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Ally, Embodiment of Light
« on: April 16, 2012, 07:56:51 PM »
Character Name: Ally
Age: 39
Gender: Female
Race: Human
Appearance: 5'8" Blonde hair, green eyes, described to be very beautiful.
Alliance: None
Personality (one paragraph minimum): Kind, loving, good nature, and morally good.
Inventory (Weapons, Equipment, Etc): None
Combat Level (Average of magic level and physical strength. If you don't know what to do here, don't fill it out and the staff will help you.):
- Magic  Level: 5
- Physical Strength: 3
Character's History (Minimum 3 Paragraphs): The Embodiment of Light was choose when Akida first began to attack a lost galaxy over a million years ago. She was known to many as the Goddess of Light, and she protected the people who worship her.
During the war with Akida she created 7 weapons embedding her powers in each of them with other Embodiments in the hopes that the weapons could be used to create a seal and seal Akida away though completely drained of her power the local race placed her in complete stasis and in order to protect her sent the pod with one of their own to a planet somewhere far away.
She can't really fight too much but she is smart and cunning. Her light powers enable her to purify those who are warped by Akida's powers. Though there is a limit to her powers because she was unable to purify Teran who was twisted by him.
Ally awaken from stasis in the milky way galaxy 10 years ago where she met a man who told her that the events of the past were going to repeat in this part of the universe and that her power joined with the seven weapons scattered across our sector of the universe would be what can stop Akida.
RP Sample (Depending On Combat Level): Worst example, but it is the only one I could find where I've actually done something. http://shatteredplanes.com/forum/index.php?topic=5501.0
« Last Edit: April 27, 2012, 03:23:57 PM by Logan »

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Re: Ally, Embodiment of Light
« Reply #1 on: April 16, 2012, 11:42:00 PM »
Unfortunately I am obligated to ask. How will this Embodiment help to further the plot of the Shattered Plaens Roleplay?
My Characters
Mark Tepper- lvl 5- CEO of Grunder Ind. -
AI Delta- DAIS Director/Anrufe Member
Supr. Cmndr. Thel Valdamee- Supreme Commander of the Mechera Military/Interim INTERPOL Chairman
Her Grace, the Countess of Gracemaria, Fleet Adm. Aki Sora- Commander of the 3rd Zarethian Fleet
Mark Halsey/Tepper II- High Librarian for the Great Records of Time
Lord Capt. Nathan Church- Vampire, Galactic Inc. Executive VP of Security.
Countess, Tera Mikami- Ruler of New Dementia
Admiral, Regis F Hermitage- Dir. Of the Zarethian Hand
Vice Admiral, Lucien Z. Rychart- Pirate Lord [Zealot]/Demented Prince
Antonio Stradivari, Demonic General of the Army of Hell
AMI, city of Sulvian's AI
Insana, the embodiment of Insanity.

My NPCs-
Lt. General Reginald M. Richards- Zarethian TRADOC Commanding General
Father Resulka- Demented Priest
Mother Kilauea Pele- Manic Priestess
Regent, Octavius- Regent of the City of Insania
CDR Tarkov, Zarethian HIRU Agent
High Seraphim, Grunder Tepper- General of the Armies of Heaven
AI, Marathon- DAIS, MI3 Assistant Director
The Giant Golden Dildo on the Sex Planet aka the Embodiment of Sex (Spoof)



"Living in the past is a luxury none of us can afford. We must learn from it, but we cannot live there. It is impossible to plan for the [now]--the present is ever fleeting. [The future] is where we must live--[the future] is what we must plan for. "   -Unknown

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Re: Ally, Embodiment of Light
« Reply #2 on: April 17, 2012, 09:45:24 AM »
http://shatteredplanes.com/forum/index.php?topic=5840.msg51168#new
http://shatteredplanes.com/forum/index.php?topic=5829.0

Right now the best as I can say is simply that if you read those two topics, the character bio and the story you should have a better understanding why she is needed and how she will help.

Akida has the power to bring evil in one's soul and heart, while Ally has the power to purify it and reverse it back to the original state. She sort of is a fail safe against the Akida character. She also is skilled with sealing spells and in the end when I am tired of the role Akida gives me will be the one who seals him away. She also has great importance in the subplot with K2 about the super weapon.
« Last Edit: April 17, 2012, 12:27:30 PM by Logan »

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Re: Ally, Embodiment of Light
« Reply #3 on: April 18, 2012, 01:25:17 PM »
Bump. 29 views and no replies other than Chase's...

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Re: Ally, Embodiment of Light
« Reply #4 on: April 18, 2012, 01:37:17 PM »
Eh, I have problems but not with this character. While its a good read, a lot of that stuff in the Dossier topic seems to most be a example of Informed Ability(if you don't read TV Tropes, its essentially stuff that's confirmed to happen...Offscreen and before the current setting, while the character might not actually be that good, or at least hasn't yet shown a example of proof that they're capable of it). However, I get that its a petty concern considering I've done that kinda thing before myself aaaaaand you may very well be able to pull it off ICly(and well, at that). Plus the issue itself isn't with this character anyways(and again, even if it were I shouldn't let it influence me), sooooo Approved.
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Re: Ally, Embodiment of Light
« Reply #5 on: April 18, 2012, 01:43:35 PM »
Well I'm hoping I can pull this off. This idea has been floating around in my head since back at GE, back then though I wouldn't be able to explain why she was so powerful. So the Embodiment gives a whole new way to tell this story. I think the story should be pretty good because with it I could probably cause hell enough to start a major war. It's also two parts. Once K2's Devyn character is accepted the first part would be that he is building a super weapon that will destroy reality itself. (Which I'm pretty sure we are going to pool together to stop this.) and then the second part will be sort of an invasion to our space by Akida's forces in general. (Meaning people who turned evil and are now under the three's control.) I haven't figured out how Atama and Teran could work yet, but I'm working on it. Akida of course won't be killed or sealed away during these events but at a later time I'm going to put Ally too use to seal him away when I get bored of him and what not. Of course Ally will be important during the super weapon and invasion plots.

Also so we are clear every thing in the dossier topic already happened many years ago. It really was more or less a back story on why Akida is feared. The topic itself isn't going to come to pass here too much I have planned for the weapons to be a part of Akida's downfall and to try to create the seeds that will destroy a few worlds but aside from that the dossier really isn't any evidence of what will happen since we all will be an effect on this. Some ways the way the story will play out is sort of like Mass Effect series. We start off thinking we have the bad guy devyn, then we find out that Akida was in fact pulling the strings. The next part would be gathering strength and fighting Akida off (Mass Effect 2. Or a form of it.) and then finally the invasion force (Mass Effect 3, just without the crappy ending.). The whole point is to let everyone effect this plot. All I have is the idea of what direction to take it. But how it gets there is up to everyone based on their actions.
« Last Edit: April 18, 2012, 01:50:28 PM by Logan »

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Re: Ally, Embodiment of Light
« Reply #6 on: April 19, 2012, 11:32:20 AM »
BUMP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Re: Ally, Embodiment of Light
« Reply #7 on: April 19, 2012, 11:37:05 AM »
I dont have any problems. Approved.
My Characters
Mark Tepper- lvl 5- CEO of Grunder Ind. -
AI Delta- DAIS Director/Anrufe Member
Supr. Cmndr. Thel Valdamee- Supreme Commander of the Mechera Military/Interim INTERPOL Chairman
Her Grace, the Countess of Gracemaria, Fleet Adm. Aki Sora- Commander of the 3rd Zarethian Fleet
Mark Halsey/Tepper II- High Librarian for the Great Records of Time
Lord Capt. Nathan Church- Vampire, Galactic Inc. Executive VP of Security.
Countess, Tera Mikami- Ruler of New Dementia
Admiral, Regis F Hermitage- Dir. Of the Zarethian Hand
Vice Admiral, Lucien Z. Rychart- Pirate Lord [Zealot]/Demented Prince
Antonio Stradivari, Demonic General of the Army of Hell
AMI, city of Sulvian's AI
Insana, the embodiment of Insanity.

My NPCs-
Lt. General Reginald M. Richards- Zarethian TRADOC Commanding General
Father Resulka- Demented Priest
Mother Kilauea Pele- Manic Priestess
Regent, Octavius- Regent of the City of Insania
CDR Tarkov, Zarethian HIRU Agent
High Seraphim, Grunder Tepper- General of the Armies of Heaven
AI, Marathon- DAIS, MI3 Assistant Director
The Giant Golden Dildo on the Sex Planet aka the Embodiment of Sex (Spoof)



"Living in the past is a luxury none of us can afford. We must learn from it, but we cannot live there. It is impossible to plan for the [now]--the present is ever fleeting. [The future] is where we must live--[the future] is what we must plan for. "   -Unknown

"What do you call a cross between a mule, a hornet and a badger? A hikaru." - Hawkeye

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Re: Ally, Embodiment of Light
« Reply #8 on: April 19, 2012, 11:38:15 AM »
Awesome. Now I have to wait to figure out what hole I'm going to have her hide in...lol

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Re: Ally, Embodiment of Light
« Reply #9 on: April 19, 2012, 11:53:27 AM »
Lower the magic level. No offense Logan but you haven't really shown you have the capability in RPing magical characters to have a lvl6 at this time. The same was said to Lyoko222 back when he requested one. Both of you use tech all the time and the very few times you do use magic it's never in the ways required of a lvl6. (Strategically and non-godmodding.)

Also given your RPing back in GE and hell, even some of the attempts here with magic...

Until I see better examples of your RPing with magic users, cap it at lvl5.

...I'm also edgy about you getting an embodiment at this stage too as I still see you only a level above Hawkeye, but whatever.

ALSO, personality needs to be a paragraph.
« Last Edit: April 19, 2012, 11:54:28 AM by ~Hikaru »

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Re: Ally, Embodiment of Light
« Reply #10 on: April 19, 2012, 12:04:43 PM »
...I'm also edgy about you getting an embodiment at this stage too as I still see you only a level above Hawkeye, but whatever.

So this means im no longer the second worst RPer here? F*** yeah!
My Characters
Mark Tepper- lvl 5- CEO of Grunder Ind. -
AI Delta- DAIS Director/Anrufe Member
Supr. Cmndr. Thel Valdamee- Supreme Commander of the Mechera Military/Interim INTERPOL Chairman
Her Grace, the Countess of Gracemaria, Fleet Adm. Aki Sora- Commander of the 3rd Zarethian Fleet
Mark Halsey/Tepper II- High Librarian for the Great Records of Time
Lord Capt. Nathan Church- Vampire, Galactic Inc. Executive VP of Security.
Countess, Tera Mikami- Ruler of New Dementia
Admiral, Regis F Hermitage- Dir. Of the Zarethian Hand
Vice Admiral, Lucien Z. Rychart- Pirate Lord [Zealot]/Demented Prince
Antonio Stradivari, Demonic General of the Army of Hell
AMI, city of Sulvian's AI
Insana, the embodiment of Insanity.

My NPCs-
Lt. General Reginald M. Richards- Zarethian TRADOC Commanding General
Father Resulka- Demented Priest
Mother Kilauea Pele- Manic Priestess
Regent, Octavius- Regent of the City of Insania
CDR Tarkov, Zarethian HIRU Agent
High Seraphim, Grunder Tepper- General of the Armies of Heaven
AI, Marathon- DAIS, MI3 Assistant Director
The Giant Golden Dildo on the Sex Planet aka the Embodiment of Sex (Spoof)



"Living in the past is a luxury none of us can afford. We must learn from it, but we cannot live there. It is impossible to plan for the [now]--the present is ever fleeting. [The future] is where we must live--[the future] is what we must plan for. "   -Unknown

"What do you call a cross between a mule, a hornet and a badger? A hikaru." - Hawkeye

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Re: Ally, Embodiment of Light
« Reply #11 on: April 27, 2012, 12:21:17 AM »
Again, change the magic level.

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Re: Ally, Embodiment of Light
« Reply #12 on: April 27, 2012, 03:24:10 PM »
Really for everything she has done, agreed. I was under the impression Embodiments would all be level 6 based on the fact they control a force of existence.

Changed.
« Last Edit: April 27, 2012, 03:24:24 PM by Logan »

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