German Shepard.
This one seems too rushed
Nik ran out of the rubble, holding something in his hand: one of the Technocell remote bombs. He ran and ran through from cover to cover until he reached the Technocell tank's rear end. He jumped upon it and wrenched open the hatch, and then tossed it inside. The crew tried to get it back out, but Nik was to fast. He stood on the hatch so they couldn't push it open. His idea just might work. He pulled out his camera phone, witch had no bars as usual. But never the less, he tried to make a call. The cellphone signals tried desperately to find a transmission point to complete the call. They found a bomb. The tank (being designed to hold out explosions for the safety of the crew) held in the explosion to the safety of Nik. He did fall down as the Tank shook, but sustained no more major injuries. He ran back to his families new tank and hoped in. "How was that?" he asked Zak.
This one I guess would be too short. I also misspelled slushy.
They found Nik by the slushie machine looking for a paper cup. When he saw them, he asked, "What the h*** were you doing."
