Re: Placement

[Capxeno]

It is my work. I wrote it in Microsoft word processor at a phoenix public library.

If anything, there should be real proof to back up the insulting claim of plagiarism and the only proof that would acceptable would be a word for word post that dates to before the post it is contained. Since there is no such evidence and it is not anywhere else on the internet then the only logical conclusion would be that it is indeed my work.

If anything all my previous posts have shown greater literacy then the whole of this entire forum. Which started out a a plagiarizing entity, or am I the only one that remembers when this site shamelessly copied Star Gate?

[K2]

Stargate?
We were under.. old management then. That didn't exactly work out, hence our year of downtime.

[Queen Bright]

I split the topic, and moved it to here, so I can seriously argue what you just insulted every RPer on this forum of. So all due....let's dance...

If anything, there should be real proof to back up the insulting claim of plagiarism and the only proof that would acceptable would be a word for word post that dates to before the post it is contained. Since there is no such evidence and it is not anywhere else on the internet then the only logical conclusion would be that it is indeed my work.

So first is first to get this out of the way. You're being over melodramatic now. All I said was you needed proof, because your post in placement was not up to par with your latest RP posts, and every other post you've shown us. What do you do? You take this into an argument, and act as if I'm specifically targeting you. Uh, hell. Moderation leader? Your post was suspicious, I don't know what K2 is smoking, but any other mod would find it suspicious as well. That's like someone posting terrible drawing skills on DA, and then posting a masterpiece. You think the community is going to believe they drew it? Or get pretty damn suspicious?

Take it as an insult if you want, but it's logical to find suspicion in it, with the evidence you've given. You want it believed? Show some proof, obviously that's hard to do, then show it through your other posts. And IF, you are right and you were just lazy with the other posts, then you're treating the forum as a casual RP. As Nisorin said in his post, if you want to be lazy in your posts, go to Gaia, Orph's lazy, and he still posts quality posts, K2's the laziest person in existence, and he posts quality. If you can't, is one thing, but by claiming you wrote this, you obviously can, unless it is not yours. But you claim it is, so you claim quality work, then show it.
Otherwise, we have a right to be suspicious. This is not a target, if anyone else went from bad to good in their different posts, they would get the same suspicion cast. So I suggest you stop saying we insult your work by saying this, as it is our job.

Now.....

If anything all my previous posts have shown greater literacy then the whole of this entire forum. Which started out a a plagiarizing entity, or am I the only one that remembers when this site shamelessly copied Star Gate?

This, is crossing the line.
You're insulting K2, Kai, and myself as creators of the RP, and everyone else on this board who now RPs it.
It did not start off a Stargate rip off, it had elements of DBZ, but hell, what battle RP doesn't start off that way? DBZ Influences many magic and energy RPs.
But to calls us out and say we all copied Stargate?
OH HELL NO! I personally won't stand for that claim.
Read the damn Wiki!

BK ripped off the OK back on CLTCG and made GE before we made an OK re-make. He started GE with elements of Stargate, Star Wars, hell, even Charmed. But because no one wanted a part of the OK but us, we made GE cannon, over the years though, the rips are being weeded out, as they are in the story, you can't just take them out and have things unexplained, they need to be replaced before taken out, such as Force for Psionics, Ori for whatever he replaces it with, Disney World for it's own theme park. You can't just write them out without replacing.
So THINK, before you accuse us.

If anything all my previous posts have shown greater literacy then the whole of this entire forum.

..... Right, I hope you're not talking about your latest RP posts... Your grammar and spelling would make even the worst of English Teachers scream. You'd flunk a test if you put that through as a creative writing assignment, your posts have to be read over 3 times just to realize what they're saying. You completely kill the POV, as a person can't tell if you're doing third person or first person, or some sick in-between
You put everything from your character, INCLUDING what's supposed to be narrative, confusing the reader. You completely ignore the Lore and set storylines of the board like it means nothing. Yes, you can add, but you don't add, you completely change. You ignore everyone else except who you want to reply to. And when these things are brought up, you claim you've showed better literacy than everyone else on the board.....Aha....ha, ha, ha. Don't make me laugh.

Last say on that, K2 and Orph will have a book long before you.

[K2]

what K2 is smoking

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=A7F2X3rSSCU

[@Pokemon Master Red]

If I may make a add to that last part, Hikaru?
I noticed he said,"Then the entire forum".
I can understand a typo, but when you're trying to claim that you have better literacy than the other Netizens around, ya might wanna triplecheck the post. 'Than' is not spelled with a 'e'.
...Oddly enough, we were going right over this in class like two or three days ago. Yay school.
I know, minor thing, but even that can trash credibility, yeah?

[Capxeno]

“The sources of our deepest fears lie with not having control, being unable to alter an event we find great discomfort in. yet we believe in this “fate” a destiny we have no control over. Quite interesting how we contradict ourselves, even down to our very nature. Although in the world of men things are not as “black and white” as a philosopher might like, then again things are never as human’s might like. Within this world of gray sits exceptions to every rule yet for every stereotype there is a perfect example to fit it. Even when something is defined as “righteous” can it be an evil? Or can an evil be “good”?
These questions that are asked seem to not be asked enough. Maybe it’s due to the fears that have nothing to do with control, but with being wrong though even then it’s still a matter of control. Is this reality? Or is this all a dilution dreamed up by a very disturbed individual we being the characters in this person fantasy, or nightmare?
What if someone was born who had a nature of his or her own? What if reality was just what you made of it?”

The sun seemed to melt into the horizon. Burning the very fabric of the sky’s somber blue. Casting a raw beauty over the rough desert that is now covered up by civilization’s unreal hunger for land. The clouds seemed to blaze with the  desire to remain within the bliss of this light. Out of rarity and chance the sky opened its sorrow. Letting this covered desert know its pain. While also destroying the beauty from only a moment earlier. The plants delight and store this much-needed water. Animals scamper running away from the rising waters; snakes drown in their burrows. Humans sleep peacefully in their pleasant homes. Once the sun’s existence was snuffed out, if just for the night. The envoy of insanity would be waking. Adventure will not be a decent decryption of his journey.

The sound of pounding rain on my roof woke me from a restless slumber. Relieved from the land that dug into the depths of my soul. I began wondering how it came to rain in this place. Sure I’ve heard of rain, but in this city? No way. A faint whisper grazed my ears, but its meaning escaped me. Shaking it off like the memories of whatever I was dreaming. Standing up from the floor of a cluttered room, simultaneously wondering why I hated beds so much. Never really could keep a one-track mind. Always running through randomized threads of thought. Again unclear whisper grazed my ear, if I didn’t already know I was insane I’d be worried. Although maybe I should take those pills… never mind, those never did me any good. Nothing is left in this place for me, just a still house in a seething desert. The stark cluttered room suddenly combusted into a strange purple flame before my eyes. Its consumption took everything but myself the flame felt cold as it surrounded me. Something felt like I should be afraid, but no feeling even resembling fear crept through me. That unclear whisper rang through my ears yet again. What is this? Have I lost my mind after these years of solitude? The mirror was the only thing in the room beside myself not reduced to obsidian colored ash.
As I looked into the mirror almost mesmerized by it normal depiction of my room. Since it clarified I was mad, but after looking closely at the me it depicted in its image the first feeling I ever had that could be called fear arose. Sure the brown rugged un-kept hair, the black t-shirt and pants, and empty of expression eyes were accurate. The filed to a point teeth, skull tattoo on the forehead, and the consuming evil grin was different, not me.
That thing in the mirror took a step forward out of the mirror as if it was just a door. Then the alternate version of me dissolved in seconds into a pool of black water. With a life of it own the water sprung forward taking shape of a snake then forcing its way down my throat. An icy burning sensation carved through my body. The strangeness and pain caused me to buckle to the ground. At lest what should have been ground, the hiss of whirling. The sand that replaced my floor started to consume me, pulling me under. A feeling of content washed over me. Maybe I can finally rest, that thought would not last long. Falling into an abyss of nothingness, fear once again clawed into my chest. The whisper now clear as day
“Help me”

The fall slowly stopped, disoriented and confused I found myself standing before a man whose malicious grin quick turning into a gape of surprise. I could feel the wet grass and leaves under my feet. I’m defiantly not home anymore. The ragged foreboding man in front of me started to jeer,
“So this is what magic your capable of? Don’t make me laugh”
Confusion crept over my very bones, what is this madman talking about? A soft delicate female voice with a tone lacking emotion started speaking behind me
“This isn’t right, you’re not an undead…Great, you’ve killed us both”
The confusion seemed to only grow every moment the three of us stood in silence. Finally the foreboding man broke the unbearable silence.
“Well, no move? Then I’ll just cut you down where you stand!” the man charged at me, unsheathing a sword. A feeling like burning embers washed over me, whispering live into my ears with a cold breath. The blade was just about to claim my head when out of instinct I ducked. A grin took over my face when I noticed his sheathed dagger just in my reach. Pulling the bloodied blade from his person, I then slamming it up through the bottom of his jaw in an upward stab, warm crimson blood splashed on my black clothing.
Turning to the origin of the voice I had heard, an albino haired young lady got up stomping towards me.
Still a bit shell shocked I stood there as she raised her hand slapping me a crossed my face
Then she howled, “Who the hell are you?”
Four trickles of blood flowed tepid down my cheek; a hypnotic stinging swirled around the minuscule wounds.
The girl voice rose again “Who are you?”
No words could come passed my lips. I figured this was real; otherwise I would have woken a long time ago. Yet still every fiber in my being would just not move. I found a grain of annoyance in myself to finally push the words past my lips/
“Who the hell am I? Who the hell do you think I am?”
The girl seemed to somber and lose her aggression. The focus of her eyes shifted to the ground.
“I would have no idea, you were supposed to be my summon… who ever you are, you could have cost me my life.” Her voice was extremely contrasted from earlier, it seemed to be plagued with uncertainty.
Thinking back, I wonderer what could have caused this predicament, one moment I stood at home the next I was killing in defense within such a strange place.
“I’m from a place much more uninteresting then this… forest. If anything, you would have caused my death. Be glad I even killed that creep. Would have been  so much easier to die back there” taking a drawn out sigh, I began walking in a random direction.
“Wait!” the albino haired girl yelped, “do you even know where you’re going?”
“Nope” I responded without even turning around.
Out the peripherals of my eyes the man that had or at lest should have died a moment earlier stood with a wild look in his right eye and a blank lifeless look in his other. What could have been called a gargle rang from his mouth covered in a crimson froth, before he charged half-mad towards me. Griping his sword tightly enough to cause his hands to bleed. The sight was enough to strangely cause an unwarranted laughter to rise from my throat. Bracing myself to again take on this attacker, still cracking up with a batty grin.
The albino haired girl chanted in a strange language moments before the man reached me with his blade. The ground before me broke with skeletal hands clawing and pulling in the charging man. Within seconds the hands had completely pulled him underground, a bright obsidian light replacing the ground to it former state. Dazed from all that had happened in a short stint of time, my vision blurred. Collapsing to the ground my consciousness faded.






Here your proof. ^^

[K2]

I'm well aware that this is your book as Hikaru forwarded it to me awhile back (remarkable, BTW, I hope it takes you places), but you may want to consider getting an editor or someone to read over it and fix mistakes. Grammar-wise. I'd be happy to read over your entire manuscript and do such for you (though it may not be with immediate results as I am very busy these days), but you'd do best to hire someone local (shouldn't be a problem for you since you're in Phoenix, a big city) to do a line check of your manuscript.