Author Topic: ~Eli embodiment request.  (Read 3294 times)

0 Members and 1 Guest are viewing this topic.

Offline Capxeno

  • Prison Convict
  • *****
  • Posts: 827
  • Gender: Male
  • Cursed Thief
    • View Profile
~Eli embodiment request.
« on: February 12, 2012, 07:19:47 PM »
B]Character Name:[/B] ~Eli Xenos
Age: Inconceivable + 8 [But appears 16]
Gender: Male
Race: Embodiment/Incarnation/Devine Entity
Appearance:

Appearance wise, he is a lighter and more kinder version of Koty, because he is Koty's counterpart, God. It was deemed appropriate to have the appearance of Koty's current one, just nice.

-Eyes are purple-ish blue.
Alliance: North (True one is: Sliph)
Personality (one paragraph minimum): ~Eli is a fatherly amending person. Who has a certain air of command without force. Merely the kind of confidence that he is asking not just something that needs to be done of his followers, but what is best for all involved. There is a little room for exceptions, and rarely a door open for debate. While he will listen to those who disagree, with an apprising smile.  All in all ~eli is Eli, with one slight difference. His silent loyalty to Sliph colors his choices in inscrutable ways.
Inventory (Weapons, Equipment, Etc):
Combat Level : 5
- Magic  Level: 5 (never will be above 5, even if he becomes an Embodiment again.)
- Physical Strength: 5
Character's History (Minimum 3 Paragraphs): Eli was sent from heaven as the embodiment of Hope to keep Koty in Line. But truthfully, unknown to others, he is actually an Avatar of god, God himself taking a human form, but limited in power. This was so if Koty ever became unsealed and a threat to the rest of creation, he could stop his other half.

He died in the Plexian war, sealing his memories in his spirit as he was to reincarnate. Here is where his spirit went on an interesting journey, lured by Sliph into a new prepared vassal, Eli was born to a new body without his memories unsealed. Sliph experimented on him in many ways, and even with this treatment, this Eli had a well developed loyalty for Sliph. ~Eli memories were unsealed with no emotional attachment to them, while he does have Eli memories he does not care too much about them. He is undyingly loyal to Sliph, and willing sacrificed his life for Sliph, the one thing ~Eli accomplished even being born into Sliph lab, was that he had not sinned, strange.

Upon returning to the North he sat upon his throne. You see Eli had set his successor to be his reincarnation should he die. Since this is his reincarnation, ~Eli is his successor. He will transform into the Embodiment of Creation again in front of all the Seraphim. His throne becoming his “item”.

Due to Sliph’s experiments, he is also slightly weaker than he would have been, this is expressed through him being a level 5, instead of 6.

RP Sample (Depending On Combat Level):

A higher class Marid Merchant approached the new arrivals, the Marid seemed to be a normal humanoid person that was vaguely male. Casing the new arrival, the Merchant used rather weak magic to conjure a table in-front of the two, it was filled with trinkets, jewelry, artistic weapons, and of coarse unique foods. This table was mostly dragon-themed in terms of the wares. However, there were also Pieces inspired by the history of the Marid, including a shash that told in stitched art how the Anrufe woke up their creator, a jewel was sewn into it. Obviously, it did not tell the tale in words, but in stylistic pictures.

"Would you like something to commemorate your travels to this place and what you have experienced in what lead you to here? Knowledge can always use a reminder of its existence." said the Merchant in a respectful tone without actually urging a purchase.


Characters: Sliph, Salahiem, Caliph, Kurai, Kuro, Treena, Seither, ~Eli
Races: Wyvern, Marid, Afreet, Ghoul
Territories: Marid Homeworld, Marid Colony A,  Marid Settlement (Located on Autumnavia), Bula Bula, New Sodom, Cruor(Assimilated Japae), Treena: Earth (Kinda), Aloange, Talar Sphere.

Offline K2

  • Leader
  • Anomaly
  • *****
  • Posts: 10,196
  • Gender: Male
    • View Profile
Re: ~Eli embodiment request.
« Reply #1 on: February 12, 2012, 07:26:05 PM »
I really don't know if I'm comfortable with this.

Offline Admiral Regis Hermitage

  • Leader
  • Puppet Master
  • *****
  • Posts: 4,763
  • Gender: Male
  • Brony Captain
    • View Profile
Re: ~Eli embodiment request.
« Reply #2 on: February 12, 2012, 07:29:41 PM »
Me either man...
My Characters
Mark Tepper- lvl 5- CEO of Grunder Ind. -
AI Delta- DAIS Director/Anrufe Member
Supr. Cmndr. Thel Valdamee- Supreme Commander of the Mechera Military/Interim INTERPOL Chairman
Her Grace, the Countess of Gracemaria, Fleet Adm. Aki Sora- Commander of the 3rd Zarethian Fleet
Mark Halsey/Tepper II- High Librarian for the Great Records of Time
Lord Capt. Nathan Church- Vampire, Galactic Inc. Executive VP of Security.
Countess, Tera Mikami- Ruler of New Dementia
Admiral, Regis F Hermitage- Dir. Of the Zarethian Hand
Vice Admiral, Lucien Z. Rychart- Pirate Lord [Zealot]/Demented Prince
Antonio Stradivari, Demonic General of the Army of Hell
AMI, city of Sulvian's AI
Insana, the embodiment of Insanity.

My NPCs-
Lt. General Reginald M. Richards- Zarethian TRADOC Commanding General
Father Resulka- Demented Priest
Mother Kilauea Pele- Manic Priestess
Regent, Octavius- Regent of the City of Insania
CDR Tarkov, Zarethian HIRU Agent
High Seraphim, Grunder Tepper- General of the Armies of Heaven
AI, Marathon- DAIS, MI3 Assistant Director
The Giant Golden Dildo on the Sex Planet aka the Embodiment of Sex (Spoof)



"Living in the past is a luxury none of us can afford. We must learn from it, but we cannot live there. It is impossible to plan for the [now]--the present is ever fleeting. [The future] is where we must live--[the future] is what we must plan for. "   -Unknown

"What do you call a cross between a mule, a hornet and a badger? A hikaru." - Hawkeye

Offline Capxeno

  • Prison Convict
  • *****
  • Posts: 827
  • Gender: Male
  • Cursed Thief
    • View Profile
Re: ~Eli embodiment request.
« Reply #3 on: February 12, 2012, 07:51:49 PM »
It already been approved that this character does have Eli's spirit and memories. I am balancing his power so that he isn't some God mod Embodiment like before. Additionally, I have done solid RPing for this, not like I asked out of nowhere.

I understand your uneasiness about it. However I have no intention of abusing having an embodiment, regardless of his loyalties. Hell, most of my RPing will be something involving romance. North will remain neutral to the rest of everything else.


Characters: Sliph, Salahiem, Caliph, Kurai, Kuro, Treena, Seither, ~Eli
Races: Wyvern, Marid, Afreet, Ghoul
Territories: Marid Homeworld, Marid Colony A,  Marid Settlement (Located on Autumnavia), Bula Bula, New Sodom, Cruor(Assimilated Japae), Treena: Earth (Kinda), Aloange, Talar Sphere.

Offline Ragnar the Red

  • Prison Convict
  • *****
  • Posts: 1,890
  • Gender: Male
  • There's always a bigger fish. Usually it's K.
    • View Profile
Re: ~Eli embodiment request.
« Reply #4 on: February 12, 2012, 07:59:01 PM »
Epic Picture

But since he's Eli, one of the main godly embodiments in the SP universe shouldn't he be level 6?
« Last Edit: February 12, 2012, 07:59:09 PM by Sir Nik the I- Prince of Fishies (and Cows) »
Characters: Reykjavik (Reyky) Keflavik   Naralia Arnigtaliila   Tessitura Reprise   Salgren Keflavik   Alexander Damian Johnson   Laniq   Calto Rubian   William Benesque   Cadinae Rybic   K   Zaigen Yevitt

  (__)                           ______________/////////////////\
^0  0^------- .__        /_"' // ___________///////////////////
  /|  |   /___\  \    *      '^/    \\\       \\\\\\\\\\\\/
 /OO \ \       / /           <>)

Offline Capxeno

  • Prison Convict
  • *****
  • Posts: 827
  • Gender: Male
  • Cursed Thief
    • View Profile
Re: ~Eli embodiment request.
« Reply #5 on: February 12, 2012, 08:00:29 PM »
Epic Picture

But since he's Eli, one of the main godly embodiments in the SP universe shouldn't he be level 6?

Not anymore. The reasons for that are TBR


Characters: Sliph, Salahiem, Caliph, Kurai, Kuro, Treena, Seither, ~Eli
Races: Wyvern, Marid, Afreet, Ghoul
Territories: Marid Homeworld, Marid Colony A,  Marid Settlement (Located on Autumnavia), Bula Bula, New Sodom, Cruor(Assimilated Japae), Treena: Earth (Kinda), Aloange, Talar Sphere.

Offline Ragnar the Red

  • Prison Convict
  • *****
  • Posts: 1,890
  • Gender: Male
  • There's always a bigger fish. Usually it's K.
    • View Profile
Re: ~Eli embodiment request.
« Reply #6 on: February 12, 2012, 09:36:10 PM »
TBR?
« Last Edit: February 12, 2012, 09:36:41 PM by Sir Nik the I- Prince of Fishies (and Cows) »
Characters: Reykjavik (Reyky) Keflavik   Naralia Arnigtaliila   Tessitura Reprise   Salgren Keflavik   Alexander Damian Johnson   Laniq   Calto Rubian   William Benesque   Cadinae Rybic   K   Zaigen Yevitt

  (__)                           ______________/////////////////\
^0  0^------- .__        /_"' // ___________///////////////////
  /|  |   /___\  \    *      '^/    \\\       \\\\\\\\\\\\/
 /OO \ \       / /           <>)

Offline Capxeno

  • Prison Convict
  • *****
  • Posts: 827
  • Gender: Male
  • Cursed Thief
    • View Profile
Re: ~Eli embodiment request.
« Reply #7 on: February 12, 2012, 10:41:24 PM »
To be reavealed.


Characters: Sliph, Salahiem, Caliph, Kurai, Kuro, Treena, Seither, ~Eli
Races: Wyvern, Marid, Afreet, Ghoul
Territories: Marid Homeworld, Marid Colony A,  Marid Settlement (Located on Autumnavia), Bula Bula, New Sodom, Cruor(Assimilated Japae), Treena: Earth (Kinda), Aloange, Talar Sphere.

Offline K2

  • Leader
  • Anomaly
  • *****
  • Posts: 10,196
  • Gender: Male
    • View Profile
Re: ~Eli embodiment request.
« Reply #8 on: February 16, 2012, 04:34:15 PM »
Look, my problem is this: We told Ino she couldn't have Eli if she left, same with Orph and his characters. She left. She came back and wanted Eli. We told her no. He's dead. Her fault. So it feels kinda low giving Cap this character.

Offline Queen Bright

  • Subgrounded
  • Everyone
  • Mad Scientist
  • *
  • Posts: 5,727
  • Gender: Female
    • View Profile
Re: ~Eli embodiment request.
« Reply #9 on: February 18, 2012, 05:53:57 PM »
Approved.

NerdTests.com says I'm a High Nerd.  Click here to take the Nerd Test, get geeky images and jokes, and write on the nerd forum!

-------------
Characters (In-Play):     Kurai Kuro  Rev  Gen  Rin    Hikari  Relle   Fido  Gwyn(Satya
Characters (Out of Play): 
Races: Phoenix Sages  Gryphon Sages Unicorn Sages  Aetas
Territories:
Kotah & Ezael: Intergalactic Academy
Asura: Records of Time
Rev & Gen: City of Lus
 Gryphon Sages - Aurum

Offline Ragnar the Red

  • Prison Convict
  • *****
  • Posts: 1,890
  • Gender: Male
  • There's always a bigger fish. Usually it's K.
    • View Profile
Re: ~Eli embodiment request.
« Reply #10 on: February 18, 2012, 06:14:16 PM »
Wait, only one approval is needed now?
Characters: Reykjavik (Reyky) Keflavik   Naralia Arnigtaliila   Tessitura Reprise   Salgren Keflavik   Alexander Damian Johnson   Laniq   Calto Rubian   William Benesque   Cadinae Rybic   K   Zaigen Yevitt

  (__)                           ______________/////////////////\
^0  0^------- .__        /_"' // ___________///////////////////
  /|  |   /___\  \    *      '^/    \\\       \\\\\\\\\\\\/
 /OO \ \       / /           <>)

Offline Logan

  • Inventor
  • ****
  • Posts: 469
  • Gender: Male
  • It's up to you to keep hope alive.
    • View Profile
Re: ~Eli embodiment request.
« Reply #11 on: February 18, 2012, 06:17:17 PM »
I want to ask what you guys mean by embodiment?

"It's not a question of can or can't. There are some things in life you just do."

Offline Ragnar the Red

  • Prison Convict
  • *****
  • Posts: 1,890
  • Gender: Male
  • There's always a bigger fish. Usually it's K.
    • View Profile
Re: ~Eli embodiment request.
« Reply #12 on: February 18, 2012, 06:22:57 PM »
Essentially a superpowered magical being, almost like a minor god, embodying something. Some are emotions, and some are elements, Eli is creation.
Characters: Reykjavik (Reyky) Keflavik   Naralia Arnigtaliila   Tessitura Reprise   Salgren Keflavik   Alexander Damian Johnson   Laniq   Calto Rubian   William Benesque   Cadinae Rybic   K   Zaigen Yevitt

  (__)                           ______________/////////////////\
^0  0^------- .__        /_"' // ___________///////////////////
  /|  |   /___\  \    *      '^/    \\\       \\\\\\\\\\\\/
 /OO \ \       / /           <>)

Offline @Pokemon Master Red

  • Sounds like Ozzy Osbourne as a Chimneysweep reading Shakespeare
  • Retired Staff
  • Emperor
  • *****
  • Posts: 3,816
  • Sure, gimme what'eva you got
    • View Profile
    • Undead Rise
Re: ~Eli embodiment request.
« Reply #13 on: February 18, 2012, 09:02:23 PM »
Eh, kinda what Nik said, except a BIT more. Minor God isn't entirely correct, it would be more accurate to say they are, in effect, the Gods of SP. And no, Nik, one approval isn't all that is necessary.
Do you have what it takes to change your destiny, to defy FATE itself?
Let us test the limits of your abilities, and see if you have the WILL to do what no one else tries.

"TARGET VERIFIED-COMMENCING HOSTILITIES!"
-Nineball Seraph


 

-Credit to the magnificent UnStellar for the above two. May all his epicness remain eternally!

Offline Logan

  • Inventor
  • ****
  • Posts: 469
  • Gender: Male
  • It's up to you to keep hope alive.
    • View Profile
Re: ~Eli embodiment request.
« Reply #14 on: February 18, 2012, 10:00:08 PM »
We actually allow gods to play?

"It's not a question of can or can't. There are some things in life you just do."

Offline @Pokemon Master Red

  • Sounds like Ozzy Osbourne as a Chimneysweep reading Shakespeare
  • Retired Staff
  • Emperor
  • *****
  • Posts: 3,816
  • Sure, gimme what'eva you got
    • View Profile
    • Undead Rise
Re: ~Eli embodiment request.
« Reply #15 on: February 18, 2012, 10:08:23 PM »
They only have control over the force they govern(barring magic, of course, but any force can simply not let them use their own). For example, Emptiness cannot control Time,  and Space can't control Chaos, ect.
Do you have what it takes to change your destiny, to defy FATE itself?
Let us test the limits of your abilities, and see if you have the WILL to do what no one else tries.

"TARGET VERIFIED-COMMENCING HOSTILITIES!"
-Nineball Seraph


 

-Credit to the magnificent UnStellar for the above two. May all his epicness remain eternally!

Offline Ghost

  • Prison Convict
  • *****
  • Posts: 1,483
  • Gender: Female
  • Outlier of the forum.
    • View Profile
Re: ~Eli embodiment request.
« Reply #16 on: February 18, 2012, 10:15:25 PM »
Epic Picture
I watching the person who makes those. Her digital paintings of people are beuatiful <3

Offline Ragnar the Red

  • Prison Convict
  • *****
  • Posts: 1,890
  • Gender: Male
  • There's always a bigger fish. Usually it's K.
    • View Profile
Re: ~Eli embodiment request.
« Reply #17 on: February 19, 2012, 12:15:15 AM »
But this one's been contested by 2 members and there's a copy of it in the Accepted Characters area.
Characters: Reykjavik (Reyky) Keflavik   Naralia Arnigtaliila   Tessitura Reprise   Salgren Keflavik   Alexander Damian Johnson   Laniq   Calto Rubian   William Benesque   Cadinae Rybic   K   Zaigen Yevitt

  (__)                           ______________/////////////////\
^0  0^------- .__        /_"' // ___________///////////////////
  /|  |   /___\  \    *      '^/    \\\       \\\\\\\\\\\\/
 /OO \ \       / /           <>)

Offline @Pokemon Master Red

  • Sounds like Ozzy Osbourne as a Chimneysweep reading Shakespeare
  • Retired Staff
  • Emperor
  • *****
  • Posts: 3,816
  • Sure, gimme what'eva you got
    • View Profile
    • Undead Rise
Re: ~Eli embodiment request.
« Reply #18 on: February 19, 2012, 12:41:30 AM »
Yeah...I really dunno why, to be honest.
Do you have what it takes to change your destiny, to defy FATE itself?
Let us test the limits of your abilities, and see if you have the WILL to do what no one else tries.

"TARGET VERIFIED-COMMENCING HOSTILITIES!"
-Nineball Seraph


 

-Credit to the magnificent UnStellar for the above two. May all his epicness remain eternally!

Offline King Jeebus

  • The Endearing Bastard
  • Retired Staff
  • Prison Convict
  • *****
  • Posts: 1,510
  • Gender: Male
  • The Overlord of Badass
    • View Profile
Re: ~Eli embodiment request.
« Reply #19 on: February 19, 2012, 05:52:44 AM »
Look, my problem is this: We told Ino she couldn't have Eli if she left, same with Orph and his characters. She left. She came back and wanted Eli. We told her no. He's dead. Her fault. So it feels kinda low giving Cap this character.

I would like to go back to this point. I was more comfortable with this when it seemed like someone who thought he was Eli because well rightly, Eli should be gone because Ino left.

Offline K2

  • Leader
  • Anomaly
  • *****
  • Posts: 10,196
  • Gender: Male
    • View Profile
Re: ~Eli embodiment request.
« Reply #20 on: February 19, 2012, 10:18:26 AM »
Look, my problem is this: We told Ino she couldn't have Eli if she left, same with Orph and his characters. She left. She came back and wanted Eli. We told her no. He's dead. Her fault. So it feels kinda low giving Cap this character.

I would like to go back to this point. I was more comfortable with this when it seemed like someone who thought he was Eli because well rightly, Eli should be gone because Ino left.

My thoughts exactly. That, and the whole this-is-the-embodiment-of-Creation-and-the-Complete-who-is-all-that-remains-of-the-Perfect-and-Imperfect-besides-Nisorin's-characters.

We actually allow gods to play?

No, the above explanations are inaccurate.

Long before the dimensional plane (existence as we know it) was created, there lived a race known as the Perfect who lived outside of the dimensional plane (North, Erebus, East, and West were the four realms which they inhabited. Only North remains today, above the dimensional plane) in harmony, able to control the forces of existence around them. After creating a companion race, the Imperfect, which later rebelled, the Perfect gave their own powers flesh, and thus the forces became "alive".

The embodiment of Time IS time itself given a body, Anarchy IS Anarchy, etc. A member may request ONE embodiment (though this may change in our request overhaul, to a degree) and the embodiment can not be used to godmode. Generally this means no using the embodiment to the benefit of an empire, and no using the embodiments to kill mortals, etc. Generally embodiments are requested to change the plot in a big way. Last season, they were one of the main points which the plot revolved around. A civil war between the embodiments was sort of a sub-plot to the staff-sponsored events last season revolving around Plex, the embodiment killer.

Offline Ragnar the Red

  • Prison Convict
  • *****
  • Posts: 1,890
  • Gender: Male
  • There's always a bigger fish. Usually it's K.
    • View Profile
Re: ~Eli embodiment request.
« Reply #21 on: February 19, 2012, 12:40:43 PM »
But Eli has already been approved for Cap:
http://shatteredplanes.com/forum/index.php?topic=5413.0
Look, my problem is this: We told Ino she couldn't have Eli if she left, same with Orph and his characters. She left. She came back and wanted Eli. We told her no. He's dead. Her fault. So it feels kinda low giving Cap this character.
I would like to go back to this point. I was more comfortable with this when it seemed like someone who thought he was Eli because well rightly, Eli should be gone because Ino left.
My thoughts exactly. That, and the whole this-is-the-embodiment-of-Creation-and-the-Complete-who-is-all-that-remains-of-the-Perfect-and-Imperfect-besides-Nisorin's-characters.
Characters: Reykjavik (Reyky) Keflavik   Naralia Arnigtaliila   Tessitura Reprise   Salgren Keflavik   Alexander Damian Johnson   Laniq   Calto Rubian   William Benesque   Cadinae Rybic   K   Zaigen Yevitt

  (__)                           ______________/////////////////\
^0  0^------- .__        /_"' // ___________///////////////////
  /|  |   /___\  \    *      '^/    \\\       \\\\\\\\\\\\/
 /OO \ \       / /           <>)

Offline K2

  • Leader
  • Anomaly
  • *****
  • Posts: 10,196
  • Gender: Male
    • View Profile
Re: ~Eli embodiment request.
« Reply #22 on: February 19, 2012, 12:41:39 PM »
That's as a non-embodiment reincarnation.

Offline Capxeno

  • Prison Convict
  • *****
  • Posts: 827
  • Gender: Male
  • Cursed Thief
    • View Profile
Re: ~Eli embodiment request.
« Reply #23 on: February 19, 2012, 06:13:43 PM »
Alright, I understand that Ino lost Eli as a punishment, however Hawk first made this character, and then Ino adopted him and took to the Eli level he was. If we are going off of the point of the RPer owns the soul/spirit, then this is Hawk charter in the same why I may RP Kurai, but she isn't mine to just do with as I please.

If Ino came back, yeah I'd have a lot to work out with her. However, I've already Roleplayed most of this, and I am even requesting it as a level 5 for role-play reasons I'd rather not go into. But the long and short of it is, this Eli is the reincarnation of Eli, and that does mean he is Eli in spirit and appearance but is not a "complete". His reincarnation is the "successor" for the sake of this request. He does have Eli memories.

I will not be Godmodding this character to take over the planes, and I have stated pretty much how I would be RPing him, so I am unsure what is really be contested here.

Also Nik, the only reason I posted in your Calto topic is because I killed him. I would like it, that since you are not a mod or Admin, that you keep out of this. That would be greatly appreciated.



Characters: Sliph, Salahiem, Caliph, Kurai, Kuro, Treena, Seither, ~Eli
Races: Wyvern, Marid, Afreet, Ghoul
Territories: Marid Homeworld, Marid Colony A,  Marid Settlement (Located on Autumnavia), Bula Bula, New Sodom, Cruor(Assimilated Japae), Treena: Earth (Kinda), Aloange, Talar Sphere.

Offline King Jeebus

  • The Endearing Bastard
  • Retired Staff
  • Prison Convict
  • *****
  • Posts: 1,510
  • Gender: Male
  • The Overlord of Badass
    • View Profile
Re: ~Eli embodiment request.
« Reply #24 on: February 19, 2012, 06:28:43 PM »
For me its less along the lines of "HES INOS CHARACTER BAWWW" and more along the lines of it seriously lessens the impact of his death being a result of her leaving.