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The Shard Part One
« on: April 08, 2013, 06:21:55 PM »
Character Name: John  Masters
Age: 105
Gender: Male
Race: Narrikian
Appearance: (Credit to Author)
Alliance: The Shard 
Personality (one paragraph minimum):
John Masters is a soldier with a kind heart and somewhat of a rebellious nature. While he did not follow orders well before he knows now that if he does not follow orders he might end up dead like Silas did. So he has vowed to follow the orders of Nicholas to the letter until the current crisis is averted. John also believes that the Vionix deserve to pay for the trouble they have caused.  John off duty is a different matter and is more rebellious. Alcohol exposure seems to leave him sober although unlocks him being a lady's man.  When off duty John tends to goof off and slack off a lot. This has earned him distrust from most of the team except Damien.

Inventory (Weapons, Equipment, Etc):
Pocket Dimensional Storage Unit: http://media.tumblr.com/tumblr_m041x5gGb11qamqi0.jpg (Credit to author) The pocket dimensional storage unit contains all of his stuff.
http://th01.deviantart.net/fs9/200H/i/2006/043/1/b/Shadowrun_Pistol_by_Knightwatch.jpg (Credit to Author) One of the Solid Shot weapons John now uses. This can hold up to 9 shots. The weapon is chrome and black to remind him of Silas Night the Minister of War of the Narrikians.
http://th06.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/i/2012/275/1/1/mrw_pp_12_pistol_by_jpgproduction-d5gk0ow.png   One of the solid shot weapons John now uses. This can hold up to twelve shots. This weapon is painted a neutral gray color.  It is to remind him of those who perished on Memorial.
Aurem Melee Weapons:
One is a short version of a Katana, but not a ninjato more of a Tanto.  http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2012/024/f/f/jinroh_catana_and_combat_knife_by_mukkelkatze-d4ngdkc.jpg (Credit to author)
The other is a combat knife. 
Multi Weapon Construct Apparatus
Various Explosive Devices 

Combat Level (Average of magic level and physical strength. If you don't know what to do here, don't fill it out and the staff will help you.):
- Reality Manipulation Level: 5
- Physical Strength: 4
Character's History (Minimum 3 Paragraphs):

John Masters grew up in the Narrikian armed services technically as his dad worked as one of the best demolitions experts in the business.  However there was a price for being the son of such a person. Assassins were hired by rival explosive experts and tried to kill him and his dad on a regular basis.  His dad won up until he had to drink some because of frequent cases of arm pain and the doctors not letting him have morphine.  This led to loss after loss of jobs against rival organizations and then finally he nearly died of the drinking. Unfortunately his dad did not quit.

This led to his dad dying and John being taken by his mother to some friends of his as agreed. John was put under the care of a secret association of soldiers in the military who were masters at the art of blowing things up.  So from age 7 on he grew up under the protective arms of the soldiers and for a while things were peaceful. Every once in a while they were called upon until the order of Thel came into effect. The society disbanded.

The fragments of the Society did not even communicate. For a time John started work as a mercenary and a bounty hunter doing jobs to earn some money. However when Memorial fell at the hands of the Vionix and the Zarethians he was not on the world. For you see he had taken another contract and one that would put him back in the services of the Narrikians. Silas needed someone who excelled at demolitions to help persuade the Elementals to sell their metals.
John operates as the resident explosive expert of the team and is very good at making bombs.




Character Name: Joshua Erosin 
Age: 207
Gender: Male
Race: Narrikian
Appearance: (Credit to Author)
Alliance: The Shard 
Personality (one paragraph minimum): Joshua Erosin is one of the most disciplined people you will ever meet. His levels of discipline made him one of the people chosen by Nicholas to take along. Joshua has been through a lot and seems cold and unemotional.  Joshua does have his flaws however. One of those flaws relates to  his training.

Joshua is ALWAYS pushing himself. When off of duty he will often speed time training and working out. Leisure does not exist for him. A man of habit Joshua sticks to a strict diet of healthy food. Joshua does not permit himself any wine or alcohol whatsoever as those could be a problem. Joshua also prefers to avoid the company of women when off of duty or men as he is more of a loner.
Inventory (Weapons, Equipment, Etc):
Pocket Dimensional Storage Unit: http://media.tumblr.com/tumblr_m041x5gGb11qamqi0.jpg (Credit to author) The pocket dimensional storage unit contains all of his stuff.
Twin Pistols
Dagger
Powered Katana 
 Multi Weapon Construct Apparatus Series V
Hover Board

Combat Level (Average of magic level and physical strength. If you don't know what to do here, don't fill it out and the staff will help you.):
- Reality Manipulation Level: 5
- Physical Strength: 4
Character's History (Minimum 3 Paragraphs):
Unlike John Masters Joshua grew up the kid of one of the most tactical minds in the service of the Narrikians.  From an early age he was put through grueling lessons and work by his dad to make and mold him into what his dad believed he needed to be.  Joshua was put through lessons in how to shoot a pistol at age six and this included a lot of different kinds of pistols.  This was because the family might be called upon to serve in a leadership position at some point in time. When he became 15 he entered the Narrikian Armed Services Academy (NASA) for short. 

 As he went through the trials and tests it seemed he excelled at most of the ones he went through.  The teachers were very fond of how fast he moved and got through the curriculum they taught him.  However a snag came up when he was put in a Foreign Languages class. Joshua did not have patience enough to learn another language. This reflected poorly on his record.

However Joshua tried his best to learn some words in other languages like Freeze or Halt. Joshua also enrolled in some of the advanced classes with some of the more powerful instructors. Weapons such as swords and varieties of them were learned by him. During his lessons he was told one day he might become a leader if he kept working on his skills.  So when he was assigned to the Elemora Project of course he accepted.  Now he operates as Tactical Commander of the Elmora Vassalization Mission.



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« Last Edit: April 17, 2013, 08:26:44 PM by Zero »

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Re: The Shard (WIP.)
« Reply #1 on: April 08, 2013, 06:38:15 PM »
Character Name: Damien Shade   
Age: 150
Gender: Male
Race: Narrikian
Appearance: [Credit to Author)
Alliance: The Shard 
Personality (one paragraph minimum): Damien is an undisciplined criminal computer hacker who was drafted by Nicholas. Stubborn and not very obedient at times, he is at the very least loyal. Damien does not like being pulled into a war but knows that sometimes you must sacrifice.   Damien has problems with authority and does not like to obey Nicholas. Outside of his work, Damien loves playing video games and hacking.   Damien is obsessed with computer technology parts and is very curious and innovative.
Inventory (Weapons, Equipment, Etc):
Pocket Dimensional Storage Unit: http://media.tumblr.com/tumblr_m041x5gGb11qamqi0.jpg (Credit to author) The pocket dimensional storage unit contains all of his stuff.
Laser Rifle
Solid Shot Rifle
Computerized Tools
Repair kit for Nicholas
Combat Level (Average of magic level and physical strength. If you don't know what to do here, don't fill it out and the staff will help you.): 2.5
- Reality Manipulation Level: 3
- Physical Strength: 2
Character's History (Minimum 3 Paragraphs):


Unlike the two soldiers John Masters and Joshua Erosin he did not grow up in a military background by any means. No his background is more difficult. For parts of Memorial did not have enough money and so the planet had areas it did not renovate as often. This was dubbed the Slums.  In the slums there was little food to go around and not enough money for the people there. The strong took what they wanted and the weak got very little to live on.  Damien from an early age was beaten and assaulted on a regular basis by some of the inhabitants of the slums as the cops would not come there.  Eventually when he got to be about 20 he left the Slums into the city of Liber.

When in Liber City on Memorial he studied computer programming as best he could. People looked down on someone from the slums and did not treat him right. The people were cruel to him, but not as cruel as the ones that had been dealing with him in the slums. Rather they shunned him and did their best to ignore him in that city. This led to him starting down the path of Computerized Crime in order to make a statement to the people that he would not be ignored.
One of his computer attacks was at New Bell Industries before any of the events recently occurred on Memorial.

This got the attention of Silas Night.  A squad was sent to investigate and captured Damien. Brought before Silas he was given two options. Life in prison or serving for 5 years as a member of the Shard defensive Forces were the choices. Damien wisely choice the path of Shard and so now works as a computer expert for the ones  on Elmora and as a general tech expert.
« Last Edit: April 09, 2013, 09:32:40 PM by Zero »

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Re: The Shard Part One
« Reply #2 on: April 08, 2013, 06:59:59 PM »
All of these need to meet the minimum requirements for personality and history. These are not characters, these are cutouts, more so then normal.
There is only so much pain that can be taken before the bonds and chains of sanity are forsaken
It is in these lonesome times that we reach towards the light sublime
And from that light we pull the resolution of our time
To begin the end and start anew

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Re: The Shard Part One
« Reply #3 on: April 08, 2013, 07:13:12 PM »
Edited all three to acceptable levels.
« Last Edit: April 08, 2013, 07:22:09 PM by Zero »

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Re: The Shard Part One
« Reply #4 on: April 08, 2013, 07:50:44 PM »
Approved!
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Re: The Shard Part One
« Reply #5 on: April 09, 2013, 08:52:23 PM »
Re-approved with the edits to get continuity back on track
Do you have what it takes to change your destiny, to defy FATE itself?
Let us test the limits of your abilities, and see if you have the WILL to do what no one else tries.

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Re: The Shard Part One
« Reply #6 on: April 09, 2013, 09:10:28 PM »
Denied. Again, they do not meet the minimum requirements for history. If you cannot make the histories three paragraphs you have not fleshed the characters out enough.
There is only so much pain that can be taken before the bonds and chains of sanity are forsaken
It is in these lonesome times that we reach towards the light sublime
And from that light we pull the resolution of our time
To begin the end and start anew

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Re: The Shard Part One
« Reply #7 on: April 09, 2013, 09:32:57 PM »
Edited.

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Re: The Shard Part One
« Reply #8 on: April 11, 2013, 06:16:22 PM »
Approved.