Author Topic: Ares Jolphis (Read 1763 times)

Zero · « **on:** September 07, 2011, 07:34:11 PM »

Ares Jolphis

Age:
2 weeks, but appears 30.
Gender:
Male
Race:
Aionis Android Human Replica
Place Of Birth:
The White Room
OCCUPATION:
Soloist Android/Mage Potential Warrior of Dark
Personality:
Lacking kindness, Ares is one of the more brutal individuals that could exist and has been known to unleash savage beat downs on people for no reason other than it makes him feel good or at least that was the way he was in the past. Now however things have changed for him personality wise in a rather positive direction. He has become kinder, but also more cunning and manipulative and decisive. He is not afraid to act when a situation demands it, and he is good at trickery and deceit.

Alliance:
K Empire
Biography:
In his original body Ares was a criminal known as the Butcher, one of the worst the Narrikians had ever had and his MO was even more horrible than they thought. While his victims were alive, the Butcher would chop off their limbs, let them regenerate and continue listening to the screams of his victims for hours on end. Finally, the police managed to capture the criminal known as the butcher, and while a duplicate was sent to the Mechera a more strict punishment came in mind.
Using the same tech the Mechera used to become mechera, they downloaded his mind sans the killing intent into the body of an Aionis Android Human Replica when the technology to do such became available to them and thus have made the tech their own useful invention. Ares as a result would have absolutely no memories of his past life. He was still however capable of magic, and then the idea hatched in their mind to use such a dangerous criminal as their liason to the K Empire.
So, he was taught the basics or fundamentals of magic once more this time by Allen and he has not had time to grasp the more powerful or destructive spells. Now he is sent to Earth since the Order of Concordia has disbanded, he now acts as a free agent in the Shattered Plane beholden to no single empire and totally loyal to himself. Below is the memories that were implanted into his mind though.
Invented in a lab, Ares was made to be their lead fighter. But, since the Order needed diplomacy with the K empire, he was redesigned and reprogrammed before activation. Thrust into the arena, he fought a couple dozen of the Magi-Androids along with hordes of the other failed techs. Eventually he got the attention of Lucien Dolos. Pleased with the combat capabilities the android possessed, Ares was chosen to represent them in diplomatic matters. The INET system was also installed in him as further modification and upgrade along with an MWCA.

Chosen due to his skills, and because he would be one of the stronger ones out there Ares immediately began education so that he could learn tact, and leadership so that he might complete his assignment as the K Empire Liason. Oh, and he does not like corrupt leaders or nosy groups very much either, but will for the sake of progress tolerate them. Sadly, he lacks the patience not to kill his enemies. The curse on him has also made him more capable of killing.
Ares holds a variety of skills. He can pilot space craft, and do a lot of other things. However, since he does not have those assignments, he does not know how he can use those and remain the representative to the empire of K. Further, he has been taught that the harsher offense will win a war, but what he does not know is that originally he was Narrikian not Aionis Android Human Replica.

Weapons:

MWCA- Built into Ares is an MWCA. This is one of the series two.
Ares has small bombs that he can launch from his fingers, that release a very corrosive gas from them.

[/list] Magic Level: 3.

Fears:

De-activation
Losing his power
Failure

At least three fears required.
Interests:

1 . Hunting
2 making plans
3 . Doing his job
4. exercising authority
5. reading
6. philosophy
7 mastering his magical abilities

At least five interests are required.
Aspirations:

1. Freeing the universe from the Anrufe.
2. Becoming organic
Eliminating crime throughout the galaxy
4. Destroying Interpol
5
6.
7

At least three aspirations are required.
ORIENTATION:
Straight
RELATIONSHIP/MARITIAL STATUS:
Single.
OTHER:

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K2 · « **Reply #1 on:** September 07, 2011, 07:37:51 PM »

Fun. Just keep in mind that it wouldn't be negative dimensional energy that makes you darker (it would, but at the same time it wouldn't), it'd more likely be negative body energy. Also Empty was Merlin, which makes this more interesting.

Approved.

Queen Bright · « **Reply #2 on:** September 07, 2011, 07:51:08 PM »

Get rid of the negative dimensional energy thing. And are you an idiot? Seriously. KING ATRTHUR WAS NOT REAL! He was a legend, a myth! Fiction. Sure, you can make him real since SP is fiction. But then you have to provide backstory, not just assume it's already real.

K2 · « **Reply #3 on:** September 07, 2011, 07:52:11 PM »

Quote from: Magister Hikaru on September 07, 2011, 07:51:08 PM

Get rid of the negative dimensional energy thing. And are you and idiot? Seriously. KING ATRTHUR WAS NOT REAL! He was a legend, a myth! Fiction. Sure, you can make him real since SP is fiction. But thren you have to provide backstory, not jus assume it's already real.

We have a backstory for King Arthur in the RP, as I said above, Empty was Merlin. x.x I said somewhere that King Arthur was Empty's first student.

Queen Bright · « **Reply #4 on:** September 07, 2011, 07:54:37 PM »

Then elaborate on it. I'm not approving just based on IRL myths. Either detail the backstory to add in Hawk's crap or denied.

Zero · « **Reply #5 on:** September 07, 2011, 08:19:03 PM »

Edited out dimensional stuff, and the blade.

Zero · « **Reply #6 on:** September 09, 2011, 05:58:15 PM »

Bump!

K2 · « **Reply #7 on:** September 09, 2011, 06:05:54 PM »

I already approved.

K2 · « **Reply #8 on:** September 18, 2011, 03:50:54 PM »

Bump.

King Jeebus · « **Reply #9 on:** September 18, 2011, 04:47:48 PM »

Okay... How has no one else pointed this out?
How does he do magic? He's a machine.

Zero · « **Reply #10 on:** September 18, 2011, 04:49:09 PM »

Magic producing organ of a Narrikian inside of him.

King Jeebus · « **Reply #11 on:** September 18, 2011, 05:01:24 PM »

How is it even sustained and kept working? He's a machine. Plus he'd be a cyborg if he had organic parts inside him.

Zero · « **Reply #12 on:** September 18, 2011, 05:06:29 PM »

1. Enchantments upon it.

Queen Bright · « **Reply #13 on:** September 18, 2011, 05:28:44 PM »

Quote from: Zero on September 07, 2011, 07:34:11 PM

The Ebony Blade- A blade made out of Aionis, but cursed by Lucien so it can tap the power of South. The blade will also make the wielder more corrupted, and evil however due to what he has used upon it.

No.

How would Lucien even get the power to curse objects to use the power of Hell? Overpowered/doesn't make sense.

King Jeebus · « **Reply #14 on:** September 18, 2011, 05:29:37 PM »

Mmkay and the other thing, the South blade. The power of South is well... Overwhelming i'd assume.
You've two choices with that, either majorly limit the power of the blade OR make it so that if he does tap into the power of South it damn well takes him over.

@Pokemon Master Red · « **Reply #15 on:** September 18, 2011, 05:30:16 PM »

I dislike to a fair degree the 'Magic!' explanation, but it technically can work, so approved, I guess, aside from what Hik pointed out of course.

Zero · « **Reply #16 on:** September 18, 2011, 05:33:21 PM »

1. When you consider Lucien is possessed, by a tome no less that has a ton of information it. But I am willing to edit the blade.

Ebony Blade
A blade made out of Aionis, but cursed by Lucien so it can tap the power of South. The blade will also make the wielder more corrupted, and evil however due to what he has used upon it. It cannot tap much of the power of South, only about 5%, enough to generate the flames of South and shoot those off as shockwaves of energy similar to an attack from MMBN 5, called Screen Divide.

King Jeebus · « **Reply #17 on:** September 18, 2011, 05:44:23 PM »

Even 5% is a helluva lot, just make it just enough for him to summon SOME hellfire.
Pending that and no issue from any other staff members, approved.

Queen Bright · « **Reply #18 on:** September 18, 2011, 05:47:51 PM »

I still want to know how he's tapping Hell. And no the book is not an excuse. It's not like you can say the book has every spell in existence in it.

Also for the magic thing. A magic organ in a robot does not give the robot magic unless there's other organs as well to pass on the magic. Explain the system of the character inside that gives them access to the magic.

Zero · « **Reply #19 on:** September 18, 2011, 05:50:30 PM »

1. He is one of what is below.
2. Ebony Blade removed.
3. Any other problems?

Aionis Android Model Human Replica
Studying the technologies used in the Magi-Androids, Lucien along with other scientists, Silen, Allen and Lord Montreal along with Zane were able to take it in a whole new direction with the help of Harrisia. As they worked on the project for some time, they were able to make human like technological constructs that were based off of the designs of the Magi-Androids, but vastly improved upon. Instead of the constructor system being added to them, they have the MWCA and are capable of magic via magic producing organs inside of them. In addition to that, they have enhanced strength and speed, at least 5x that of your normal every day human. Lasers were added that fire from the palms of the hands to lash out at an opponent. These also can fly thanks to jet type propulsion inside of their feet. They also have tractor beam tech inside of their hands that they can use to lift tanks, or similar and throw them around. Oh and they can assimilate tech used against them with modified devour nanites and with construction nanites, they can also use some weapons. Lucien has made some improvements to this technology via use of built in order warping and shadow travel type enchantments on them, he has also made it to where they unlike others give off no magical signature whatsoever when they cast their spells making tracking them a bit harder. The Aionis allows them to power up even when they can?t plug in as well.

However, they do have limits. Using the enchantments drains their power considerably as does using many of the other features they have at their disposal. Also, they tend to wear out easily if they overuse their abilities.

These have two approvals, and I am working to edit out the Ebony Blade as we speak. Besides that, the Ebony Blade is removed. Also I have done more edits.

King Jeebus · « **Reply #20 on:** September 18, 2011, 06:20:06 PM »

My approval stands if the Ebony Blade is removed.

K2 · « **Reply #21 on:** September 18, 2011, 06:22:06 PM »

Remove the blade and I approve.

Zero · « **Reply #22 on:** September 18, 2011, 06:23:09 PM »

Done.

Zero · « **Reply #23 on:** November 08, 2011, 02:55:23 PM »

Deceased

Admiral Regis Hermitage · « **Reply #24 on:** November 08, 2011, 11:15:26 PM »

Note- Deceased