Author Topic: Challenge Character, and one to be adopted later. (Read 1260 times)

Zero · « **on:** February 17, 2010, 05:26:27 PM »

Name: Zero H.
Age: He is about 10,000 years old. He looks to be a 10 year old though as he currently wishes to look 10 so his foes will underestimate him.
Race: Sage
Alliance: Legacy Empire
Biography: Zero was born at a time when Negion was attacked by several great evils all at once. His mother and father feared he would become obsessed with fighting those evils and so they hid him in a normal sage family born without the power of Negion. The family raised Zero as one of their own. When they discovered his true strength in Sage Magic came from his Negion Abilities they abandoned him. Zero upon leaving decided to train hard in Negion and become the very best. He was taken in by his parents once again and taught to control the impulses of Negion traveling through his body. After being taught he was forced to watch his parents and The Grand Negion Temple be sent to Era Valley. He could not go there for it was forbidden to him by his parents to use Negion to teleport to that location. Since that time he has reconciled to his fate. After learning that he could after training 17 disciples in the ways of the Negion Users enter through the gate that was made he decided to journey there. He was captured by the government at about age 40 and experimented upon. He gained the claws, cybernetic enhancements and optic blasts due to one of their experiments.

Weapons: He wields a black and gold sword forged from a metal that has been lost. His sword known as Fierce Determination has felled many enemies. He is more skilled at the fist technique abilities of Negion and also channeling those abilities through his blade. He also has cybernetic enhancements in addition to the ability to make claws come out of his knuckles. Yet another weapon at his disposal is his eyes which fire a sort of cryo beam. NunChucks and of course a few dozen Kunai knives are at his disposal.
Equipment: Ruby Pendant symbolizing the dance with death. Outfit of a Negion Warrior. He also has various jewels sown into his clothes which each contain about a century's worth of magical energy from his ancestors. The ruby pendant also contains magical energy.

Magic Level: 5.5 (He has had a lot of practice)
Psion He can use Psion to some degree. As of yet he isn't very skilled at it's use or creation but he can at times use it better than others. He can also use telepathy, telekensis and other similar abilities in addition to the ability of controlling and manipulating Metal.
Appearance: He wears sandy brown robes that cover his body and beneath them a sandy brown shirt along with sandy brown muscle leggings. In addition to that he wears Kevlar over the sandy brown shirt to protect himself. It is also like his clothing sandy brown however. In addition to that his swords are woven with a glamour that makes them look sandy brown as well when not in use by him. The jewels also appear to be sandy brown.

(He is level 5.5 since all that energy is in the Jewels and making him 6 wasn't an option, I lowered him by half a level. )

Nisorin · « **Reply #1 on:** February 17, 2010, 06:33:15 PM »

lolfail. Level 6 is only permissible on this board for events, and this is not an event.

Also, you don't even know what psionics is. Psion is the term for a person who practices psionics, just as mage is a term for a person who practices magic. Just remember: kevlar is a bulletproof armor, knives and other slashing weapons can still cut it.

Zero · « **Reply #2 on:** February 17, 2010, 07:27:36 PM »

His Magic is level 6 because he has all that magical energy at his disposal.

Nisorin · « **Reply #3 on:** February 17, 2010, 07:33:09 PM »

Why he is a level six doesn't matter in the least. If it is not an event, only level 5 is permissible.

Zero · « **Reply #4 on:** February 17, 2010, 07:35:59 PM »

Would level 5.5 do or would I have to go down another half level?

Orph · « **Reply #5 on:** February 17, 2010, 07:43:26 PM »

The amount of energy doesn't matter, but the skill in manipulating it.

Zero · « **Reply #6 on:** February 17, 2010, 08:18:57 PM »

Name: Zero H.
Age: He is about 10,000 years old. He looks to be a 10 year old though as he currently wishes to look 10 so his foes will underestimate him.
Race: Sage
Alliance: Legacy Empire
Biography: Zero was born at a time when Negion was attacked by several great evils all at once. His mother and father feared he would become obsessed with fighting those evils and so they hid him in a normal sage family born without the power of Negion. The family raised Zero as one of their own. When they discovered his true strength in Sage Magic came from his Negion Abilities they abandoned him. Zero upon leaving decided to train hard in Negion and become the very best. He was taken in by his parents once again and taught to control the impulses of Negion traveling through his body. After being taught he was forced to watch his parents and The Grand Negion Temple be sent to Era Valley. He could not go there for it was forbidden to him by his parents to use Negion to teleport to that location. Since that time he has reconciled to his fate. After learning that he could after training 17 disciples in the ways of the Negion Users enter through the gate that was made he decided to journey there. He was captured by the government at about age 40 and experimented upon. He gained the claws, cybernetic enhancements and optic blasts due to one of their experiments. However he also gained fear of closed spaces thanks to that experimentation since he was forced into a coffin and made to use his claws to get out since it was magically resistant metal they used on the coffin. He has over the course of his lifetime learned how to effectively control his Negion, Sage Magic and the energy inside the orb.

Weapons: He wields a black and gold sword forged from a metal that has been lost. His sword known as Fierce Determination has felled many enemies. He is more skilled at the fist technique abilities of Negion and also channeling those abilities through his blade. He also has cybernetic enhancements in addition to the ability to make claws come out of his knuckles. Yet another weapon at his disposal is his eyes which fire a sort of Cryo beam. NunChucks and of course a few dozen Kunai knives are at his disposal. He has magical art paper along with supplies to bring the things to life in his notebook. He also has 12 animites.
Equipment: Ruby Pendant symbolizing the dance with death. Outfit of a Negion Warrior. He also has various jewels sown into his clothes which each contain about a century's worth of magical energy from his ancestors. The ruby pendant also contains magical energy. In addition to that equipment he has a backpack on his back which contains a variety of guns, swords and other weapons for his own use.

Magic Level: 5.5 (He has had a lot of practice)
Psion He can use Psion to some degree. As of yet he isn't very skilled at it's use or creation but he can at times use it better than others. He can also use telepathy, telekensis and other similar abilities in addition to the ability of controlling and manipulating Metal.
Appearance: He wears sandy brown robes that cover his body and beneath them a sandy brown shirt along with sandy brown muscle leggings. In addition to that he wears Kevlar over the sandy brown shirt to protect himself. It is also like his clothing sandy brown however. In addition to that his swords are woven with a glamour that makes them look sandy brown as well when not in use by him. The jewels also appear to be sandy brown. He has a 350 page notebook full of his drawings.

Nisorin · « **Reply #7 on:** February 17, 2010, 09:03:01 PM »

I am going to have to deny the Psionics part again. You do not know what psionics is OOC, and so you cannot possibly use it IC.

Queen Bright · « **Reply #8 on:** February 17, 2010, 09:10:05 PM »

1. No 5.5 or 6, or I wouldn't even allow 5 with your godmodding. Until you pass my Don'ts class. You don't have the skill to back up higher lvl characters, just judging by the fact higher lvl is all you care about. You STILL can't see that lvl really means nothing, and that a 1lvl can beat a 6lvl, if done right.

2.....No Psion would call Psi, Psion. A Psion is a psionics user, Psi is what's used. And you know nothing of its abilities or manipulation.

Nisorin · « **Reply #9 on:** February 17, 2010, 09:17:11 PM »

I request permission for Hawkeye to use a level five mage. Without it, I doubt he will be able to keep up with the strategies and tactics planned, creating an exceptionally large advantage on my end.

Zero · « **Reply #10 on:** February 17, 2010, 09:21:44 PM »

Name: Zero H.
Age: He is about 10,000 years old. He looks to be a 10 year old though as he currently wishes to look 10 so his foes will underestimate him.
Race: Sage
Alliance: Legacy Empire
Biography: Zero was born at a time when Negion was attacked by several great evils all at once. His mother and father feared he would become obsessed with fighting those evils and so they hid him in a normal sage family born without the power of Negion. The family raised Zero as one of their own. When they discovered his true strength in Sage Magic came from his Negion Abilities they abandoned him. Zero upon leaving decided to train hard in Negion and become the very best. He was taken in by his parents once again and taught to control the impulses of Negion traveling through his body. After being taught he was forced to watch his parents and The Grand Negion Temple be sent to Era Valley. He could not go there for it was forbidden to him by his parents to use Negion to teleport to that location. Since that time he has reconciled to his fate. After learning that he could after training 17 disciples in the ways of the Negion Users enter through the gate that was made he decided to journey there. He was captured by the government at about age 40 and experimented upon. He gained the claws, cybernetic enhancements and optic blasts due to one of their experiments. However he also gained fear of closed spaces thanks to that experimentation since he was forced into a coffin and made to use his claws to get out since it was magically resistant metal they used on the coffin. He has over the course of his lifetime learned how to effectively control his Negion, Sage Magic and the energy inside the orb.

Weapons: Blade of Negion Bris Blade (http://darklordsyn.deviantart.com/art/Seth-s-Blade-37188300)
Chamor Sabers
2 x http://greendruid.deviantart.com/art/Dagger-19143445 http://moorgahaine.deviantart.com/art/Metal-Staff-001-11572087 x 1. His first sword is a Negion Blade. His second is a Retribution Blade and his two daggers are un enchanted. His staff however contains both Retribution and Negion Magic inside it.
http://mmisskkelly.deviantart.com/art/My-Weapons-82282552 will also be some weapons he will have. 50 of each of those will be in his arsenal. In addition to that already formidable arsenal he has 20 animites and a note pad full of drawings but the paper in it is magical so once burned the drawings come to life. In addition to that however. He also has cryo beams at his disposal in addition to the claws that come out of his knuckles for his use in battle.

Gauntlets :
He has one gauntlet that is gold and black. This gauntlet is enchanted with darkness energy and can't be manipulated. This gauntlet has a blood red ruby inside it that contains a century's worth of magic.
He has one gauntlet that is blue and white. This gauntlet is enchanted with light energy and can't be manipulated. It has a blue sea diamond jewel in it that has stored up to 100 years of magic.

Jeweled Cosmic Staff
This staff is filled with an ancient form of magic known as Cosmic Magic and has about 1000 years worth of power inside it. It can do many things including be used to wrap your foe in a sort of magical mesh that they can't break out of. Once that has been accomplished you can shock your foe painfully, throw your foe or choke your foe to death.
Equipment: Ruby Pendant symbolizing the dance with death. Outfit of a Negion Warrior. He also has various jewels sown into his clothes which each contain about a century's worth of magical energy from his ancestors. The ruby pendant also contains magical energy. His gauntlets are also a source of power for him to use in battle.

Magic Level: 5 (He has had a lot of practice)
Others By Practice he has learned how to do Telekensis, Telepathy, Illusions and many other forms of control.
Appearance: He wears sandy brown robes that cover his body and beneath them a sandy brown shirt along with sandy brown muscle leggings. In addition to that he wears Kevlar over the sandy brown shirt to protect himself. It is also like his clothing sandy brown however. In addition to that his swords are woven with a glamour that makes them look sandy brown as well when not in use by him. The jewels also appear to be sandy brown.

Queen Bright · « **Reply #11 on:** February 18, 2010, 10:21:28 PM »

Lose the toenail blades, dude. That's just...ewwww
I still personally think 5 is too high for your skill, but whatever.
Approved when you remove....that.

Zero · « **Reply #12 on:** February 18, 2010, 10:26:31 PM »

Edited. The toenail blades have been removed.

Nisorin · « **Reply #13 on:** February 18, 2010, 10:36:31 PM »

I was willing to approve, but you went and completely changed it over. But, fine, make this take longer than it should have.

Gauntlets: What makes them immune to outside manipulation?

Telepathy, telekinesis, and illusions are all magical techniques which he would have been able to do anyway.

Also, that would be quite a lot of stuff weighing him down. That is, after all, a grand total of 250 throwing weapons. That's at least an extra hundred and fifty, if not two hundred pounds of weight.

Zero · « **Reply #14 on:** February 18, 2010, 10:41:54 PM »

Name: Zero H.
Age: He is about 10,000 years old. He looks to be a 10 year old though as he currently wishes to look 10 so his foes will underestimate him.
Race: Sage
Alliance: Legacy Empire
Biography: Zero was born at a time when Negion was attacked by several great evils all at once. His mother and father feared he would become obsessed with fighting those evils and so they hid him in a normal sage family born without the power of Negion. The family raised Zero as one of their own. When they discovered his true strength in Sage Magic came from his Negion Abilities they abandoned him. Zero upon leaving decided to train hard in Negion and become the very best. He was taken in by his parents once again and taught to control the impulses of Negion traveling through his body. After being taught he was forced to watch his parents and The Grand Negion Temple be sent to Era Valley. He could not go there for it was forbidden to him by his parents to use Negion to teleport to that location. Since that time he has reconciled to his fate. After learning that he could after training 17 disciples in the ways of the Negion Users enter through the gate that was made he decided to journey there. He was captured by the government at about age 40 and experimented upon. He gained the claws, cybernetic enhancements and optic blasts due to one of their experiments. However he also gained fear of closed spaces thanks to that experimentation since he was forced into a coffin and made to use his claws to get out since it was magically resistant metal they used on the coffin. He has over the course of his lifetime learned how to effectively control his Negion, Sage Magic and the energy inside the orb. His cybernetic enhancements allow him to turn his right arm into a sonic cannon along with many weapons including a Neural Disruptor and a cryo cannon.

Weapons: Blade of Negion Bris Blade (http://darklordsyn.deviantart.com/art/Seth-s-Blade-37188300)
Chamor Sabers
2 x http://greendruid.deviantart.com/art/Dagger-19143445 http://moorgahaine.deviantart.com/art/Metal-Staff-001-11572087 x 1. His first sword is a Negion Blade. His second is a Retribution Blade and his two daggers are un enchanted. His staff however contains both Retribution and Negion Magic inside it.
http://mmisskkelly.deviantart.com/art/My-Weapons-82282552 will also be some weapons he will have. 50 of each of those will be in his arsenal. In addition to that already formidable arsenal he has 20 animites and a note pad full of drawings but the paper in it is magical so once burned the drawings come to life. In addition to that however. He also has cryo beams at his disposal in addition to the claws that come out of his knuckles for his use in battle. All these except for his two swords are stored in a pocket dimension. His gauntlets he wears though so they donot need to be stored. Learning many of styles of fighting has made Zero a new type of warrior that no one has ever had to go up against before. He is bold and not afraid of getting his hands bloody in a fight if the need should arise.

Gauntlets :
What may seem to be a set of ordinary but different colored gauntlets is worn by him. Rest assured though these are not ordinary gauntlets. One of the gauntlets which is gold and black has control over darkness energy and although it can be manipulated, the seals on it prevent the 100 years worth of energy that is embedded inside it from being used without at least a level 4 magical ability. This one is used mainly for offensive purposes only.

Gauntlet 2 : Horias
This gauntlet is white, blue and silver. It unlike the other one is endowed with the power of light and holy variety of magic. It is mainly used however to form barriers akin to shields or to use light based constructs to smother your foes with your powers.

Equipment: Ruby Pendant symbolizing the dance with death. Outfit of a Negion Warrior. Gauntlets he wears. Supply of Sketch Books.

Magic Level: 5 (He has had a lot of practice)
Force Level : 0 (Doesn't need it)
Appearance: He wears sandy brown robes that cover his body and beneath them a sandy brown shirt along with sandy brown muscle leggings. In addition to that he wears Kevlar over the sandy brown shirt to protect himself. It is also like his clothing sandy brown however. In addition to that his swords are woven with a glamour that makes them look sandy brown as well when not in use by him. The jewels also appear to be sandy brown.

I edited it to where all but his two swords are stored in a pocket dimension.

Nisorin · « **Reply #15 on:** March 02, 2010, 12:53:26 AM »

As you should know by now, Relorian magic is something that requires something that only racial Relorians have. Therefore, those who are not Relorian cannot use Relorian magic.

Zero · « **Reply #16 on:** March 02, 2010, 08:50:42 AM »

Question Then
On Cosmic Empires how was Hope Star able to learn to use Relorian Shamai? Just a question.

Nisorin · « **Reply #17 on:** March 02, 2010, 01:52:25 PM »

Simpe. That was Cosmic Empires, where the Relorians and their magics are different than here. GE and CE are NOT the same, so stop acting like they are.

Zero · « **Reply #18 on:** March 02, 2010, 04:42:46 PM »

Fixed.

Nisorin · « **Reply #19 on:** March 03, 2010, 06:28:30 PM »

I still believe the 100 years worth of magic stored in so many places would be faaaaaaar too much. Anyone else want to comment on that?

Zero · « **Reply #20 on:** March 03, 2010, 06:33:06 PM »

I will lessen the magic then. I do insist however that you take a look at the other profile I make before I put up my 2nd character.