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Re: Haboring The Planet
« Reply #25 on: January 14, 2012, 02:40:08 PM »
OOC: Okay, it's edited now, but if he comes back don't expect him not to be touched. Also, creature of indefinite shape? Wasn't it shaped definitely like a bird?
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Re: Haboring The Planet
« Reply #26 on: January 14, 2012, 02:43:27 PM »
OOC: Okay, it's edited now, but if he comes back don't expect him not to be touched. Also, creature of indefinite shape? Wasn't it shaped definitely like a bird?

OOC: Go read what Phoenix sages look like in their true form, at best it would be vary vaguely bird shaped. Its actions were bird-like, its appearance leaves it more to the imagination.


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Re: Haboring The Planet
« Reply #27 on: January 14, 2012, 02:51:37 PM »
With one last tug of energy Cadinae closed the stars, and it was like they had never happened. The Aserical Shadow began to repair itself automatically, as if a piece of it had just drifted away. After all the years in space it would only make sense that some has been swept away, but needless to say it was never this much before. As the biggest star vanished for good, the seed that had just been a forest dropped into his hand, and he studied it closely.
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Re: Haboring The Planet
« Reply #28 on: January 14, 2012, 05:07:05 PM »
"SIR! IMMEDIATE HULL DAMAGE! A BLAST FROM THE STARS HAS HIT US! WE HAVE A BREACH IN OUR HULL!" a captain yelled as the ship's alarms began to blare.

"ALL HANDS ON DECK! MAKE AN EMERGANCY LANDING ON ONE OF THE MOONS! I'LL GET AUTHORIZATION, JUST GO!" Fiske responded.

As the crew began to work towards making the necessary emergency landing on the nearby moon, Fiske first sent a transmission down to the moon. It seemed that the crisis was over, but major damage had been done to the ship in the process. A good portion of the crew was now dead -- those who had been in sections where the hull was breached would have lost all atmosphere very quickly.

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Come in all parties, this is Fiske Tyris. We are making an emergency landing on one of your moons, I repeat, we are making an emergency landing. If you could please assist us with medical aid after we land, we have some injured bodies up here. Over.
He also sent a transmission back to K City informing them of the situation and requesting they send in a repair crew.

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Re: Haboring The Planet
« Reply #29 on: January 14, 2012, 05:23:14 PM »
(That does no count. Why? Because it was never put up FOR approval in staff chat. Oh sure, I was yelled at for posting it, but those two just approved it without putting it up for approval. The rest of us never got the chance to say what was wrong with it. And oh believe me, there's tons wrong with it that need to be fixed.)

(You posted it. It was also in the staff chat for all the staff to see. You had PLENTY chance to contest it when it was being kicked about. You didn't. Cadinae is approved.)

(I posted it outside of staff chat. No one said "This character is up for approval." Just bitched that it was posted. So no there was no sign saying that we could contest it. It isn't approved.)

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Re: Haboring The Planet
« Reply #30 on: January 14, 2012, 05:27:35 PM »
OOC: Okay, the fact is there may very well be some stuff wrong with the character, but for all intensive purposes it was approved anyway. I don't think we should null the two topics here but we can re-examine the character's approval to determine the FUTURE of the character, what needs to be changed, etc.

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Re: Haboring The Planet
« Reply #31 on: January 14, 2012, 05:30:41 PM »
(The godmodding aspects should be relooked at in the post.)

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Re: Haboring The Planet
« Reply #32 on: January 14, 2012, 05:31:30 PM »
OOC: Okay, make an OOC topic.

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Re: Haboring The Planet
« Reply #33 on: January 14, 2012, 06:39:25 PM »
The thing is, this tree was never a seed and could never be a seed. Its most basic form is a sapling. As it time rewound past that most basic form, it began to grow in reverse, roots up, tree down. The roots reached a forest size of gnarled tendrils of roots. The tree itself reached deep into the earth. How do you destroy what just continues to grow and grow no matter what you do.

The Shadow continued to burn. Because what caused them to burn was not the stars, Aserical Shadow Fire is hat burned away at the Aserical shadow. The stars were gone however, the Gas giant was now safe from certain destruction.

The K Empire Fleet was heading to the very moon that now had a a small forest.. made of roots.

1/6 til moon destruction
« Last Edit: January 14, 2012, 06:39:43 PM by Capxeno »


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Re: Haboring The Planet
« Reply #34 on: January 14, 2012, 11:34:11 PM »
OOC: Unfortunately the sapling was not growing backwards because the time reversal magic working on it had stopped. It also would create no forest for the K fleet because it was on the wrong side of the tattered Aserical shadow.

Cadinae stretched out his hand to the shadow and it began to glow around the fire, and soon had never existed.

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We can assist you. Land in the port of New Ibilin on Crfl.


The Message also came with a basic map to show it's location.

What in the name of Aser is going on?
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Re: Haboring The Planet
« Reply #35 on: January 15, 2012, 12:20:10 AM »
The roots were growing as a result of the time reversal putting it past its most basic form, the sapling. So, even though the time was now normal. It was still growing backwards. The root forest was now larger, over an area larger than most mountain ranges, now thoroughly covering the landing zone of the Fleet. The roots themselves had grow tall enough, to be on the other side of the Shadow as well.

The Aserical Shadow Fire was gone.

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Re: Haboring The Planet
« Reply #36 on: January 15, 2012, 12:53:02 AM »
Cadinae reversed the time flow on the roots, and they shrunk back into the seed. He shut his eyes for a brief second, panting, and realized, why not treat this like the sun, and pushed it even further back. He pushed further and further, until finally it was preexistent, and no longer a problem. He then pulled out a bottle and began to drink from it.
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Re: Haboring The Planet
« Reply #37 on: January 15, 2012, 02:06:23 AM »
OOC: It was never a seed and can never be a seed...


All reverting it back did, was restore normal growth pattern. The renewed sapling quickly grew into a noble tree, and then a forest. The loosened ground made it easier for it to grow, and the temporal stress on the moon was increasing. The forest was now at least two miles in diameter, normal tree trunks.
There was no seed for this to be, thus it could only grow... and grow. It either existed as a reverse growing tree, or a normal growing tree... if growing at this speed was normal.

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Re: Haboring The Planet
« Reply #38 on: January 15, 2012, 02:08:26 PM »
OOC: You said there was a seed earlier because it was past it's most basic form. And I just put it to preexistence. It doesn't exist anymore, so there is no forest, and even if it were a mile, that would be  not nearly enough space to hinder the ships, even if it were on the right side of the Aserical Shadow, do you know how much space there there is in space? Between moons and planets? This is essentially a mini solar system with a forest you are trying to grow outside of. A league is such a wimpy amount of space that I'd almost feel fine with paying no attention. And even so, it no longer exists. I pushed it back so far it was before it existed. Like pushing a person so far back in time the egg in their mother's womb had yet to come to be. Your tree is gone.
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Re: Haboring The Planet
« Reply #39 on: January 15, 2012, 02:56:36 PM »
OOC: You said there was a seed earlier because it was past it's most basic form. And I just put it to preexistence. It doesn't exist anymore, so there is no forest, and even if it were a mile, that would be  not nearly enough space to hinder the ships, even if it were on the right side of the Aserical Shadow, do you know how much space there there is in space? Between moons and planets? This is essentially a mini solar system with a forest you are trying to grow outside of. A league is such a wimpy amount of space that I'd almost feel fine with paying no attention. And even so, it no longer exists. I pushed it back so far it was before it existed. Like pushing a person so far back in time the egg in their mother's womb had yet to come to be. Your tree is gone.

OOC: Already talked to K2. All that does is reverse how it grows. Not a solution. So, your choice either it grows roots up or roots down. Also, you do not understand how big it can get. there is a simple solution, but I am not giving it.
« Last Edit: January 15, 2012, 02:57:43 PM by Capxeno »


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Re: Haboring The Planet
« Reply #40 on: January 15, 2012, 04:46:33 PM »
OOC: K2, please explain how time makes this grow backwards. What this means is that this started out as a giant forest of roots and shrank until it was a sapling (and apparently right before, a seed). He's literally pushing it back in time, not simplifying its form. In this form he can't even do that. Because of this (and because you want it )
OOC: It was never a seed and can never be a seed...
can we agree that the seed thing never happened: that he just made it a sapling?
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Re: Haboring The Planet
« Reply #41 on: January 15, 2012, 04:48:37 PM »
OOC: Time has nothing to do with it, it just grows backwards.

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Re: Haboring The Planet
« Reply #42 on: January 15, 2012, 05:04:21 PM »
OOC: Why? It was brought on by being pushed back in time, why would it be growing backwards? Time has everything to do with it. Time is the single cause. Time is why it's happening at all.
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Re: Haboring The Planet
« Reply #43 on: January 15, 2012, 05:09:11 PM »
OOC: Sorry, just re-read it all. From what I understand, it naturally grows backwards, so the time reversal field made it change?

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Re: Haboring The Planet
« Reply #44 on: January 15, 2012, 05:20:46 PM »
OOC: Sorry, just re-read it all. From what I understand, it naturally grows backwards, so the time reversal field made it change?

OOC: Basically, every time he rewinds time to before the sapling stage it grows opposite of how it was growing. It started growing normally, but when he tried rewinding time to it being a seed, it grew roots up instead. The tree is just creation, it won't stop just because time has been rewound. all that does is reverse the growth method.


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Re: Haboring The Planet
« Reply #45 on: January 15, 2012, 05:24:21 PM »
OOC: I see. Proceed.

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Re: Haboring The Planet
« Reply #46 on: January 15, 2012, 05:26:32 PM »
OOC: So wait, what's the verdict? Is the fire sapling tree thing still there or gone?

Also, Cap, why do you even want to destroy my planet?
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Re: Haboring The Planet
« Reply #47 on: January 15, 2012, 05:35:16 PM »
OOC: Cap's post is valid.

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Re: Haboring The Planet
« Reply #48 on: January 15, 2012, 05:38:47 PM »
OOC: But why? Why does sending it back in time make it grow backwards?
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Re: Haboring The Planet
« Reply #49 on: January 15, 2012, 05:41:29 PM »
OOC: So wait, what's the verdict? Is the fire sapling tree thing still there or gone?

Also, Cap, why do you even want to destroy my planet?

OOC: Nik its one of the moons not the planet... and Sliph got what he wanted and left, this is basically what he left to keep you busy while he got away.


Characters: Sliph, Salahiem, Caliph, Kurai, Kuro, Treena, Seither, ~Eli
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