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The Seraph General
« on: September 25, 2011, 06:59:52 PM »
High Seraph, General Grunder Tepper
Age:
Over 5000
 Gender:
M
Race:
Belkan/Angel
Place Of Birth:
Unknown
OCCUPATION:
North Military General Officer
 Personality:
Grunder Tepper is a very kind-hearted, and caring individual. He displays much compassion and understanding towards most people, but can display anger towards people that go against the lord, and north. He is also a hardened military commander... He is serious and dedicated to his job, and vows to protect North, and its inhabitants, from harm.

Alliance:
North Celestial Military
Biography:
Grunder Tepper is the older brother to the military leader, and warmonger, Mark Tepper. Like Mark, he was also a very well known ISAF leader. He joined the ISAF military Several thousand years ago, got his MD, and worked his way up to the MEDCOM (Medical Command) Commander. During the 1st and 2nd Belkan Wars, he oversaw all of the medics that helped save soldier's lives and worked in the field as a medic, even though he was a Flag officer. After the war, he had gain a lot of respect and a good reputation of preforming numerous selfless acts during that time.

   As seen when during a battle, he rushed out in oncoming gunfire to save a 17 year old boy who was trying fight with a militia. Although he was clipped in the shoulder, he pulled the boy back to their lines and treated him before getting treated himself. When the 3rd Belkan war broke out, he once again rushed to the front lines. There, he saved another well known leader, Alexandere Decadea.

   Grunder has an ISAF kill service record of only 7, but is one of the highest decorated soldiers in the military. He is also one of the few people to be awarded the ISAF Senatorial Medal of Honor twice. After the 8th War, he resigned and went on to serve in the Knights Templar (UP Plot) with his brother as a Knight. During an Operation to find a magical artifact with Knight Captain Mark Tepper, and Knight Commander Razgriz, he was seriously injured when the powerful magic user guarding it tried to kill his younger brother.

   They failed the mission, and his little brother dragged him through the forest to try to save him. Grunder eventually died from his wounds, leaving Mark Tepper heart broken. He was judged and sent to Heaven, or rather North. There, he had shown his dedication, selflessness, and caring for others, but also displayed his abilities as a leader. He eventually became a Seraph, and a General in North's Angelic military.

After the death of Eli, he was exetremely upset, like most in North, but vows to protect the next lord.

 Weapons:
  • His Mind
  • None
Magic Level:
6, General Tepper has had many years to perfect his magical abilities, and had mastered several art forms of it. He mostly uses it for the protection of North, and to the greater benefit of everyone else, such as healing, and restoration.

Fears:
  • Death of his Younger brother
  • Lucifer
  • The Fall of Heaven
At least three fears required.
 Interests:
  • 1- Researching his magical studies
  • 2- Piano
  • 3- Reading books
  • 4- The well-being of his Angels
  • 5- Helping people.
  • 6.
  • 7
At least five interests are required.
 Aspirations:
No aspirations. He thinks that he has lived a full life
ORIENTATION:
Straight
RELATIONSHIP/MARITIAL STATUS:
Single
OTHER:
No
« Last Edit: April 14, 2012, 03:32:10 PM by Chase »
My Characters
Mark Tepper- lvl 5- CEO of Grunder Ind. -
AI Delta- DAIS Director/Anrufe Member
Supr. Cmndr. Thel Valdamee- Supreme Commander of the Mechera Military/Interim INTERPOL Chairman
Her Grace, the Countess of Gracemaria, Fleet Adm. Aki Sora- Commander of the 3rd Zarethian Fleet
Mark Halsey/Tepper II- High Librarian for the Great Records of Time
Lord Capt. Nathan Church- Vampire, Galactic Inc. Executive VP of Security.
Countess, Tera Mikami- Ruler of New Dementia
Admiral, Regis F Hermitage- Dir. Of the Zarethian Hand
Vice Admiral, Lucien Z. Rychart- Pirate Lord [Zealot]/Demented Prince
Antonio Stradivari, Demonic General of the Army of Hell
AMI, city of Sulvian's AI
Insana, the embodiment of Insanity.

My NPCs-
Lt. General Reginald M. Richards- Zarethian TRADOC Commanding General
Father Resulka- Demented Priest
Mother Kilauea Pele- Manic Priestess
Regent, Octavius- Regent of the City of Insania
CDR Tarkov, Zarethian HIRU Agent
High Seraphim, Grunder Tepper- General of the Armies of Heaven
AI, Marathon- DAIS, MI3 Assistant Director
The Giant Golden Dildo on the Sex Planet aka the Embodiment of Sex (Spoof)



"Living in the past is a luxury none of us can afford. We must learn from it, but we cannot live there. It is impossible to plan for the [now]--the present is ever fleeting. [The future] is where we must live--[the future] is what we must plan for. "   -Unknown

"What do you call a cross between a mule, a hornet and a badger? A hikaru." - Hawkeye

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Re: The Seraph General
« Reply #1 on: September 25, 2011, 07:04:05 PM »
Approved

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Re: The Seraph General
« Reply #2 on: September 25, 2011, 07:33:29 PM »
Magic level is too high.

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Re: The Seraph General
« Reply #3 on: September 25, 2011, 07:36:36 PM »
How?
My Characters
Mark Tepper- lvl 5- CEO of Grunder Ind. -
AI Delta- DAIS Director/Anrufe Member
Supr. Cmndr. Thel Valdamee- Supreme Commander of the Mechera Military/Interim INTERPOL Chairman
Her Grace, the Countess of Gracemaria, Fleet Adm. Aki Sora- Commander of the 3rd Zarethian Fleet
Mark Halsey/Tepper II- High Librarian for the Great Records of Time
Lord Capt. Nathan Church- Vampire, Galactic Inc. Executive VP of Security.
Countess, Tera Mikami- Ruler of New Dementia
Admiral, Regis F Hermitage- Dir. Of the Zarethian Hand
Vice Admiral, Lucien Z. Rychart- Pirate Lord [Zealot]/Demented Prince
Antonio Stradivari, Demonic General of the Army of Hell
AMI, city of Sulvian's AI
Insana, the embodiment of Insanity.

My NPCs-
Lt. General Reginald M. Richards- Zarethian TRADOC Commanding General
Father Resulka- Demented Priest
Mother Kilauea Pele- Manic Priestess
Regent, Octavius- Regent of the City of Insania
CDR Tarkov, Zarethian HIRU Agent
High Seraphim, Grunder Tepper- General of the Armies of Heaven
AI, Marathon- DAIS, MI3 Assistant Director
The Giant Golden Dildo on the Sex Planet aka the Embodiment of Sex (Spoof)



"Living in the past is a luxury none of us can afford. We must learn from it, but we cannot live there. It is impossible to plan for the [now]--the present is ever fleeting. [The future] is where we must live--[the future] is what we must plan for. "   -Unknown

"What do you call a cross between a mule, a hornet and a badger? A hikaru." - Hawkeye

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Re: The Seraph General
« Reply #4 on: September 25, 2011, 08:08:49 PM »
6 is for if a character has earned or has a damn good reason to be.

"He lived a long time and is very talented" doesn't cut it.

Reasons to be 6: higher powered embodiment more powerful than most other embodiments; lived a long time yes, but trained and honed every damn day of that life and focused on nothing more than that magic; was created or gained that much power through several million other mages into one (like Jeebus's character Freya). That's it.

The RPer also needs to be able to handle a lvl6.

Let's see....

Your guy seems like a jack of all trades sorta character and didn't JUST focus on magic or so the bio seems to say. No matter his life span it's useless if magic isn't the only thing he focused on. And.. you don't seem to have the a capabilities to RP a lvl6. Sure you're a good RPer and such. But when the hell have you used magic for battle or proved you know enough to have a lvl6 in magic? None that I've seen.

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Re: The Seraph General
« Reply #5 on: September 29, 2011, 05:32:10 PM »
Hes a General of the highest choir of angels... Of course hed be near gods power. Jesus... Im.only asking for a chance here.
My Characters
Mark Tepper- lvl 5- CEO of Grunder Ind. -
AI Delta- DAIS Director/Anrufe Member
Supr. Cmndr. Thel Valdamee- Supreme Commander of the Mechera Military/Interim INTERPOL Chairman
Her Grace, the Countess of Gracemaria, Fleet Adm. Aki Sora- Commander of the 3rd Zarethian Fleet
Mark Halsey/Tepper II- High Librarian for the Great Records of Time
Lord Capt. Nathan Church- Vampire, Galactic Inc. Executive VP of Security.
Countess, Tera Mikami- Ruler of New Dementia
Admiral, Regis F Hermitage- Dir. Of the Zarethian Hand
Vice Admiral, Lucien Z. Rychart- Pirate Lord [Zealot]/Demented Prince
Antonio Stradivari, Demonic General of the Army of Hell
AMI, city of Sulvian's AI
Insana, the embodiment of Insanity.

My NPCs-
Lt. General Reginald M. Richards- Zarethian TRADOC Commanding General
Father Resulka- Demented Priest
Mother Kilauea Pele- Manic Priestess
Regent, Octavius- Regent of the City of Insania
CDR Tarkov, Zarethian HIRU Agent
High Seraphim, Grunder Tepper- General of the Armies of Heaven
AI, Marathon- DAIS, MI3 Assistant Director
The Giant Golden Dildo on the Sex Planet aka the Embodiment of Sex (Spoof)



"Living in the past is a luxury none of us can afford. We must learn from it, but we cannot live there. It is impossible to plan for the [now]--the present is ever fleeting. [The future] is where we must live--[the future] is what we must plan for. "   -Unknown

"What do you call a cross between a mule, a hornet and a badger? A hikaru." - Hawkeye

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Re: The Seraph General
« Reply #6 on: September 29, 2011, 08:03:25 PM »
You have no skill in magic. You shouldn't have a lvl6 if you don't know how to RP a lvl6. Go take K2s battle class before I approve this.

K2 agrees.

18:30:44 Kaleb I cant really access SP on this computer right now, I can get on the IPad later
18:30:58 Kaleb I will be able to get back on SP more when I upgrade to a newer distro
18:33:09 me Kay. Basically. Lyoko wants a Lvl6 Seraph Angel. I told him he hardly uses magic and doesn't qualify for a lvl6 til he knows how to RP a lvl6. He's trying to say because it's a Seraph general that he'd have that power. I told him to take your battle class first.
18:33:15 me Your say?
18:33:41 Kaleb I agree. he at least needs to take a battle class
18:33:49 me Kay
18:33:53 me Can I paste that?
18:33:59 Kaleb yes
« Last Edit: September 29, 2011, 09:35:32 PM by Magister Hikaru »

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Re: The Seraph General
« Reply #7 on: October 14, 2011, 03:54:42 PM »
I'll make you a deal.. if you approve him, i'll take the battle class, and I'll keep him in North until K2 certifies me.

Is that fair?
My Characters
Mark Tepper- lvl 5- CEO of Grunder Ind. -
AI Delta- DAIS Director/Anrufe Member
Supr. Cmndr. Thel Valdamee- Supreme Commander of the Mechera Military/Interim INTERPOL Chairman
Her Grace, the Countess of Gracemaria, Fleet Adm. Aki Sora- Commander of the 3rd Zarethian Fleet
Mark Halsey/Tepper II- High Librarian for the Great Records of Time
Lord Capt. Nathan Church- Vampire, Galactic Inc. Executive VP of Security.
Countess, Tera Mikami- Ruler of New Dementia
Admiral, Regis F Hermitage- Dir. Of the Zarethian Hand
Vice Admiral, Lucien Z. Rychart- Pirate Lord [Zealot]/Demented Prince
Antonio Stradivari, Demonic General of the Army of Hell
AMI, city of Sulvian's AI
Insana, the embodiment of Insanity.

My NPCs-
Lt. General Reginald M. Richards- Zarethian TRADOC Commanding General
Father Resulka- Demented Priest
Mother Kilauea Pele- Manic Priestess
Regent, Octavius- Regent of the City of Insania
CDR Tarkov, Zarethian HIRU Agent
High Seraphim, Grunder Tepper- General of the Armies of Heaven
AI, Marathon- DAIS, MI3 Assistant Director
The Giant Golden Dildo on the Sex Planet aka the Embodiment of Sex (Spoof)



"Living in the past is a luxury none of us can afford. We must learn from it, but we cannot live there. It is impossible to plan for the [now]--the present is ever fleeting. [The future] is where we must live--[the future] is what we must plan for. "   -Unknown

"What do you call a cross between a mule, a hornet and a badger? A hikaru." - Hawkeye

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Re: The Seraph General
« Reply #8 on: October 14, 2011, 04:13:01 PM »
No. No lvl6 until you can prove to us you know magic. I mean come on, the only times I've seen you use magic it was very godmoddish -.-

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