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Aser, Bringer of Balance
« on: June 01, 2011, 12:24:58 PM »
Now up in the bottom post
« Last Edit: June 01, 2011, 11:15:23 PM by Zak »
There is only so much pain that can be taken before the bonds and chains of sanity are forsaken
It is in these lonesome times that we reach towards the light sublime
And from that light we pull the resolution of our time
To begin the end and start anew

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Re: Aser, Bringer of Balance WIP
« Reply #1 on: June 01, 2011, 09:35:16 PM »
Were you copying the code or the template under it?
Either way, can you PM me the character then? Curious to see what you're requesting. Sounds interesting.

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Re: Aser, Bringer of Balance WIP
« Reply #2 on: June 01, 2011, 09:44:18 PM »
Yeah, sure. I'll see what I can do.
There is only so much pain that can be taken before the bonds and chains of sanity are forsaken
It is in these lonesome times that we reach towards the light sublime
And from that light we pull the resolution of our time
To begin the end and start anew

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Re: Aser, Bringer of Balance WIP
« Reply #3 on: June 01, 2011, 11:05:06 PM »


Aser
Age:
Very, very old. At least a thousand.
 Gender:
Male
Race:
Angelic Being
Place Of Birth:
Erm... Heaven?/font]
OCCUPATION:
Angelic being.. What occupation is he supposed to have?
 Personality:
Aser is person of several depths. On the outside he is bold and charismatic, caring of his people and ferocious towards his enemies. He has an aura of trustworthiness. He prefers peace to war but always likes friendly competition. He will offer you peace but guard against betrayal or war. If you dont accept his peace he will likely attack first in a decisive first blow. Often times he surprises even those who have known him for a long time with his fierceness and ruthlessness. As fierce as he is he is equally valorous. He care for those he leads and tries to protect them. He likes the feel of battle, even though he knows that he should not. He likes the feel of pitting himself against another force.
On the inside he is conflicted. He wishes to do his duty before all else, but he remains tied to the people that he leads and the people that he is responsible for. He knows that he has to find a a balance in himself as much as he has to balance the universe. Both provide as much challenge as one another.  On one hand he has to sacrifice like any good tactician and remind himself of the greater food of his efforts and of those sacrifices. On the other hand he is tempted to throw it all away in order to save those he leads.
He is also a very religious being, seeing as he is an angel. at least

Alliance:
God/Eli, his duty, and to a certain extent, the Zarethians
Biography:
Aser was forged in the pits of creation just like every other angel. However, Eli made him for a slightly more specific purpose than most. While some angels lazed about all day or were Eli's personal messengers Aser was special. For while Eli had been feeling a growing rift in the universe. Chaos, Order and everything in between was going in and out of balance. Aser was made to correct that balance. He was trained for hundred solar years. Or, at least, thats what it would have been had time been different in Heaven.
He was gifted with the finest arms and armor that available and told to go fix the problem. With the little advice he had, he relied on training, taking on a human-esc form that sealed most of his magic. Still, he was a likeable person and soon gained many followers. He used this to his advantage and soon he had a small empire running. He had them trained and hardened into fierce warriors. He tried to make peace with several groups but he was as unsuccessful as one could possibly be. Bested by the advanced technology that the groups had, he fled, his empire in ruins, to the outskirts of the galaxy.
There he stayed for a hundred years until he was finally sure of himself once again. This time, his group of chosen were the Zarethian Empire, an already large and sprawling empire. However, they were corrupt and irreligious. Aser personally led a revolt against the Empire's government, overthrowing the ruling king and installing democratic system. He ruled as part of that system, seen almost as a god by the Zarethians. He used this view to set up a religion that worshiped the true god, not him. It was indeed a good time for Aser, he was happy for the first time in a long time. He neglected his duties and became more and more focused on the now and not his duty to Eli.
Another angel, a messenger from Eli, came to him in the middle of a council meeting and scolded him for this failure. Shamed, he left the Zarethians, vowing to come back. He went around the universe, righting the various wrongs that were committed by the empires of the days. He was on a small, backwater world trying to raise money for shelters and such. He was at a charity foundation, preaching to the people in order to have them donate. He was stabbed and killed by an insane man who was maddened by his speech. His human body failing him, unable to do magic because of the world's Anti Magical presence, he died, sent back to Heaven to face Eli as a failure.
He resolved himself to never fail at this again, to do his duty no matter the cost. He trained himself in strategy and war for nigh upon three hundred years. He has come back to the material verse, now in his angelic form, covered in the armor of creation, wielding the sword of destruction and ready to balance out the universe as he sees fit. He first arrived on a small world, beset by the Lorcar. He single handedly wiped out the opposing force in a ball of divine light and then set off towards the most familiar empire he could: the Zarethians.

 Weapons:

    Sword of Destruction
    Gauntlet of creation (part of the armor of creation)

Magic Level:
As an angelic being he is extraordinarily strong, even for an angel. He can easily wield divine magic along with the different elemental magics as well as most other types of magic. There is very little magic that he cannot do. The major magic he cannot attempt is infernal magic. 5.5, 6 if allowed.

Fears:

    Having to go back again without completing his duty
    By attempting to bring balance he causes mayhem and unbalance
    being unable to help the Zarethians.

At least three fears required.
 Interests:

    1 sword fighting
    2  political machinations
    3  this new this called tea.
    4. any strategy contest
    5. learning mortal religions
    6. debating philosophy
    7

At least five interests are required.
 Aspirations:

    1 completing his duty
    2  leading the Zarethians (and the universe) to a new era of peace and prosperity
    3 To be able to go back and say that he completed his work.
    4. 
    5.
    6.
    7

At least three aspirations are required.

ORIENTATION:
Heterosexual
RELATIONSHIP/MARITIAL STATUS:
Single
OTHER:
Anything else we need to know?
« Last Edit: June 03, 2011, 04:22:50 PM by Zak »
There is only so much pain that can be taken before the bonds and chains of sanity are forsaken
It is in these lonesome times that we reach towards the light sublime
And from that light we pull the resolution of our time
To begin the end and start anew

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Re: Aser, Bringer of Balance
« Reply #4 on: June 03, 2011, 12:57:30 AM »
Not too sure on the wielding of creation and destruction magic...
Everything else is approved though.
Someone else will have to decide the first.

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Re: Aser, Bringer of Balance
« Reply #5 on: June 03, 2011, 01:34:30 AM »
I'm really not liking the whole creation/destruction bits. Those are massively powerful forces that I'm not even totally comfortable with myself playing with using Leirra and Neirron, or even Koty and Eli, not that I have anything I can do about that one.
Seeing the world through a child's eyes is truly a unique experience. It helps you to retrieve that sense of awe, magic and wonder that you lost as you lost your innocence. Tell me, when was the last time that you thought of those childhood dreams? You know, the ones that you used to spend all your time wondering and fantasizing about? Have you forgotten them so easily? Have you forgotten what it felt like to see something for the first time, to see the magic in the mundane? Everyone says you should take the time to 'Stop and smell the roses'. But you should also take the time to look for the fairies, embrace the wind and enjoy the rain. Just once today, stop for a moment and look into that little piece of nature you pass everyday. Perhaps you may see something you did not notice before.

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Re: Aser, Bringer of Balance
« Reply #6 on: June 03, 2011, 01:36:37 AM »
Well, if they're THAT powerful than I can edit those out.
There is only so much pain that can be taken before the bonds and chains of sanity are forsaken
It is in these lonesome times that we reach towards the light sublime
And from that light we pull the resolution of our time
To begin the end and start anew

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Re: Aser, Bringer of Balance
« Reply #7 on: June 03, 2011, 01:49:04 AM »
They kinda are the two fundamental domains of everything that exists...
Seeing the world through a child's eyes is truly a unique experience. It helps you to retrieve that sense of awe, magic and wonder that you lost as you lost your innocence. Tell me, when was the last time that you thought of those childhood dreams? You know, the ones that you used to spend all your time wondering and fantasizing about? Have you forgotten them so easily? Have you forgotten what it felt like to see something for the first time, to see the magic in the mundane? Everyone says you should take the time to 'Stop and smell the roses'. But you should also take the time to look for the fairies, embrace the wind and enjoy the rain. Just once today, stop for a moment and look into that little piece of nature you pass everyday. Perhaps you may see something you did not notice before.

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Re: Aser, Bringer of Balance
« Reply #8 on: June 03, 2011, 01:52:35 AM »
True enough. I'll edit into something less overpowered.
There is only so much pain that can be taken before the bonds and chains of sanity are forsaken
It is in these lonesome times that we reach towards the light sublime
And from that light we pull the resolution of our time
To begin the end and start anew

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Re: Aser, Bringer of Balance
« Reply #9 on: June 03, 2011, 03:00:25 PM »
Aloha?
There is only so much pain that can be taken before the bonds and chains of sanity are forsaken
It is in these lonesome times that we reach towards the light sublime
And from that light we pull the resolution of our time
To begin the end and start anew

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Re: Aser, Bringer of Balance
« Reply #10 on: June 03, 2011, 03:14:04 PM »
Approvified
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Re: Aser, Bringer of Balance
« Reply #11 on: June 03, 2011, 04:19:03 PM »
I hate to seem blind/stupid, but could you just like, highlight the changed parts real quick? Had an eye doctor checkup today, they dilated my eyes, so I can't see too too well right now.
Seeing the world through a child's eyes is truly a unique experience. It helps you to retrieve that sense of awe, magic and wonder that you lost as you lost your innocence. Tell me, when was the last time that you thought of those childhood dreams? You know, the ones that you used to spend all your time wondering and fantasizing about? Have you forgotten them so easily? Have you forgotten what it felt like to see something for the first time, to see the magic in the mundane? Everyone says you should take the time to 'Stop and smell the roses'. But you should also take the time to look for the fairies, embrace the wind and enjoy the rain. Just once today, stop for a moment and look into that little piece of nature you pass everyday. Perhaps you may see something you did not notice before.

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Re: Aser, Bringer of Balance
« Reply #12 on: June 03, 2011, 04:23:20 PM »
Sure, no problem. The changed bit is in red.
There is only so much pain that can be taken before the bonds and chains of sanity are forsaken
It is in these lonesome times that we reach towards the light sublime
And from that light we pull the resolution of our time
To begin the end and start anew

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Re: Aser, Bringer of Balance
« Reply #13 on: June 03, 2011, 04:27:07 PM »
Ah, thanks. Approved!
Seeing the world through a child's eyes is truly a unique experience. It helps you to retrieve that sense of awe, magic and wonder that you lost as you lost your innocence. Tell me, when was the last time that you thought of those childhood dreams? You know, the ones that you used to spend all your time wondering and fantasizing about? Have you forgotten them so easily? Have you forgotten what it felt like to see something for the first time, to see the magic in the mundane? Everyone says you should take the time to 'Stop and smell the roses'. But you should also take the time to look for the fairies, embrace the wind and enjoy the rain. Just once today, stop for a moment and look into that little piece of nature you pass everyday. Perhaps you may see something you did not notice before.

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Re: Aser, Bringer of Balance
« Reply #14 on: June 03, 2011, 04:33:06 PM »
Yay!
There is only so much pain that can be taken before the bonds and chains of sanity are forsaken
It is in these lonesome times that we reach towards the light sublime
And from that light we pull the resolution of our time
To begin the end and start anew