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Fiske Tyrus
« on: February 23, 2010, 07:09:16 PM »
Name: Fiske Tyrus
Age: 22
Race: Sage
Alliance: Himself.
Biography:
Fiske was born twenty two years ago on the first year of K2323's journey to find Kai to a woman who he met and fell quickly in love with. However; K2323 was forced to continue on his journey to find Kai.. He swore to return to this woman, Cara, but eventually was separated from her and continued on living his life.. Fiske, meanwhile, was raised by Cara, who taught him magic.

Fiske grew up not having a father figure. It seriously was not something he wanted. The thing? He was born as a mortal inside hell, inside the ever-moving campgrounds.. He had to constantly move, and suffer hell-mutation, something which occurred to those who stayed in hell for too long. While he received treatments for the hell mutation, he dreamed of leaving hell and finding his father... But he never could.

Now, with news of the Plex Tournament in hell, it may be Fiske's chance to leave Hell. However; is he getting involved in something far greater?
Weapons: Corege, his lightning sword.

Equipment: Carries many vials and potions inside his enchanted pockets which are actually room-sized on the inside.
Magic Level: 4
Force Level: 0
Appearance:
« Last Edit: February 23, 2010, 07:25:17 PM by Box »

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Re: Fiske Tyrus
« Reply #1 on: February 23, 2010, 07:13:02 PM »
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Re: Fiske Tyrus
« Reply #2 on: February 23, 2010, 07:19:04 PM »
Not approved. Don't you think the bio's a bit too short, K2?
Seeing the world through a child's eyes is truly a unique experience. It helps you to retrieve that sense of awe, magic and wonder that you lost as you lost your innocence. Tell me, when was the last time that you thought of those childhood dreams? You know, the ones that you used to spend all your time wondering and fantasizing about? Have you forgotten them so easily? Have you forgotten what it felt like to see something for the first time, to see the magic in the mundane? Everyone says you should take the time to 'Stop and smell the roses'. But you should also take the time to look for the fairies, embrace the wind and enjoy the rain. Just once today, stop for a moment and look into that little piece of nature you pass everyday. Perhaps you may see something you did not notice before.

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Re: Fiske Tyrus
« Reply #3 on: February 23, 2010, 07:25:32 PM »
Fine, I added to it.

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Re: Fiske Tyrus
« Reply #4 on: February 23, 2010, 08:13:40 PM »
=] Approvified!
Seeing the world through a child's eyes is truly a unique experience. It helps you to retrieve that sense of awe, magic and wonder that you lost as you lost your innocence. Tell me, when was the last time that you thought of those childhood dreams? You know, the ones that you used to spend all your time wondering and fantasizing about? Have you forgotten them so easily? Have you forgotten what it felt like to see something for the first time, to see the magic in the mundane? Everyone says you should take the time to 'Stop and smell the roses'. But you should also take the time to look for the fairies, embrace the wind and enjoy the rain. Just once today, stop for a moment and look into that little piece of nature you pass everyday. Perhaps you may see something you did not notice before.

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Re: Fiske Tyrus
« Reply #5 on: February 23, 2010, 09:10:48 PM »
It's called the element of surprise Nisorin. If he gives it all away in the bio, what's left for surprise in plot later?
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Re: Fiske Tyrus
« Reply #6 on: February 23, 2010, 09:27:19 PM »
Still need to have a reasonable bio. I'm not asking for everything to be shown, just enough for us to get a basic understanding of the character. That's all.
Seeing the world through a child's eyes is truly a unique experience. It helps you to retrieve that sense of awe, magic and wonder that you lost as you lost your innocence. Tell me, when was the last time that you thought of those childhood dreams? You know, the ones that you used to spend all your time wondering and fantasizing about? Have you forgotten them so easily? Have you forgotten what it felt like to see something for the first time, to see the magic in the mundane? Everyone says you should take the time to 'Stop and smell the roses'. But you should also take the time to look for the fairies, embrace the wind and enjoy the rain. Just once today, stop for a moment and look into that little piece of nature you pass everyday. Perhaps you may see something you did not notice before.

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Re: Fiske Tyrus
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