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Coran Xilos
« on: June 01, 2012, 09:42:06 PM »
 Character Name: Coran Xilos
Age: Twenty Five
Gender: Male
Race: Cyborg
Appearance:
Alliance: None
Personality (one paragraph minimum):
 Due to the environment that Coran has been raised in he is somewhat cold. The brutal bouts have not helped matters and have caused him to be somewhat unpredictable. Some people may say Coran is a bit on the side of insane and has MPD, but he does not. Coran can be spontaneously generous but also can be cruel. Coran does not have a good view of those who would force any kind of slavery on others. It also happens to be somewhat of a matter that Coran possesses the determination to never back down.
Inventory (Weapons, Equipment, Etc):   
Coran has a wide range of equipment that he can utilize including but not limited to the cybernetic arms that have replaced his normal ones and the cybernetic legs that have also replaced his normal ones. Other than that, Coran possesses a wide range of gun equipment and also blades and other ancient style weapons.  There are also pouches at his waist to conceal ammunition or various gizmos should he need it.  In addition, black market technologies make up most of the arsenal he possesses.
Combat Level   3
- Physical Speed:  4
- Physical Strength: 6
Character's History (Minimum 3 Paragraphs):
Born on a desert like world with slave clans, Coran would be raised there. As a slave he would work his way up and fight in tournaments for his freedom starting at about age 10 and receive many wounds from such. But somehow he would survive through sheer strength of will power alone he managed to force himself to keep going. Somehow despite the wounds he had received he managed to keep going, keep fighting on and making himself survive.  Seven matches into the games he would decide it was time to cheat.
Coran would get severely injured in one of the bouts and taken to an experimental doctor to repair him so that he could be ready.  Consenting to the request of the doctor Coran would be the first one the surgery would be done to. Anesthetic would be used on him and his limbs would be cut off?too mangled to be of any actual use and cybernetic ones the same size and weight would be attached where the limbs had once been. The scientist wanted to make sure what he had done would be a success and so he purposely oversaw Coran?s healing.
Coran would recover only to participate in the bloody games once more. But this time the challengers would receive an utter massacre and each one of them would be taken down by him. Using his arms and his legs against them, Coran would manage to bash the opponents and break their spines defeating them. Finally, he was ready and so he planned his escape. Helped by the scientist who was but a slave, Coran was told to go and warn the galaxy of the slavery on the planet and avoid it.  So visiting merchants, he would acquire some stuff from the black market so that he would be armed and ready for the forseeable future.  Now twenty five, he works to make sure he can survive.

 
RP Sample (Depending On Combat Level):

The slavers that had tortured him for so long would be coming once more to force him to participate in the match. As one of them entered, Coran would feel an electrical rod jab in between his shoulders giving him a painful jolt. Getting up on his feet, he would be forced into the regulation uniform of the ones who participated in the arena. This existence was not for the weak. Out here, it was destroy or be destroyed and Coran did not plan to go down this time. The shock had not hurt as much due to the mechanical arms not having pain or pleasure sensors in them yet something he would thank the scientist for.  Fighting in the arena, Coran managed to orchestrate his own escape at a terrible price IE the death of the scientist who had done this for him. 

"It is over.... I am free."

Somehow it seemed like a hollow victory to Coran, like something was not right.


« Last Edit: June 02, 2012, 07:02:59 PM by Zero »

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Re: Coran Mazhaka
« Reply #1 on: June 01, 2012, 09:43:29 PM »
Longer Bio, and i want to see an RP sample for a lvl 6 strength.
My Characters
Mark Tepper- lvl 5- CEO of Grunder Ind. -
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Supr. Cmndr. Thel Valdamee- Supreme Commander of the Mechera Military/Interim INTERPOL Chairman
Her Grace, the Countess of Gracemaria, Fleet Adm. Aki Sora- Commander of the 3rd Zarethian Fleet
Mark Halsey/Tepper II- High Librarian for the Great Records of Time
Lord Capt. Nathan Church- Vampire, Galactic Inc. Executive VP of Security.
Countess, Tera Mikami- Ruler of New Dementia
Admiral, Regis F Hermitage- Dir. Of the Zarethian Hand
Vice Admiral, Lucien Z. Rychart- Pirate Lord [Zealot]/Demented Prince
Antonio Stradivari, Demonic General of the Army of Hell
AMI, city of Sulvian's AI
Insana, the embodiment of Insanity.

My NPCs-
Lt. General Reginald M. Richards- Zarethian TRADOC Commanding General
Father Resulka- Demented Priest
Mother Kilauea Pele- Manic Priestess
Regent, Octavius- Regent of the City of Insania
CDR Tarkov, Zarethian HIRU Agent
High Seraphim, Grunder Tepper- General of the Armies of Heaven
AI, Marathon- DAIS, MI3 Assistant Director
The Giant Golden Dildo on the Sex Planet aka the Embodiment of Sex (Spoof)



"Living in the past is a luxury none of us can afford. We must learn from it, but we cannot live there. It is impossible to plan for the [now]--the present is ever fleeting. [The future] is where we must live--[the future] is what we must plan for. "   -Unknown

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Re: Coran Mazhaka
« Reply #2 on: June 01, 2012, 10:04:18 PM »
Edited.

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Re: Coran Mazhaka
« Reply #3 on: June 01, 2012, 10:08:04 PM »
Sorry bro but it's too strong for you. Lower the magic or physical strength. Or improve your RP sample and show you deserve it.

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Re: Coran Mazhaka
« Reply #4 on: June 01, 2012, 10:11:39 PM »
Approved.

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Re: Coran Mazhaka
« Reply #5 on: June 01, 2012, 10:28:31 PM »
Approved
My Characters
Mark Tepper- lvl 5- CEO of Grunder Ind. -
AI Delta- DAIS Director/Anrufe Member
Supr. Cmndr. Thel Valdamee- Supreme Commander of the Mechera Military/Interim INTERPOL Chairman
Her Grace, the Countess of Gracemaria, Fleet Adm. Aki Sora- Commander of the 3rd Zarethian Fleet
Mark Halsey/Tepper II- High Librarian for the Great Records of Time
Lord Capt. Nathan Church- Vampire, Galactic Inc. Executive VP of Security.
Countess, Tera Mikami- Ruler of New Dementia
Admiral, Regis F Hermitage- Dir. Of the Zarethian Hand
Vice Admiral, Lucien Z. Rychart- Pirate Lord [Zealot]/Demented Prince
Antonio Stradivari, Demonic General of the Army of Hell
AMI, city of Sulvian's AI
Insana, the embodiment of Insanity.

My NPCs-
Lt. General Reginald M. Richards- Zarethian TRADOC Commanding General
Father Resulka- Demented Priest
Mother Kilauea Pele- Manic Priestess
Regent, Octavius- Regent of the City of Insania
CDR Tarkov, Zarethian HIRU Agent
High Seraphim, Grunder Tepper- General of the Armies of Heaven
AI, Marathon- DAIS, MI3 Assistant Director
The Giant Golden Dildo on the Sex Planet aka the Embodiment of Sex (Spoof)



"Living in the past is a luxury none of us can afford. We must learn from it, but we cannot live there. It is impossible to plan for the [now]--the present is ever fleeting. [The future] is where we must live--[the future] is what we must plan for. "   -Unknown

"What do you call a cross between a mule, a hornet and a badger? A hikaru." - Hawkeye

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Re: Coran Mazhaka
« Reply #6 on: June 02, 2012, 05:11:49 PM »
You do realize that when pronounced you named your character the Muslim Holy book, right?  ;D
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Re: Coran Mazhaka
« Reply #7 on: June 02, 2012, 05:13:26 PM »
She's right! Hawk loves Allah!He wants to kill the infidels!
My Characters
Mark Tepper- lvl 5- CEO of Grunder Ind. -
AI Delta- DAIS Director/Anrufe Member
Supr. Cmndr. Thel Valdamee- Supreme Commander of the Mechera Military/Interim INTERPOL Chairman
Her Grace, the Countess of Gracemaria, Fleet Adm. Aki Sora- Commander of the 3rd Zarethian Fleet
Mark Halsey/Tepper II- High Librarian for the Great Records of Time
Lord Capt. Nathan Church- Vampire, Galactic Inc. Executive VP of Security.
Countess, Tera Mikami- Ruler of New Dementia
Admiral, Regis F Hermitage- Dir. Of the Zarethian Hand
Vice Admiral, Lucien Z. Rychart- Pirate Lord [Zealot]/Demented Prince
Antonio Stradivari, Demonic General of the Army of Hell
AMI, city of Sulvian's AI
Insana, the embodiment of Insanity.

My NPCs-
Lt. General Reginald M. Richards- Zarethian TRADOC Commanding General
Father Resulka- Demented Priest
Mother Kilauea Pele- Manic Priestess
Regent, Octavius- Regent of the City of Insania
CDR Tarkov, Zarethian HIRU Agent
High Seraphim, Grunder Tepper- General of the Armies of Heaven
AI, Marathon- DAIS, MI3 Assistant Director
The Giant Golden Dildo on the Sex Planet aka the Embodiment of Sex (Spoof)



"Living in the past is a luxury none of us can afford. We must learn from it, but we cannot live there. It is impossible to plan for the [now]--the present is ever fleeting. [The future] is where we must live--[the future] is what we must plan for. "   -Unknown

"What do you call a cross between a mule, a hornet and a badger? A hikaru." - Hawkeye

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Re: Coran Xilos
« Reply #8 on: June 02, 2012, 07:03:12 PM »
The name problem has been solved.