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Re: Let's Make A Character! [Part 2]
« Reply #25 on: August 26, 2011, 11:17:02 AM »
Zak paused for a moment, thinking and rubbing his chin as Kallen snored quietly on his shoulder.  "Er.... The guy basically lives in Nazi Germany in Space. They really dont like people who dont write what they consider 'real' books, books that are basically about how great the government is and how theyre doing everything right. Not only this but his parents both have an incurable disease that leaves them bedridden and he has to take care of his little siblings. If its not already bad enough, he has trouble making dynamic characters who feel realistic. Then, the government has a crackdown on his caste of people, killing many in break ins." He frowned. "God, the poor bastard..."
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Re: Let's Make A Character! [Part 2]
« Reply #26 on: August 28, 2011, 05:29:14 PM »
"Well, as most of the people where he lives don?t particularly like his art work, my guy would have problems getting any of it sold as he would have to travel long distances to sell his art work to people who would be interested. In addition, he would have no kids or family to pass his art work onto, making him quite the miserable individual. I almost pity the poor sap." Lucien looked at each person in the room before connecting his mind to that of Hawkeye, and speaking what Hawkeye would tell them had he not been tied up currently by previous engagements caused by a  phoenix.

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Re: Let's Make A Character! [Part 2]
« Reply #27 on: August 29, 2011, 06:38:37 PM »
"Good! Now give me a setting. Time, location, surrounding environment."

Hikaru stayed silent, content that Hawkeye had now shut up. She relaxed her spell somewhat, but it still remained within her power.

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Re: Let's Make A Character! [Part 2]
« Reply #28 on: August 29, 2011, 06:50:17 PM »
Wait, Holy fire had a weakness. It was only a matter of figuring out the weakness of said fire and then using said weakness to put out said fire. So, Lucien began to try various spells of water,  including one that would unleash a massive blizzard in the room, one that would pull moisture from the air and use it to rip through his enemies, one that would send icicle missiles at the fire, and then when that failed he remembered something. Holy was technically Light attribute, or light element. So, darkness would be the counter to light and while he had little skill with this particular spell. "Dark Aqua!" Unholy water would clash against the flames, fighting them. This too was a programmed spell, only programmed to keep hammering at the fire until nothing remained of the flames. Of course, Lucien made sure to contain the spells that he was now casting, the ones that would eventually be the one to put out what hikaru herself had crafted, the holy fire that was containing Hawkeye as he really did not like playing the middle man. The Sage Three were all too full of themselves and were idiots for ever thinking otherwise. They needed to learn a lesson, and it seemed the hard way would be the only way Hikaru would learn.  In short, his spells were focused, only able to affect the holy fire currently.

"Time, 1829. Location, a valley. Surrounding environment, a building he has painted himself during his younger days." said Ken, taking over as Lucien was obviously preoccupied.

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Re: Let's Make A Character! [Part 2]
« Reply #29 on: August 29, 2011, 06:55:53 PM »
"Hrm.... 1980s in a different dimension then ours. He lives on a planet that isnt too dissimilar to Earth but like Nazi Germany up to eleven.  Like I said, they burn everything they dont agree with and generally are assholes. He tries to take care of his sick, bedridden parents and his young siblings. Not easy to do when youre a writer that the government blacklists, you know?" Before he covered himself and Kallen as the little battle broke out.

Addler magicked a table over to protect them and got behind it as Isaac, backing away now, started poking Hawkeye with tentacles made of a magical jelly.

"God dammit! Cant you two just give it a rest!?!?" Zak shouted. "Honestly, just stop!"
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Re: Let's Make A Character! [Part 2]
« Reply #30 on: August 29, 2011, 07:04:55 PM »
"2011 earth." James continued scribbling "General environment is of a really high end mansion." He looked at the fighting mages "What, you can't get along?"
Psiko was laughing a little at the back; He knew La- He knew Hikaru's power well enough, and he knew what Lucien was doing was just dumb.

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Re: Let's Make A Character! [Part 2]
« Reply #31 on: August 29, 2011, 07:41:03 PM »
One problem that had been explained to Lucien 5 minutes before. Hikaru's was a controlled spell, she could easily change anything about it with a snap of her fingers and have it do what she wanted. Whereas once Lucien's programmed spells were put out, they would have to be recast and use more of the casters magic. "Did you even hear a word I said?" Hikaru grumbled and snapped her fingers, the golden flames all of a sudden turned white-blue, Spirit Fire. "I wouldn't move around or try anything if I were you. One wrong move and those flames will burn him to his death. His permanent death. Now sit down, shut up, and beg for mercy like the dogs you are." Hikaru looked to all of Hawkeye's characters with a look of disgust.

"Now we're going to mix it up a bit," Regina mumbled trying her best to completely ignore the fighting going on as if it wasn't even there. "Let's go with Zak's world. Oppressive Dystopian societies and rebels are always fun! Jeebus and Hawk's characters are now on that world for this exercise. Your characters meet somehow. When, where, how, what happens, and why? Write it!"

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Re: Let's Make A Character! [Part 2]
« Reply #32 on: August 29, 2011, 07:47:06 PM »
Xavier walked with the aid of his cane through the dystopian world. Art and literature had been banned, it was not easy for him to scrounge together even a meager existence in this world. One day, he would leave if he could. Of course such a thing was nigh impossible and given the circumstances improbable as well since it would lead to his death and/or painful destruction.  Noticing another man, with the aid of his cane he hobbled over to him.
"Hello."
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So, it was a controlled spell.  If Lucien did anything, or the others even breathed Hikaru would use the spell to permanently kill Hawkeye. Or at least that was what Lucien thought, but Lucas knew better he knew enough to know Hikaru would not want to lose such a bargaining chip.  Each of them remained motionless but did not beg. Wait, they would not beg. For it was a matter of honor, but they had become quiet. Almost, too quiet.


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Re: Let's Make A Character! [Part 2]
« Reply #33 on: August 29, 2011, 07:54:46 PM »
"Hold up... How the fuck did he write that while bound?" James mused before returning to his writing pad.

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Charles, or Charlie as he preferred, was lost. Tears streamed down his face as he wandered, the big wide world scared him and he missed Mr Jeeves. He was sobbing lightly until he bumped into a total stranger "I'm sorry mister..." He sounded far too defeated for a child of his age, upset.

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Re: Let's Make A Character! [Part 2]
« Reply #34 on: September 03, 2011, 01:22:40 PM »
Dylan's lanky, unfed form crept through the shadows in a smooth, practiced manner, staying out of sight. He glanced around, searching for anything edible and recording the setting in his mind for another part of his story. The misty, cool night, the dry air and the crumbling ruins made for a perfect story moment.  That was, until he was bumped into by a small child, crying and upset. Dylan grimaced at being found and squatted down to the boy's height. "Hey there, are you okay? Whats your name?" He asked quietly with the calm reassurance he used with his brothers.
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Re: Let's Make A Character! [Part 2]
« Reply #35 on: September 10, 2011, 06:53:18 PM »
An old man, Xavier knew his art work didn?t sell that well. Besides, he was getting too old to continue painting and one day he would die anyway in this dystopian world.  A cane was in his hands and he looked at the young child and smiled at him bending down as best he could and patting him on the head. Then he stood up, even though it hurt. Man these old bones were sore from all this exercise. Smiling at the child once more, Xavier weakly holds his cane as he is in pain all over because of an attack on his art studio earlier. "Man, life is getting tougher."
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Lucien looked up at the spirit fire, trying to figure out a counter.

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Re: Let's Make A Character! [Part 2]
« Reply #36 on: September 24, 2011, 03:47:57 PM »
"Ch-Charlie mister..." The boy sobbed, rubbing tears from his eyes until.. "I MISS MR JEEVES!" He bawled, hugging the strange man as tears rolled down his young face.

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Re: Let's Make A Character! [Part 2]
« Reply #37 on: September 25, 2011, 05:17:37 PM »
(Hawkeye back to Novice courses. Jeebus and Zak continue.)

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