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Captain Dull Star
« on: June 11, 2011, 06:03:17 PM »
Dull Suviana Star, Last "King" of the Ancient Starclan, Captain of the Kiss Of Palms.
Age:
Some thousand or so years old. He seems to be about fifty-something.
 Gender:
Male
Race:
Starclan.
Place Of Birth:
Planet Star
OCCUPATION:
Pirate
 Personality:
Dull Star is an actively busy pirate, and he tries to stay such. He believes in taking care of one's own body as best as can, so naturally, he tries to stay in shape. He keeps a discipline aboard his ship, and lives by morals.. But his morals are often not in line with most of society's. He believes, first and foremost, in challenging the order of governments.

He believes also in strong leadership. Raised to be a king, Dull is a talented speaker and morale builder, and a great leader. He tries to give his crew courage and tries to teach them to preserver. He tries to live like that as well. He is a free spirit.

Alliance:
His ship, and God.
Biography:
Born on Planet Star in the capital city of the Starclan, a still striving people of science, magic, and peace, Dull grew up learning the Ancient Starclan policies of non-intervention and separation from other government bodies. He was, after all.. The Prince of the Starclan. He and his younger brother grew up learning how to be a king. They were groomed for the day that they might finally take the throne, Dull being the first in line.

Yet, Dull one day got in a horrible fight with his father.. He was banished from the kingdom. His brother took the throne of the Starclan, and he went on to marry a wife and have a son.. Jeff Star. He returned a few years after banishment to take back the throne, resulting in a bloody conflict which sent his brother and his brother's family into hiding.

Dull took back the throne, but the people rose up and rebelled, banishing him one more. Hisson, Jeff Star, took the throne, becoming the first emperor of the modern Starclan. Dull found himself without a home, searching for something to live for.. For a purpose.

He was found by Empathy Kiss, a ruthless war criminal who served as part of a pirate group known as CrossLACE. He was taken in by the group and joined the crew of a CrossLACE ship. He quickly rose through the ranks of CrossLACE, eventually becoming a Captain, under the ranks of Empathy Kiss.

It was then that he met the leader of CrossLACE.. Her name was Anna Elizabeth Smith.. But she was better known as Fatet, embodiment of fate. She led the pirate fleet for many reasons.. Including finding out secrets about other embodiments. Dull grew greedy of the embodiment, and wanted to find a way to harness her powers..

He heard a rumor that if one kills an embodiment, one retains its power. He set out to find the one item that could kill Fatet.. Her weakness. He found it after years of searching. It was nothing more than a jar of white ink. He used it to end Fatet, but before she died, she spread her powers out among her followers and named a successor.. K2323.

Dull became the new leader of the pirates, taking Fatet's place. He led his pirate crews in a battle against countless rival pirate gangs and empires until, finally, they picked off more than they could chew. Dull Star's ship, Kiss Of Palms, was boarded and taken along with several other ships of the fleet to a prison in the lost city of Atlantis after it attempted a raid on Atlantian territory.

CrossLACE eventually disbanded without a leader, and Dull found himself rotting in his cell for years. It was only within the last five or six years, after Atlantis got destroyed, that Dull managed to escape. Dull escaped barely alive aboard his still intact ship which had brought him to Atlantis years before.. Ironically, the one who freed him by destroying Atlantis was K2323, heir to Fatet, Dull's former leader.

Dull has been piloting through space for the last few years, recruiting a crew. He has tried to stay under the radar until he could build up his fleet, but with the recent formation of the Pirate Alliance, he is going public.. Why? Because the Pirate Alliance is a form of government, in some ways.. And that just won't stand, now will it?


 Weapons:
  • A pistol.
  • None...
Magic Level:
Skilled in Ancient Starclan magic, Dull Star's talents are unique, seeing as he is the last of his people. His talents in magic also include skill with the Fist Techniques of Montreal, whom he has trained under. He has an interesting ability to form tattoos on his body which can literally jump off the body and take a physical shape. All in all, he's a talented magic user. He was trained to be a king, after all.

Fears:
  • Fatet
  • The death of the way of pirates.
  • Black holes.
At least three fears required.
 Interests:
  • Restoring the CrossLACE fleet.
  • Bringing down the Pirate Alliance.
  • Swimming.
  • Drinking Rum.
  • Fishing.
  • Finding an artifact of treasure every once and awhile.
  • Earning respect among pirates everywhere.
At least five interests are required.
 Aspirations:
His aspirations typically lie within perfecting his interests.
ORIENTATION:
Straight.
RELATIONSHIP/MARITIAL STATUS:
Technically probably "widowed" if that's the right term for a guy..
OTHER:
No, that about covers it.
« Last Edit: June 11, 2011, 06:47:04 PM by K2323 »

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Re: Captain Dull Star (WIP)
« Reply #1 on: June 11, 2011, 06:30:06 PM »
What happened to CE not being canon?

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Re: Captain Dull Star
« Reply #2 on: June 11, 2011, 06:47:38 PM »
What happened to CE not being canon?

This isn't at all like the plotline in CE, just references to it.

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Re: Captain Dull Star
« Reply #3 on: June 11, 2011, 06:50:20 PM »
Exactly. How do you reference something that never happened? If you rteference you're saying it's canon and did happen.

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Re: Captain Dull Star
« Reply #4 on: June 11, 2011, 07:02:58 PM »
They weren't pirates in CE, I just referenced names and leaders.

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Re: Captain Dull Star
« Reply #5 on: June 11, 2011, 09:00:57 PM »
*points to CE! Keith Bane*
AHE-AHEM. ><

Other than that blatant, heretical lie of there being no pirates on the old CE, my only problem is that the entirety of the Starclan species was banished to Hell...So unless there's a reason he's not in Hell currently, you'd need to say about that.
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Re: Captain Dull Star
« Reply #6 on: June 11, 2011, 09:03:54 PM »
The Starclanners were killed manually, it wasn't some spell that banished them. Dull Star's been in prison for years. He's not a member of the Starclan, but his race is Starclannian. But I believe we've said somewhere something about "The Ancient Starclan/Suvian may be still secretly alive."

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Re: Captain Dull Star
« Reply #7 on: June 11, 2011, 09:05:19 PM »
Oh wait, now that I remember, it was that WHEN they died, they were to be sent to Hell and have no chance of Heaven, correct?
Either way, in that case, approved.
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Re: Captain Dull Star
« Reply #8 on: June 11, 2011, 10:25:14 PM »
Whether it's plotline or reference, it's still a request treating that SP rip failure abomination of Hawk's known as CE like it's canon.

The fact you're referring to Crosslace as if they already exits means you're referring to their histor and the fact they did exist in CE. But if CE is not canon, none of it happened, thus crosslace should not exist unless you recreate it in SP with a history..

Until then, I'm not approving as it's referring to a reference in that rip-off abomination and not something that existed in SP.
« Last Edit: June 11, 2011, 10:30:58 PM by Hikaru »

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Re: Captain Dull Star
« Reply #9 on: June 11, 2011, 10:59:14 PM »
Whether it's plotline or reference, it's still a request treating that SP rip failure abomination of Hawk's known as CE like it's canon.

The fact you're referring to Crosslace as if they already exits means you're referring to their histor and the fact they did exist in CE. But if CE is not canon, none of it happened, thus crosslace should not exist unless you recreate it in SP with a history..

Until then, I'm not approving as it's referring to a reference in that rip-off abomination and not something that existed in SP.
This CrossLACE is different from the CrossLACE on CE, I am recreating it, that's the whole point of this damn request. And CE had a damn good story to it, but sense Hawk created it, you always fucking go off about how its a piece of shit..

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Re: Captain Dull Star
« Reply #10 on: June 14, 2011, 12:56:47 AM »
If you wish to create the CROSSlace in SP/GE/OK history, you'll need to give at least a few details of it. Give us those details, and you'll have my approval.
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Re: Captain Dull Star
« Reply #11 on: June 15, 2011, 04:38:56 PM »
If you wish to create the CROSSlace in SP/GE/OK history, you'll need to give at least a few details of it. Give us those details, and you'll have my approval.

Fine.

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Re: Captain Dull Star
« Reply #12 on: July 11, 2011, 03:41:47 PM »
The CrossLACE were a notorious group of pirates, often treated as criminals by governments, known for their ruthless spirit and applying of military tactics to the "art" of piracy. They were led by none other than Anna Elizabeth Smith, better known as the embodiment of fate, who led the pirates through space, often times on dangerous missions to find out secrets of other embodiments. For example, she once led thirty ships into battle against Asura herself, a mission which utterly failed.

The mass fleet gained a particular reputation for their mass size. They would often visit a planet, plunder it of it's resources, and then leave the civilization without any technology, stranded on their planets. This only got them so far for so long. Eventually, their pirating caught up with them. They got caught in a jam, so to speak.

The Great War, a war known for being one of the bloodiest space wars in history, occurred in the peak of the piracy age. Empires such as the Twilight and Aralangs were pitted against each other. The pirates acted in this great war as mercenaries for both sides, known for carrying out missions involving stealth and theft. The CrossLACE got in a little too deep in this war when they went up against a Suvian general, Yentriwa Lishan. They attempted to steal coding to one of his artificial intelligence systems.

When Lishan caught the pirates trying to board his ship, he chased them away. He made it his personal decision to chase down pirates and bring them to justice even after the war ended. He left the Suvian to chase his dream, becoming a loyalist of the Tal. They equipped him with everything he needed, and he became a pirate hunter.

In a battle which is still considered legendary for pirates and non pirates alike, a myth.... Lishan's fleet faced off against the entire CrossLACE fleet in a bloody battle. The CrossLACE were greatly outnumbered by the overwhelming Tal support that Lishan had. Still, the CrossLACE managed to successfully outmaneuver Lishan, achieving victory in what is known to pirates as the Battle of the White Star.

Eventually, the CrossLACE died out and piracy was replaced with military power. What can we expect to happen in the future?
« Last Edit: July 11, 2011, 05:20:53 PM by Chaos »

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Re: Captain Dull Star
« Reply #13 on: July 11, 2011, 04:58:55 PM »
into battle against Asura herself, a mission which utterly failed.

Asura doesn't battle.

Also, I think you'd have to get permission from Gaser to include the Aralangs and their tech in the backstory...
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Re: Captain Dull Star
« Reply #14 on: July 11, 2011, 05:12:41 PM »
Asura would defend her domain, and thats already part of the backstory, its been part or the backstory since season three.

http://shatteredplanes.com/forum/okzone/plot.html
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« Reply #15 on: July 11, 2011, 05:18:12 PM »
Her domain is nigh impossible to get to.

Not the part that he would just up and give you his tech.

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Re: Captain Dull Star
« Reply #16 on: July 11, 2011, 05:21:34 PM »
Edited the Aralang part, and the fact that Asuras domain is kinda impossible to get into proves that they lost.

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Re: Captain Dull Star
« Reply #17 on: July 11, 2011, 05:34:23 PM »
I don't know what the Tal is. But approved.

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Re: Captain Dull Star
« Reply #18 on: July 11, 2011, 05:55:03 PM »
Read the descriptions for the planets of Shuma and Agira.

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Re: Captain Dull Star
« Reply #19 on: July 11, 2011, 11:30:16 PM »
On a completely unrelated note, whereas I am Zakbeard and Hiro is RedBeard, Dull Star, and K2, are herebye known as.... FAILBEARD! :D
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Re: Captain Dull Star
« Reply #20 on: January 29, 2012, 02:50:10 PM »
Using this again.

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