Author Topic: Terrence Kytori  (Read 745 times)

0 Members and 1 Guest are viewing this topic.

Offline Zero

  • Anomaly
  • *
  • Posts: 8,210
  • The Science King
    • View Profile
Terrence Kytori
« on: February 03, 2012, 12:41:56 PM »
Character Name: Terrence Kytori
Age: 20
Gender: Male
Race: Narrikian-Ancient Narrikian
Appearance:
Alliance: Allen Silver- Apprentice
Personality (one paragraph minimum): Terrence Kytori used to have a reluctance to take down his foes with lethal methods, but that reluctance has gone and faded because of the events that have transpired. True he is more merciful than Allen would be as he is not hardened by the events of several wars and tragedies he has seen. On the other hand, this also makes him somewhat soft-hearted towards other people.
Inventory (Weapons, Equipment, Etc): 

Eternity
Before his demise, Lucas had forged one last weapon and it happened to be the Sword Eternity, but it was never finished and so Allen would be obliged to finish the blade. During the training of his apprentice he has presented this to Terrence as his main weapon. The sword has somewhat adapted to Terrence over the eight years. Now he can perform powerful attacks and channel his energies into the sword for even more abilities with it. The Sword is razor sharp and will never dull or rust.

ISPDA- A suit of improved solar powered defense armor.



Combat Level (Average of EC level and physical strength. If you don't know what to do here, don't fill it out and the staff will help you.):
- M Level: 4
- Physical Strength: 3
 
Character's History (Minimum 3 Paragraphs):

A young student at one of the academies throughout the galaxy, Terrence would be raised there and when the academy was shut down, he would be taken in by Allen. Not knowing where his parents were 8 years ago when he was twelve, Allen would begin to train the kid to be his apprentice and eventually his successor. The years would pass and Terrence would become quite the powerful person. Terrence as he trained by Allen would learn of the goings on of the dimension and the various groups that existed. Since his mentor was not strong enough to take on the Anrufe or similar, Terrence decided he would have to do something to help out as best he could. During those eight years, he would practice a lot and train but he could not get over the fact of what he would have to do. Time is a bitter mistress, and as Allen was growing older Terrence knew he could not continue the fight forever against the Anrufe and that at one point or another he might need to be succeeded.
 
So he pushed himself even harder during the training than ever before. During such training towards the end he would receive a gift from Allen and a proof that he had graduated and Allen had nothing more to train him with. The Sword Eternity, a weapon forged by Lucas his brother would be given over to Terrence once it had been finished. Since Terrence had fought with similar blades, this would come as no surprise to him. Garments would be given him and about 3 years ago Terrence would have stopped receiving training from Allen as he had nothing left to teach Terrence in his opinion. So for the past three years, Terrence has been training on his own and trying to take it beyond what his mentor taught him and has been assisting his mentor from time to time.

Now he has decided to actually assist his mentor even more, with the recent events of Setus Prime.
RP Sample (Depending On Combat Level):

« Last Edit: February 03, 2012, 09:26:32 PM by Zero »

Offline King Jeebus

  • The Endearing Bastard
  • Retired Staff
  • Prison Convict
  • *****
  • Posts: 1,510
  • Gender: Male
  • The Overlord of Badass
    • View Profile
Re: Terrence Kytori
« Reply #1 on: February 03, 2012, 01:23:48 PM »
nope.avi
Nothing shows HOW he has these spatial powers, its as if you just added them as an afterthought. It's like if I made Jay completely about playing video games and just threw in at the end "Oh he has time powers". It just seems out of place that someone trained by a magic user would just HAVE Space powers

Offline Zero

  • Anomaly
  • *
  • Posts: 8,210
  • The Science King
    • View Profile
Re: Terrence Kytori
« Reply #2 on: February 03, 2012, 01:28:43 PM »
Edited out the space powers.

Offline King Jeebus

  • The Endearing Bastard
  • Retired Staff
  • Prison Convict
  • *****
  • Posts: 1,510
  • Gender: Male
  • The Overlord of Badass
    • View Profile
Re: Terrence Kytori
« Reply #3 on: February 03, 2012, 01:29:49 PM »
Approved

Offline Zero

  • Anomaly
  • *
  • Posts: 8,210
  • The Science King
    • View Profile
Re: Terrence Kytori
« Reply #4 on: February 03, 2012, 02:07:39 PM »
Now to wait I suppose.

Offline Admiral Regis Hermitage

  • Leader
  • Puppet Master
  • *****
  • Posts: 4,763
  • Gender: Male
  • Brony Captain
    • View Profile
Re: Terrence Kytori
« Reply #5 on: February 03, 2012, 02:08:48 PM »
Approved.
My Characters
Mark Tepper- lvl 5- CEO of Grunder Ind. -
AI Delta- DAIS Director/Anrufe Member
Supr. Cmndr. Thel Valdamee- Supreme Commander of the Mechera Military/Interim INTERPOL Chairman
Her Grace, the Countess of Gracemaria, Fleet Adm. Aki Sora- Commander of the 3rd Zarethian Fleet
Mark Halsey/Tepper II- High Librarian for the Great Records of Time
Lord Capt. Nathan Church- Vampire, Galactic Inc. Executive VP of Security.
Countess, Tera Mikami- Ruler of New Dementia
Admiral, Regis F Hermitage- Dir. Of the Zarethian Hand
Vice Admiral, Lucien Z. Rychart- Pirate Lord [Zealot]/Demented Prince
Antonio Stradivari, Demonic General of the Army of Hell
AMI, city of Sulvian's AI
Insana, the embodiment of Insanity.

My NPCs-
Lt. General Reginald M. Richards- Zarethian TRADOC Commanding General
Father Resulka- Demented Priest
Mother Kilauea Pele- Manic Priestess
Regent, Octavius- Regent of the City of Insania
CDR Tarkov, Zarethian HIRU Agent
High Seraphim, Grunder Tepper- General of the Armies of Heaven
AI, Marathon- DAIS, MI3 Assistant Director
The Giant Golden Dildo on the Sex Planet aka the Embodiment of Sex (Spoof)



"Living in the past is a luxury none of us can afford. We must learn from it, but we cannot live there. It is impossible to plan for the [now]--the present is ever fleeting. [The future] is where we must live--[the future] is what we must plan for. "   -Unknown

"What do you call a cross between a mule, a hornet and a badger? A hikaru." - Hawkeye