Character revamps(multiple)

[Ghost]

***Please read this before the character refs***
-There are going to be more requests on this topic for my characters. After these are approved or denied, I will add more characters when their refs are complete. I'm not using SP's Template, so don't complain about it.-


Character Name: Blackout
Nicknames: N/A
Race: Space Dragon
Race Relations: Subspecies of "dragon"
Character Appearance: http://fav.me/d5bz7nr
Character Age: ??
Place of Origin: Space
Factions Associated: N/A
Biography: A nomad space dragon who minds her own business and travels everywhere. It's all she's been doing since she was born.
Personality: N/A
Strengths: Making things in space look pretty via nebulae or aurorae
Thaumaturgy: Y, Space weather.
Fears/Weaknesses: Blackholes ;_;
Relation to Other Characters: Auri's her friend c:
Sexual Orientation: Straight
Relationship Status: Single
Religion: N/A
Misc: Blackout has the ability to create minor space weather. Around a planet, she creates aurorae and disrupts radio signals/waves. When a star explodes of if she's near a star having massive solar flares, she gains a sudden burst of power and has to release it. During this stage (Called Super Nova) she goes into a mad rage and attacks ships at random. Afterwards, she goes into minor hibernation(a month), and her power drops down to a point where she's able to avoid dangers. She's be drowsy from lack of sleep but she's get over it.

Blackout's able to live in space, absorbing nutrient(elements) from nearby stars or clouds. Her body has a magic coating to prevent her blood from boiling and to prevent air inside to expand.

When she dies, she explodes into spacial matter. Like stars, this matter eventually reforms and relives.

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Character Name: Time Jump
Nicknames: TJ
Race: Steampunk Kangaroo
Race Relations: N/A
Character Appearance: http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2012/241/b/2/time_jump_by_swiftyuki-d5cw6j7.png
Character Age: ??
Place of Origin: N/A
Factions Associated: N/A
Biography: A lab experiment with a kangaroo, they made him a cyborg in steampunk fashion. He somehow managed to turn time.
Personality: ??
Goals/Strengths: Time manipulation
Thaumaturgy: Y, time manipulation.
Fears/Weaknesses: Being eaten, sent to a zoo, fire.
Relation to Other Characters: Maybe Jay wants a steampunk Kangaroo I dunno.
Sexual Orientation:Straight
Relationship Status: Single
Religion:??
Misc: His manipulation powers involve touching an object or thing. Touching a metal or fossil will age it in one of two directions. Touchin metal will turn it into ore or into rust. Fossils with age an crumble or revive the preserved creature. Carbon based beings that have died can't be resurrected but can have flesh be a little fresher if needed. Living carbon beings will age to be elderly or will be turned as far back as infantry.

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Character Name:Arachnid
Nicknames: ??
Race: Helix(DNA)
Race Relations:Sub-species of Helix
Character Appearance: http://fc04.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2012/242/e/f/efc4c13a08430ca52ca65c3a576d108a-d5cynmy.png
Character Age: 25 years
Place of Origin: Acanthros
Factions Associated:??
Personality: He's nicer than most helixes and a recluse. But he will be violent if disturbed too much.
Goals/Strengths: Infection things
Thaumaturgy: Y, Viral infection/Regeneration
Fears/Weaknesses: Infections, going insane
Relation to Other Characters: None so far
Sexual Orientation: Straight
Relationship Status: Single(Ladies~)
Religion:N/A
Misc: He's able to tolerate other things more than normal helixes, but he can be as violent as any other helix out there. He contains concentrated Caesium that causes limb growth. these new limbs can and can't be incomplete and the victim has no control of these new limbs. The limbs attack the "host" and kill them.

[King Jeebus]

All approved

[K2]

Approved.

[Ghost]

Character Name: REDACTED
Nicknames: ??
Race: Helix(RNA)
Race Relations: Sub-species of Helix
Character Appearance: http://th04.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/f/2012/242/7/3/73d6d4530ed6a97cc58256bb4469c40d-d5d0t34.png
Character Age: 30 yrs
Place of Origin: Acanthros
Factions Associated: N/A
Personality: REDACTED is a Helix who can get pissed really easily. He constantly goes into rampages of rage.
Goals/Strengths: Killing things
Thaumaturgy: Y, Regeneration/Virus
Fears/Weaknesses: Infection
Relation to Other Characters: He hates everything
Sexual Orientation: Straight
Relationship Status:Single
Misc: He contains concentrated Manganese. His 'virus' attacks the skeletal structure. This causes bone growth and mutation. Spikes and/or "bubbling" occurs in the bone, deforming it. This may puncture or crush organs.

Character Name:Auri
Nicknames:??
Race:Space Phoenix
Race Relations: Sub-species of phoenix
Character Appearance: http://th00.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/f/2012/091/4/b/auri_ref_by_swiftyuki-d4uoul6.png
Character Age:??
Place of Origin: ??
Factions Associated:??
Goals/Strengths: Creating aurorae
Thaumaturgy: Y, Minor space weather
Fears/Weaknesses: Blackholes.
Relation to Other Characters: Blackout's friend
Sexual Orientation:Straight
Relationship Status:Single
Misc: Like Blackout, Auri is affected by super space weather. However the results are different. When near a star explosion or solar flare, she gives off an "aura" aurora. It's a way to release extra energy, but it heavily disrupts signals. When she dies, she also explodes into spacial matter and reforms.

*REDACTED, Auri and TJ are the only "new" characters requested.

[K2]

First one approved, second one needs Hikaru's personal approval.

[Ghost]

First one approved, second one needs Hikaru's personal approval.

She's complaining that I used the term "sub-species" because I wanted a space phoenix =.=

[Queen Bright]

I did not..

<~Hikaru> When I created Phoenix's they came from the original ONE Phoenix. When it chose to die it scattered its spirit which created the Phoenix Sages who ARE PHoenixs that take the humanoid/Perfect form. Where the heck would sub-species go?

[Ghost]

I did not..

<~Hikaru> When I created Phoenix's they came from the original ONE Phoenix. When it chose to die it scattered its spirit which created the Phoenix Sages who ARE PHoenixs that take the humanoid/Perfect form. Where the heck would sub-species go?

unignore me and then maybe you would see my request.

[13:07] <~Hikaru> Uhh I don't think there can be any sup-species of Phoenix..
[13:08] <swiftyuki> there can be :/
[13:08] <swiftyuki> People make a million subspecies
[13:08] <swiftyuki> like ice-phoenix
[13:08] <swiftyuki> those are common
[13:08] <~Hikaru> When I created Phoenix's they came from the original ONE Phoenix. When it chose to die it scattered its spirit which created the Phoenix Sages who ARE PHoenixs that take the humanoid/Perfect form. Where the heck would sub-species go?
[13:09] <swiftyuki> can't I just request my own subspecies
[13:09] <swiftyuki> =.=
[13:09] <swiftyuki> She still has me blocked
[13:09] <swiftyuki> doesn't she
[13:09] <Aether> No idea.
[13:10] <swiftyuki> yeah
[13:10] <swiftyuki> she does

[Queen Bright]

I'm saying where would it have even came from? All Phoenix's came from the ONE.

[Ghost]

I'm saying where would it have even came from? All Phoenix's came from the ONE.

They can still adapt to another environment and "evolve" to another "sub" species. :/

[Queen Bright]

That doesn't change the sage part...

[Ghost]

That doesn't change the sage part...

You know very well I don't know the entire story of the site. And they can still adapt. Aren't there dragon sages too? And look at the types of dragons there are.

[Queen Bright]

K2 didn't start the Dragon Sage race from one Dragon.

[Ghost]

[13:24] <~Hikaru> She wants a phoenix she has to read this and find somewhere the sub-species fits in http://shatteredplanes.com/forum/index.php?topic=4356.0
[13:24] <swiftyuki> diamond's nickname is white coall
[13:25] <swiftyuki> TL:DR
[13:25] <swiftyuki> can someone tell her that
[13:26] <swiftyuki> LOL
[13:26] <swiftyuki> THIS
[13:26] <swiftyuki> Though also not magic, it should be noted that Phoenix can survive in the cold of space through the heat of their own body and blood and breathe through magic.
[13:26] <swiftyuki> SPACE PHOENIX FITS
[13:26] <swiftyuki> RIGHT THERE

[Queen Bright]

... TL;DR? Seriously? You just said that on an RP site? If you can't even read the criteria for having a Phoenix then you don't need one. NOT personally approving.

[Ghost]

... TL;DR? Seriously? You just said that on an RP site? If you can't even read the criteria for having a Phoenix then you don't need one. NOT personally approving.

you can summarize can't you? I'm working on commissions at the same time I'm trying to reason with you.

*EDIT*[13:28] <Aether> If said phoenix can already survive like that, there'd be no need to make a sub species off it.
[13:28] <swiftyuki> I want mine to be a minor sub species
[13:28] <swiftyuki> because they are exclusive to space
[13:28] <swiftyuki> I mean
[13:28] <swiftyuki> I can say subspecies because of that
[13:29] <Aether> We don't call Eskimos a sub species of humans because they've adapted to living in cold conditions for a long period of time.
[13:29] <swiftyuki> that's like the only difference that space phoenixes have in comparison to hers
[13:29] <swiftyuki> We have races
[13:29] <swiftyuki> yes
[13:29] <swiftyuki> but, A lot don't realise that naming a race is naming a sub-species
[13:29] <~Hikaru> You don't say TL;DR on a damn RP site..
[13:29] <swiftyuki> Pygmies for one are a supspecies of homosapien

[Ghost]

I just remembered something. When my profile was titled as "ice phoenix" we fought on IRC about how phoenixes are fire only and ho they aren't. When I got off IRC, hawk quoted YOU directly from IRC saying I could have an ice phoenix. I took the assumption I can make a space phoenix instead of an ice phoenix. And I could have it as long as it wasn't connected to the sages. And nowhere in the request did I say it was a sage. Hell, none of my magic users are sages. They don't have to be, and they aren't/

[Queen Bright]

..That was long before I actually thought out the Phoenix Sages and nor did I say it the way you're saying it. ALSO yes all Phoeix's have to be sages because all Phoenix's originally came from the ONE Phoenix who died and split itself into the Phoenix Sages.. There has never been a Phoenix that IS NOT a sage.

[Ghost]

..That was long before I actually thought out the Phoenix Sages and nor did I say it the way you're saying it.

I can't do direct quotes. My memory isn't electronic.

*edit* read your long topic. And saying it's a subrace had nothing to do with any information there. A small group of phoenix sages just lived in space and adapted. The end. Sub races don't have anything to do with the first "race". It's all about location and adaptation. That's all that's needed to have a subrace.

[Ghost]

No new requests here. c:

Character Name: Aquios
Nicknames: Aqui
Race: Water Dragon
Race Relations: Subspecies of Dragon
Character Appearance: http://th06.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/f/2012/249/b/4/b4277e67f5ebe604411c427f99d55d23-d5dskp6.png Disproportional ;A;
Character Age: ??
Gender: F
Place of Origin: Unknown
Personality: Aqui is a gentle soul and shows aggression if necessary. She rarely fights or attacks though.
Goals/Strengths: Playing with water
Thaumaturgy: Y, Water magic
Fears/Weaknesses: lightning ;_;
Relation to Other Characters: Yuki's partner, currently not with Yuki.
Sexual Orientation:Straight
Relationship Status: Single
Misc: I know Aquios is a male name. Who cares.

next "set" will be done after I make ref sheets for them c:

[Queen Bright]

..That was long before I actually thought out the Phoenix Sages and nor did I say it the way you're saying it.

I can't do direct quotes. My memory isn't electronic.

*edit* read your long topic. And saying it's a subrace had nothing to do with any information there. A small group of phoenix sages just lived in space and adapted. The end. Sub races don't have anything to do with the first "race". It's all about location and adaptation. That's all that's needed to have a subrace.

However reading it is required to actually have a Phoenix. If one can't read the stuff they know nothing about them and don't deserve them. But whatever, my personal approval given.

[Ghost]

..That was long before I actually thought out the Phoenix Sages and nor did I say it the way you're saying it.

I can't do direct quotes. My memory isn't electronic.

*edit* read your long topic. And saying it's a subrace had nothing to do with any information there. A small group of phoenix sages just lived in space and adapted. The end. Sub races don't have anything to do with the first "race". It's all about location and adaptation. That's all that's needed to have a subrace.

However reading it is required to actually have a Phoenix. If one can't read the stuff they know nothing about them and don't deserve them. But whatever, my personal approval given.

Okay then. I'll just unslice that request then :/ Uh. Thanks?

[K2]

Approved

[@Pokemon Master Red]

Approved!

[Ghost]

Rerequests here, no new characters. Next say may contain: Bone/Marrow, Cardonis, B7U-R4V3 and Yuki.

Character Name: Avalanche
Nicknames: Ava
Race: Lizirii
Race Relations: "cousin" to Avians
Character Appearance: Extra forelimbs retracted and Holograms hidden.
Character Age:??
Place of Origin: Acanthros
Factions Associated: ??
Personality: She's a cuddlebutt and really peaceful....and has weird obsessions with ice cream.
Goals/Strengths: EAT ALL THE ICE CREAM
Thaumaturgy: Y, Holograms
Fears/Weaknesses:Virus, Illness, Hologram defects(Avian/Lizirii)
Relation to Other Characters: N/A
Sexual Orientation: Straight
Relationship Status:Single(Heeeeeyyyy Sexy ladyyyy)
Religion: Believes in 'Spirits' living in the "mortal" realm.
Misc: She looks sexier now and not too complex c:

Character Name:Katrina
Nicknames:Kat
Race:Dryad
Race Relations: ??
Character Appearance: http://fc08.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2012/255/a/a/aa9d8b937bb283bd189cfffbfb62a2a6-d5egj0w.png
Character Age: 23
Place of Origin: ??
Factions Associated:??
Personality: She may be 23 in HUMAN years, but she acts like a five year old.
Starting Inventory: Plants. Plants everywhere
Goals/Strengths: PLANT ALL THE THINGS
Thaumaturgy: Y, "Earth" magic(involves plants)
Fears/Weaknesses:Fire ;;
Relation to Other Characters: She's been bugging Yuki for five years guys... FIVE YEARS.
Sexual Orientation:
Relationship Status:Single
Misc: Limbs and body can turn into branches or vines. Skin will scale over with bark. She talks to plants(which is why she looks insane/childish.) Plants with a color other than green tend to have poison.

Red:Fire/burn
Yellow: Paralysis
Blue: Freeze
Purple: Poison
Lavender: Sleep