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« on: November 11, 2009, 08:44:08 PM »
Name: yuki sohma
Age: 15
Race: neko-a race where people turn into those of the feline family or into humans with cat ears and tail
Alliance: herself
Biography: yuki is of the newest race neko and only lives on her own side. she is an assassin and the only one left of her race. yuki is highly capable of attacks in spells and magic as well as the ability to trick enemies. surprising as it seems, yuki has an unbelievably beautiful singing voice. she doesn't sing much since she never feels like it. she turns into a black cat at will. in this form she has silver colored stripes and ice blue eyes.
Weapons: katana,scrolls,kunai,shuriken,claws
Equipment: ~
Magic Level: 5
Force Level: 3
Appearance:

Name: aquios draconus
Age: N/A
Race: dragon
Alliance: yuki
Biography: aquios's biography is unknown at the moment. N/A
Weapons: fangs,claws,water,ice,spells,magic
Equipment: orb
Magic Level: 5
Force Level: 2
Appearance:

Name: fang sukizaki
Age: 13
Race: iinu-like neko, iinus can turn into animals. except that in a form on the canis family or into humans with wolf ears and a wolf tail.
Alliance: yuki and herself
Biography: fang is the student of yuki and only listens to yuki. she is the last of the iinu race. both of the iinu and neko races where killed by another race that is unknown. all were killed except yuki and fang, they work together until now. ang went to see the galaxies. and yuki went to see other planets. fang has a dark and secretive personality and hardly opens up to anyone.
Weapons: katana,magic,fangs
Equipment: ~
Magic Level: 4
Force Level: 1
Appearance:

Name: lunarus draconus
Age: N/A
Race: dragon
Alliance: yuki,fang,aquios
Biography: lunarus is a dragon born under aquios's blood. her father is flarius a flame dragon. rest is unapplicable. N/A
Weapons: fangs, claws, magic
Equipment: ~
Magic Level: 4
Force Level: 1
Appearance:
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Re: my characters
« Reply #1 on: November 11, 2009, 09:00:06 PM »
It has some problems, most is the power level of each character. As well as the brief bio's and such.
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Re: my characters
« Reply #2 on: November 11, 2009, 10:33:32 PM »
Yuki-power lv-4
aquios-Power lv-5
fang-power lv-3.5
Lunarus-power lv-4.5

And which character bios do I have to fix?
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Re: my characters
« Reply #3 on: November 11, 2009, 11:39:01 PM »
Only two characters per week, Swift.
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Seeing the world through a child's eyes is truly a unique experience. It helps you to retrieve that sense of awe, magic and wonder that you lost as you lost your innocence. Tell me, when was the last time that you thought of those childhood dreams? You know, the ones that you used to spend all your time wondering and fantasizing about? Have you forgotten them so easily? Have you forgotten what it felt like to see something for the first time, to see the magic in the mundane? Everyone says you should take the time to 'Stop and smell the roses'. But you should also take the time to look for the fairies, embrace the wind and enjoy the rain. Just once today, stop for a moment and look into that little piece of nature you pass everyday. Perhaps you may see something you did not notice before.

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Re: my characters
« Reply #4 on: November 12, 2009, 07:14:24 PM »
ok.....so...yuki and aquios then....*sighs....* ^^'
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Re: my characters
« Reply #5 on: November 12, 2009, 11:49:58 PM »
Well, I don't see anything wrong with them. Would you like me to save a copy of your other two requests for next week?

I approve Yuki and Aquios.
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Seeing the world through a child's eyes is truly a unique experience. It helps you to retrieve that sense of awe, magic and wonder that you lost as you lost your innocence. Tell me, when was the last time that you thought of those childhood dreams? You know, the ones that you used to spend all your time wondering and fantasizing about? Have you forgotten them so easily? Have you forgotten what it felt like to see something for the first time, to see the magic in the mundane? Everyone says you should take the time to 'Stop and smell the roses'. But you should also take the time to look for the fairies, embrace the wind and enjoy the rain. Just once today, stop for a moment and look into that little piece of nature you pass everyday. Perhaps you may see something you did not notice before.

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Re: my characters
« Reply #6 on: November 13, 2009, 12:14:24 AM »
Yes please.... Thanks Nisorin!
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Re: my characters
« Reply #7 on: November 15, 2009, 01:05:50 AM »
Approved.
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Re: my characters
« Reply #8 on: February 18, 2011, 06:20:06 PM »
NOTE: editing characters Yuki, and scrapping Fang/Lunarus

Quote from: swiftyuki on November 11, 2009, 08:44:08 PM
Name: yuki sohma Shiotaro
Age: 15
Race: neko-a race where people turn into those of the feline family or into humans with cat ears and tail
Alliance: herself
Biography: yuki is of the newest race neko and only lives on her own side. she is an assassin and the only one left of her race. yuki is highly capable of attacks in spells and magic as well as the ability to trick enemies. surprising as it seems, yuki has an unbelievably beautiful singing voice. she doesn't sing much since she never feels like it. she turns into a black cat at will. in this form she has silver colored stripes and ice blue eyes.
Weapons: katana,scrolls,kunai,shuriken,claws
Equipment: ~
Magic Level: 4
Force Level: 3
Appearance: (THOSE EARS! :D )

Name: aquios draconus
Age: N/A
Race: dragon
Alliance: yuki
Biography: aquios's biography is unknown at the moment. N/A
Weapons: fangs,claws,water,ice,spells,magic
Equipment: orb
Magic Level: 5
Force Level: 2
Appearance:

Name: Bone
Age: N/A
Race: Dragon
Alliance: long enough to know stuffs
Biography: Only known facts: Is last of her kind tosurvive unknown dissapearence in dragon tribe of the dead. Bone is known for looking like a dead dragon, but in all reality isn't. Her magic's strong suits can be revival or dead summoning, if allowed. Though the magics is limited to some degree as it take a lot of energy for the dragon to do so, and depending on how much life force/energy is used, depends on how active this dragon is
Weapons: fangs,claws,special summons(skeletal/dead wise),spells,magic
Equipment: orb
Magic Level: 4.5-ish?
Force Level: 3
Appearance:

Name: Blackout
Age: N/A
Race: Aurorae Dragon
Alliance: None
Biography: Known to use supernatural flares to cause special status aurorae when possible, and is only active at night. Blackout can cause disruptions in electronics within using solar flares to an advantage
Weapons: fangs,claws,solar flares/aurorae,spells,magic
Equipment: orb
Magic Level: 3
Force Level: 3.4
Appearance:
[/qoute]Enjoy~ :3
« Last Edit: February 18, 2011, 06:21:30 PM by Ice Phoenix »
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Re: my characters
« Reply #9 on: February 18, 2011, 07:51:32 PM »
Approved. Where'd I put my stamp for this stuff...Ah, here it is!

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Re: my characters
« Reply #10 on: February 18, 2011, 08:18:01 PM »
lol for originality hiro
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« Reply #11 on: February 20, 2011, 03:36:40 PM »
Re-activated.
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