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My as of yet unamed fantasy story!
« on: June 28, 2011, 11:07:21 PM »
In the land of Lothien, a vast, sprawling continent filled to the brim with large empires, ambitious kingdoms and roving bands of bandits and chaotic beasties. In this land of nations, war has sprung up, ignited by greed, anger, jealousy, lust for power and ambition and something? else.
These are the dark pots from which true heroes are chosen even from the most unlikely of places. They are forged, not born, through their actions. It is in these dark times we follow our heroes on their journey.
In the small kingdom of  Merin, a land ruled by a equally small, angry, tyrannical king, lay a small ale house by the name of the Silver Steed.  It was a cramped, old building, its roof collapsing on some sides and hastily repaired. It was equally cramped on the inside, filled with dark, grimy smoke coming from the hanging iron lanterns.
The cliental of the Silver Steed were a ragtag group of criminals and normal people who simply wished a fair cup of ale. They came in all shapes, sizes, backgrounds and occupations. Some were the enormous Clingin bandits who stood almost eight feet tall and had arms the size of a small log and other s were the small and lithe Mikian rogues who barely topped four feet and looked a bit like a human twig.
One of the cliental, a newcomer to the tavern, was a short man with sideswiped golden hair pushed back out of his ruddy, pale, angular face with red cheeks. His silver eyes had a certain look about them, a cunning, ruthless look which was magnified by the rough scar that cut from his right temple across to his left cheek.
He wore leather armor with woven in iron pegs that covered his torso and the upper tops of his arms. Under this armor he wore a blue, cotton tunic and a set of black leggings. The leather gloves, reinforced with steel at the knuckles, and the leather boots were patched and worn. All looked as if it had seen better days.
The man walked into the tavern, drawing the stares and gazes from the more regular cliental. He coughed once from the pitch black smoke and sat down at the crickety old stool near the bar. He ordered a pint. The one eyed bartender gaze him a glancing look and passed him a dirty glass filled to the brim with the yellow, foamy liquid. He looked at it for a second, scanning its quality. He shrugged, apparently finding its contents nonlethal and took a chug. He misjudged the contents power and coughed it back up, earning a look of disdain from the bartender and his surrounding patients.
?Probably should ?ave brought your own glass, mate.? Said a voice from his left. It came from a rather tall man of medium build wearing black robes and a shiny, black metal cuirass. His face was pale and his irises black as a coal, as was his hair which was cut short. He carried a black walking stick with a raven head pommel.
?I realize that now, thanks.? The man, Zak, sputtered, turning to him. ?This stuff has an? interesting take on pleasing the taste buds. Not sure it worked.?
?No, its never been one for the taste but it?ll get you drunk in a giffy.? The man replied, then offered his hand, pale and long fingered, for Zak to shake. ?The name?s Hiro Dark.? He told him, cheerfully. It was odd for someone who looked so sinister.
Zak paused a moment and shook the man?s hand. ?Hullo to you, Hiro. I?m Zak Katsson.? He said, a bit wary.
?This has to be your first time here otherwise you would have brought your own glas-? The dark haired man began. He was interrupted by the tavern door being blown in and several armed soldiers in plate mail and wearing the king?s crest came running in, swords and axes raised.
?By order of the Lord King Meric II, King of Merin and all of you.? The lead soldier, designated by his fancy helmet with a griffin beak sticking out of the top said pointedly. ?This establishment is herebye closed and all in it are under arrest.?
The groups inside the tavern paused and looked at one another and jumped onto the soldiers. The Clingin bandits swung chairs with enough power to break a man?s body while the lithe Mikian?s dove forth and cut at the soldiers weak points before disappearing in the black smoke and shadows. Zak and Hiro looked at one another and then the barman who pointed to the back doorway. They got up and ran, a soldier?s arrow hitting the barman in the back of the head.
?Well, damn.? Zak said, kicking the door down. ?Come on!? He said to Hiro, who nodded. They fled through the musty cellars and came upon the stairs to the cellar door of the outside.
?Okay, we should be ?? Hiro said as he pushed the door open to reveal at least half a dozen spear points pointed directly at his face. ?Trapped. Completely trapped. Yeah, that?s what I was going for.? He muttered to himself as they were both forcibly halled up by the guards.
?Well, there goes plan A.? Zak said, not even bothering to struggle against the guards.
?To be fair,? Hiro pointed out. ?We didn?t even have a plan A.?
?Quiet you.? A guard said, smacking Zak and Hiro in the stomach with the spear butt.
?Go back and suckle on your mother, fool.? Zak spat out, doubling over. This remark gave him another smack with his spear this time on the back of the head.
Hiro was a bit better mannered, his armor absorbing the blow.  ?What do you want with us?? He asked, unfazed.
?The king has the desire to speak with you rabble. A Hiro Dark and a Zak Katsson along with some other gits.? A small, red head soldier told them, motioning for them to move. ?Come on then, move.?
Hiro and Zak glanced at each other and shouldered along, walking as the soldiers prodded them.
?So, this normal for you?? Hiro asked Zak.
Zak nodded wearily. ?Pretty much, yeah.?
There is only so much pain that can be taken before the bonds and chains of sanity are forsaken
It is in these lonesome times that we reach towards the light sublime
And from that light we pull the resolution of our time
To begin the end and start anew

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Re: My as of yet unamed fantasy story!
« Reply #1 on: June 29, 2011, 12:42:19 AM »
The ? thing is a little iritating, but other then that, I like it. Love to see an update.
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Re: My as of yet unamed fantasy story!
« Reply #2 on: June 29, 2011, 01:29:01 AM »
Zak nodded wearily. ?Pretty much, yeah.?  He replied, receiving a jab in the ribs and wincing as they were lead through the surrounding town and into the courtyard castle of the king.
Where the town was poor, its buildings in poor condition and in some places simply dilapidated; the castle was made of white stone and looked beautiful in comparison. It towered above the village, its keep standing far above a hundred feet. It was amazing that the kingdom could afford such opulence.
The guards led them forcefully through the iron gridded gates and into the courtyard where several onlookers turned and gazed at them with some curiosity before returning to their various works.
The king himself, a short, pudgy, bearded man dressed in royal red robes with an ornate golden crown upon his head strode towards them. Hiro and Zak were pushed to the ground before him. The soldiers saluted to him. ?Sire. The fugitives, Zak Katsson and Hiro Dark.? The lead soldier said, hitting them with the spear haft in turn.
?Ah. Well done captain.? He nodded in a high pitched voice that seemed oddly to fit his body size. Zak sniggered and received yet another blow because of it. His sides really beginning to hurt now, he began to pay a little bit more attention to the pompous puffed up ruler in front of him.
?Hiro Dark? Feared necromancer and Zak Katsson renowned mercenary. I?m almost surprised you didn?t fight your way out of this.? The king remarked snidely.
?Yes, well, you see, spears being shoved into your face is a fairly good deterrent.? Hiro said, shrugging only to be stuck yet again. Hiro turned and glared at him.
?Speak when spoken to.? The soldier snarled.
Hiro turned around, mimicking the man?s stern voice and muttering to himself. Ah ?Speak when spoken to, do this do that, kiss the ground, blah, blah, blah.? He mocked under his breath.
The king motioned with his hand and the soldier?s beating subsided. ?Both of you? are capable warriors and are under arrest for murder and the despicable use of magical power." The king said grimly. ?Each of these crimes is punishable by death in the most heinous manner. However, if you agree to serve me in a mission? then you will be free of your bonds.?
?Um, what kind of mission?? Zak asked him warily. ?What does it entail??
?You will infiltrate the near kingdom of Orphus and assassinate its king. From there you will receive further instructions.?
Zak glanced at Hiro who glanced at him. If Zak was right they were thinking the same thing: Easy escape.
?However,? The King started again, pacing. ?In order to ensure that you two keep in line with my orders? I will have the greatest knight of the realm accompany you. The Knight of Gee.? As he said this, a man of medium height but broad build walked out of the doorway, covered from head to toe in silver plate mail. He carried a large broadsword in his hand and a shield on his back.
The sun glinted off his armor, temporarily blinding Zak.
?None shall pass from my gaze. No criminal shall run free.? He said in a deep, reverberating voice.
?Well, damn. I feel kind of proud now, knowing that Im worthy enough for the greatest knight of the realm.? Zak said sarcastically, wincing at the light.
?Great?? Hiro muttered. ?Will we at least be armed for this job?? He asked.
?Indeed. You shall have your pick of the finest weapons available. Do not fail me.? The king said, a blacksmith bringing out a blanket and laying it on the ground.  In the red tarp lay a wide variety of weapons and shields. Swords, knives, daggers, maces, axes and shields lay upon it.
Hiro picked up a pair of shiny, viciously curved daggers and stuffed them and their sheathes into his belt. Zak picked up a hand axe and a warhammer, judged their weight and put them onto his belt. He then picked up a circular, wooden shield with a large spike in the middle of its iron bass.
He hefted it up and put it onto his back.  ?Alright!? He said, in some reminiscence of cheerfulness. ?I haven?t been this well equipped since I stormed that castle with a hundred other men? Of course, I was the only one who survived but still.?
?A hundred other men, eh?? Hiro asked. ?I could bring back that many.?
?As long as they don?t have the same personalities I?m fine. Those guys were awful. Murderers, rapists, torturers. Gassy too.? Zak remarked nonchalantly.
?Well, they would probably be as smelly. Just with a more rotting and dead kinda stench.? Hiro said, tilting his head back and thinking about it. ?Yep. Definitely a rotting stench.?
?Are you two prepared?? The king asked.
?Erm. Yes, I believe we are.? Hiro said, looking at Zak who nodded.
?Good. Prepare to ride out immediately.? The king said dismissively, turning and walking away from them and into the castle.
The knight strode towards his mighty white stallion, stationed at the stables, munching on oats. The two other steeds there were a black horse, tall but thin and the third was a brown horse built for speed, small and compact but strong.
Hiro took the black one and Zak took the brown horse. They each got on with the skill of one who has just gotten on a horse for the first time. It took them three tries each to mount correctly. By this time, the horses were getting fairly impatient and when Hiro was firmly seated on, grinning, and Zak was just getting on correctly, they both bolted forward and out the great gates.
Zak barely hung on, only one leg in his stirrup while Hiro was enjoying himself, sitting comfortably on the saddle. ?Having fun down there?? He asked, smiling to himself.
?Oh, you know it. So much better then sitting in the saddle. I have a much better view of the dirt down here.? Zak replied sarcastically.
The Knight simply rode past them with his war horse contemptibly.
When Zak was finally able to slow his horse down enough to get on it fully, they were at the border of Orphus.
« Last Edit: June 29, 2011, 01:30:55 AM by Zak »
There is only so much pain that can be taken before the bonds and chains of sanity are forsaken
It is in these lonesome times that we reach towards the light sublime
And from that light we pull the resolution of our time
To begin the end and start anew

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Re: My as of yet unamed fantasy story!
« Reply #3 on: June 29, 2011, 01:40:06 AM »
DOWN WITH ORPH
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« Reply #4 on: June 30, 2011, 01:14:02 AM »
The border was a great river that?s only crossing point was a bridge. The bridge itself was a great stone colossus. Its arches stood well over two men high and it was at least twenty feet from side to side.  The water that it stood as passage over was deep, black and murky.
The trio rode onto the bridge and past it, expecting some bandit ambush. They received none. They warily lowered their weapons and continued to ride along the road towards the high city of Orphus.
About a mile down the road from the bridge the ground began to shake and to rumble. The road cracked and the stones split in half and fell down into the black chasm. From this chasm four specters rose out of the darkness and into the light, their transparent faces those of the long dead and rotting. Zak, Hiro and the Knight immediately came to a halt in front of the chasm and the specters which glew with a strange green light.
?Go back, mortal?? The middle specter told them in its raspy, eerie voice which would remind one of bones rattling and the wind blowing over a dead tree, pointing back to the bridge. ?You are not welcome in these parts? Our master does not accept visitors with? Hostile intentions.?
?Really, now?? Zak asked. ?And your master is???
?A very powerful man.? The specter replied shortly.
Zak paused for a moment. That wasn?t exactly the answer he was looking for. Beside him, Hiro was studying the wraiths and beside Hiro, the Knight drew his sword and shield but dared not jump forth because in doing so he would jump into the chasm.
?Come closer so I might smite you!? He yelled, waving his sword over his head.
The specters looked at one another and laughed a bone chilling laugh. Zak shivered. ?You? Smite us? A knight of the realm slay something that he cannot touch with his sword??  The specter mocked. ?I think not.?
The Knight roared in outrage. ?Do not make the mistake of mocking me, ghost, I wil-!?
?Hey, tin man.? Zak interrupted. ?Shut it for a second. You can go all honorable later.?
?Were it not for my master?s word your skull would be torn from your body.? The Knight snarled.
?He bound you to his service didn?t he?? Hiro asked the specters curiously.
They looked at him sharply. The slithered through the air closer and came to inspect him, surrounding him. ?What did you say?? Asked the wraiths together.
Hiro didn?t seem affected by close radius of the wraiths. ?Your ?master? forced you into his service, didn?t he?? Hiro asked them again, his eyes seemed to understand.
?You? are a necromancer. We sense you in the aether.? The wraiths spoke together. ?You may be able to help us? You can kill him? and relinquish his control.?  They pondered this for a moment and then nodded.
?Er? Sure. I can help you.? Hiro assured them, his eyes lighting up as Zak and the Knight were arguing in the background.
The wraiths nodded to each other and disappeared into the chasm, closing it up after them. Their voices still echoed in the air. Saying ?Find and kill the one who holds our chains. Orpheus???Oi! Where are you going?! I haven?t smited you yet!? The Knight yelled at them angrily.
?Oh put a trouser in it, tin man.? Zak said snapped. ?Now that the hole is gone let?s get into the capitol town and get rid of this leader fellow so we can be free.?
Hiro sighed and rode on. Zak glanced at the Knight, who was at the moment too angry at the absence of the spectral spirits. Growling in impatience he rode forward kicking his horse with his spurs.  Zak followed, his brown steed galloping ahead of them.
There is only so much pain that can be taken before the bonds and chains of sanity are forsaken
It is in these lonesome times that we reach towards the light sublime
And from that light we pull the resolution of our time
To begin the end and start anew