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Luke De'Laria
« on: May 27, 2011, 04:39:27 PM »
Luke De?Laria
Age:
He appears to be in his mid twenties, but is actually 50 weeks old, but has recently been awakened.

Gender:
Male
Race:
Genetic Experiment-Modified to be identical to Narrikian

Place Of Birth:
A top secret lab outside the dimension of SP.  /font]
OCCUPATION:
None currently, prospective soldier of fortune.
Personality:
To describe him in one word would be too few to describe the intricate and complex personality of Luke De?Laria. He has a very short tolerance for those who would harass or bully others, viewing them as inferior life forms. Very cunning and intelligent he is also a social climber meaning he will do whatever it takes to climb the social ranks. Another thing about his personality is that he is very protective of his friends. 

Another thing about his personality is that he detests those who would hound others. He has a chaotic good sense of morals meaning he could be likely to spare or hurt someone at any given moment in the time. But now, he has a bit of a problem for himself at the moment in time as he has short term memory loss some of the time, and MPD or multi personality disorder.


Alliance:
None yet
Biography: Created in a lab to prove that genetic experiments could perfectly blend in with the populace by the AN, Luke De?laria is one of the more capable of the genetic experiments. For weeks after his activation he was put through drills and extensive training with various pieces of technology so that he could better protect himself and those he would be sent out to protect. The training also incorporated studies of anatomy, and various fighting styles as well. Further since he would need something besides what he already knew, he had been sent to be trained by Lucas, one of the most powerful Ans.

The AN council at that time decided to give a gift and a guardian to the family of the Dolos Bloodline, a genetic experiment that through the centuries would monitor and make sure they stayed alive and well. Luke De?Laria is a highly trained fighter being up to par with even ISAF soldiers without realizing it due to the immense amounts of training he received. And when put through a combat simulator he aced every simulation that was done.
Of course this was partially due to his natural skill. Life would continue and his lessons would resume in earnest. The next step in his lessons would be to find him a proper weapon of course that would serve him well when he needed it the most. Weeks of selection went by until he found a weapon that would serve him well, an ancestral weapon that had not been used in generations of Narrikians or Ancients or even genetic experiments. Given the weapon which was enchanted to disguise it?s true form at all times, Luke De?Laria has been sent to the SP-verse to ensure the survival of Carl so that the evolution and leadership of the Narrikians can go on as the AN council has planned.

Once in the SP-verse he learned quite a lot and reported back to the council. Arguably the council at first was reluctant to send him but when they noticed the steep bounties by 3 organizations they sent him once more into the SP-verse. Only this time he would be there to stay once he had accomplished his mission and saved the life of Carl Dolos from the bounties. Completing his training and earning the legendary red diamond marking upon his palm, he now hunts for Carl so that he can protect him from Interpol and anyone else who is after him.

Not liking this however, he plans eventually to resign from protecting Carl and perhaps settle down and raise a family. But that of course is his plans for the future after he manages to save his charge from Interpol at the moment in time. He has been sent for just that reason, and that reason alone at the moment in time.








Weapons:
  • V-1 Protocore ?Dragon.?

Magic Level:
He is exceedingly strong in the arts, being beyond the levels of most the Dolos Family, he is about a 5.5. His specialty lies in jack of all trades, master of no type of magic sort of as he can use most magics easily.


Fears:
  • Failing his charge
  • Execution /font]
  • Not being able to have a family
At least three fears required.
Interests:
  • Science
  • Mathematics
  • Training
  • Finding new techniques no one else has
  • Inventing
  • Learning to better protect his charges.
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Aspirations:
  • Keep Carl safe
  • Learn to be an incredible fighter
  • Eliminate those who would hurt his charge.
  • Master other forms of converting existence besides magic.
  • 5.
  • 6.
  • 7
At least three aspirations are required.
ORIENTATION:
Straight,. /font]
RELATIONSHIP/MARITIAL STATUS:
Single.
OTHER:
Anything else we need to know?

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Re: Luke De'Laria
« Reply #1 on: May 27, 2011, 06:36:46 PM »
...Hawk, seriously ENOUGH!

Taylor once said this and now I'm also saying it. You have too much crap. Tech everyday, characters every week, empires out the wazoo! Do you EVER use it all? No! It gets piled up with your other requests and wasted. Why? Because you die the next week or lose everything or fail at trying to be diplomatic.

Well, I'm sick of it. Stop requesting stuff unless you fully intend to use it and know for a fact you can keep it and back it up. I refuse to approve another stupid character or topic full of tech failures until you improve and can live up to your requests.

You've got a walking talking trashcan that can somehow use magic, oh wait, that's an android. You've got the motherbrotherunclescousin of all your chracters ALl ALWAYS on the same side. Never any different. You never fight yourself unless it's platonic drama that bores the reader and just wishes the character would off its self already.

What's more! Someone makes something and you want THAT! Their race, their powers, their abilities, their special things you don't have. Why? Is it because you want to add something cool and help them develop their story? NO! Once again, it's just so you can win. You bug and harass and annoy constantly for or about their stuff, just so you can feed your winning complex you seem to have.

You're using characters as tools. Nothing more but to get you up in the rankings and let you win.. This is a roleplay Hawk, a story It's not always about you and you winning. It's about character development and doing your part to further the plot and contribute the story. Stop treating it as a damn board game, and start living the adventure.

ENOUGH!!!

You're now hereout on request probation.
« Last Edit: May 27, 2011, 06:40:25 PM by Hikaru »

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Re: Luke De'Laria
« Reply #2 on: May 27, 2011, 07:01:50 PM »
Oh snap! He's metro. Good for you Hawk!
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