Rp test 1 2

[Oddoneout]

Hey sorry about not taking this test sooner

Rp Test

Laos has been walking, no make that running, for quite some time. His surroundings have been just a feild of grass. "They are gone" Laos said and sat down to rest But they will come and get you A voice called to him. "No they will not I am safe" he said and rested his head You really think they are going to give up so easily? You think that since you are safe now that you will be safe forever. Because if you do then it's time to live in the real world the voice said again. "Do you think that I don't know that. I do know that but I know they will not chase us again. They don't know where this place is. Only I do so leave me be" Laos said getting ready to fall asleep again They will find you here. They know that this place exsists. The voice said again. As it did so Laos' shadow slowly transformed into a shadow being that was like him. They will find a way to get here and once they have this place will be gone. Soon you will be truely alone. Do you want to be alone?! The shadow shouted. "I won't be alone. I will not let it happen" Laos shouted back Then do as I say the shadow said and went to whisper to him. Laos then nodded and fell to sleep.

Laos had woken up to a room that was padded with cushions. He went to scratch his head but his arm was bind. He saw his arms were tied to his sides but this cotton jacket "I will do as he says" Laos said to himself "Say good night you damned Asylum"

[K2]

You know, you don't have to take this. If you want to, I'll analyze the post.

[Oddoneout]

I would like you too for good measure

[K2]

You do not have sufficient information to make a score on the battle section. Your first five subjects will be graded on the first post unless you otherwise specify. Please post a sample for battle analysis that includes some form of combat or battle. Thank you.

[Oddoneout]

(Looks like a metaphorical battle of the mind won't work)

Alpha and Beta both held their swords, waiting for the other to attack. They paced in a circle. Alpha though he had found a weak spot so he lunged with his sword. Beta saw this move coming so he quickly put his sword in a defenseive position slanting downwards. Alpha's blade slid of Beta's leaving him open. Beta thrusted at his opponent but Alpha spun his sword to counter the attack. This caused Beta to loose balence so Alpha slashed downwards on Beta. There was no way for Beta to defend this attack. Alpha's blade sliced through Beta's skin like it was a knife to butter. The armor stopped Alpha from slicing though his body but he had done enough damage. Alpha pulled out his sword from Beta's head, then he took Beta's sword and placed it next to him "Nice try but you must lean more to beat me" he said and left, leaving the corpse and his sword   

[K2]

According to the placement formula, Oddoneout, you are an intermediate roleplayer, with a final score of about .. 6.0333333333333333333333333333333 / 9 in average. The following information is your study plan. Included are the classes you need to take and a basic schedule.

Beginner
Literacy

Intermediate
Intermediate Battle
Intermediate Detail

Advanced
Advanced Characterization
Advanced Interaction
Advanced Don'ts

Please post a sample post in the forums of all of the listed classes. If you would like, you may take it one class at a time, or alternatively you can take the classes simultaneously. Good luck!

We wish you luck in your roleplaying training. If you believe there has been an error in the grading, do not hesitate to say so. Thank you, and have a nice day.