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Vajik
« on: November 29, 2011, 09:35:34 AM »
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Re: Vajik
« Reply #1 on: December 03, 2011, 01:25:37 PM »
Seems bland to me.
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Re: Vajik
« Reply #2 on: December 03, 2011, 01:32:01 PM »
Bland, but useful. History was the best I could come up with me in a writer's block at that time.
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Re: Vajik
« Reply #3 on: December 03, 2011, 01:37:28 PM »
This is a story, as such sorry to say that artistic skill takes priority over functionality.
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Re: Vajik
« Reply #4 on: December 03, 2011, 01:45:26 PM »
Edited.
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Re: Vajik
« Reply #5 on: December 03, 2011, 08:12:32 PM »
Still pretty bland, but Im not one to talk(seeing as I usually flesh my own empires/races out later on AFTER making them). Approved.
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Re: Vajik
« Reply #6 on: December 09, 2011, 09:22:38 PM »
Bump? Please approve?
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Re: Vajik
« Reply #7 on: February 22, 2012, 02:06:39 AM »
The anatomy confuzzles me.

Humanoid/Human-like with scales.
Okay

Then! More scaling unlike humanoids. And, female and male scaled hide is different.
What.

Humanoid with scales don't have to stop at random patches of scales than skin.
skyrimrefArgonians are reptillian-humanoids with scales all over their body.

But what gets me, other than facial features, is how are the male and female scales varied? Is one round and the other polygonal?
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Re: Vajik
« Reply #8 on: March 10, 2012, 01:13:55 PM »
She's right.
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Re: Vajik
« Reply #9 on: March 10, 2012, 04:51:15 PM »
I reread the anatomy portion, another thing that bugs me is facial expression.

Females can show emotion but males keep a straight face? Does this mean the males lack muscles to change facial expression compared to females? Or do they have "stiff" muscles to a point where it's a pain to change expression?
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