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The Ancient Protector : Jake Ateris
« on: April 28, 2010, 10:53:04 PM »
Name: Jake Aertis
Age: 1500 but appears to be in his 30s.
Race: Evolved Human
Alliance: Elders
Biography: A  Secret society on earth back in the days before it was taken over and destroyed. This society had waken up to realize the things around them, The Sages, the aliens, and all of the other battles taking place, that was oblivious to the outside world. Keeping the secrets to themselves, they tried to gather up all relics, and remnants of things around the earth, and anything else they could find of magic that earth would ever have possessed. Including the most mysterious of locations on Earth, the Wonders of the World, and others that were other myths. Bermuda Triangle, Stone Henge, the things Earth always wondered about.   Finally seeing these things for what they are, they studied for many years, keeping the secrets only into their society. And when at last, they had unlocked natural abilities. Going into the stages passed normal humans, and finding themselves centered with the earth, they finally released what ancients of earth knew before them.  The Indians, Wiccan and Pagan along with others believed in the power of their planet.

When they had reached this sense of knowing, and these stages. They became fearful. They believed with what was around them, this would enable them to protect themselves, yes. But it would also make them targets of the magic users. So to keep this from happening, they decided to limit this to only a few. These became the Prophets, or in the language they made up, Sanscript were known as the Children of the elders of the society that had first started it, were trained in all the secrets unlocked, and given the goal of protecting Earth. .....That's when Tragedy hit. When Earth was about to be destroyed, they were able to draw upon Mother Earth herself to sense the oncoming attack, and save the Prophet children. The Elders themselves, too old to escape, put all their hopes, and dreams of Earth into this group, and used all of their abilities to teleport the group away. But because they had never used a teleportation spell before, the oncoming magic of the attack that was striking earth, messed with the spell, and they were sent to another dimension.  Jake was one of those and the most powerful among the group.  Deciding that they would go their separate ways he himself took the spell book of Psalm with him after giving copies made by magic to the others. He also took the


 

Weapons: Scythe - A scythe that was wielded by the last user of Psalmic found it's way into his care. When he wields this he is faster and stronger than  he would be otherwise. It has glyphs on it of an unknown nature.

Sword
A regular steel sword forged from steel in the heart of a meteor.  It is imbued with Prophetic Magic so that it may never break unless it clashes with another similarly imbued weapon.

Cards
He has special cards that have random effects from healing or strengthening him to summoning beasts from another dimension to fight for him. Sometimes this backfires though.

Crystal Sphere
A sphere made out of a unique crystal that has the ability to amplify his powers when he needs the amplification the most. It is made out of what appears to be like a sapphire.




Equipment:
Book of the Prophets.  Magical Journey Book. Pocket dimension containing magical artifacts taken from Earth before it’s destruction and before the USSR became the dominating faction of the planet.
Magic Level: 5

Appearance: http://lasaro.deviantart.com/art/Eisaku-So-Lonely-12193439
« Last Edit: May 03, 2010, 09:36:18 PM by AceThunders »

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Re: The Ancient Protector : Jake Ateris
« Reply #1 on: April 29, 2010, 07:30:20 PM »
And what, may I ask, did the Relorians do, Hawkeye?
Seeing the world through a child's eyes is truly a unique experience. It helps you to retrieve that sense of awe, magic and wonder that you lost as you lost your innocence. Tell me, when was the last time that you thought of those childhood dreams? You know, the ones that you used to spend all your time wondering and fantasizing about? Have you forgotten them so easily? Have you forgotten what it felt like to see something for the first time, to see the magic in the mundane? Everyone says you should take the time to 'Stop and smell the roses'. But you should also take the time to look for the fairies, embrace the wind and enjoy the rain. Just once today, stop for a moment and look into that little piece of nature you pass everyday. Perhaps you may see something you did not notice before.

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Re: The Ancient Protector : Jake Ateris
« Reply #2 on: April 29, 2010, 07:33:20 PM »
Wiping out the StarClan.

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Re: The Ancient Protector : Jake Ateris
« Reply #3 on: April 29, 2010, 08:03:50 PM »
They did no such thing. The Sons of Plunder only took Dragon Moon. You surrendered the rest. The Starclanners fell to near extinction through their own actions following my rise. I would have thought you would remember your single biggest failing point in this roleplay. After all, that was the day when you let four people: Nisorin, Celestie, Alex, and Luna, take your most heavily populated and defended planet.

Please get your facts straight before attempting a foray into history.

Now, on to more relevant things. Ateris is another Mana user, correct? If so, this request is postponed pending the outcome of the Mana discussion in the Dusk Korr topic.
Seeing the world through a child's eyes is truly a unique experience. It helps you to retrieve that sense of awe, magic and wonder that you lost as you lost your innocence. Tell me, when was the last time that you thought of those childhood dreams? You know, the ones that you used to spend all your time wondering and fantasizing about? Have you forgotten them so easily? Have you forgotten what it felt like to see something for the first time, to see the magic in the mundane? Everyone says you should take the time to 'Stop and smell the roses'. But you should also take the time to look for the fairies, embrace the wind and enjoy the rain. Just once today, stop for a moment and look into that little piece of nature you pass everyday. Perhaps you may see something you did not notice before.

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Re: The Ancient Protector : Jake Ateris
« Reply #4 on: April 29, 2010, 09:44:42 PM »
He uses Zorcis.
« Last Edit: April 30, 2010, 10:41:47 PM by AceThunders »

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Re: The Ancient Protector : Jake Ateris
« Reply #5 on: May 01, 2010, 12:33:41 AM »
Zorcis would still be blocked by AM fields.
And, elaborate on these "heros." It says weapons of heros. Hero's where? Earth? Some other planet? Another dimension?

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Re: The Ancient Protector : Jake Ateris
« Reply #6 on: May 01, 2010, 12:43:16 AM »
Hmm.

Each Earth has heroes from various series.

Some of the weapons are Excalibur, Mojinir, Poseidon's Trident among other weapons of course.
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Re: The Ancient Protector : Jake Ateris
« Reply #7 on: May 01, 2010, 01:42:40 AM »
How very vague. Elaborate.
Seeing the world through a child's eyes is truly a unique experience. It helps you to retrieve that sense of awe, magic and wonder that you lost as you lost your innocence. Tell me, when was the last time that you thought of those childhood dreams? You know, the ones that you used to spend all your time wondering and fantasizing about? Have you forgotten them so easily? Have you forgotten what it felt like to see something for the first time, to see the magic in the mundane? Everyone says you should take the time to 'Stop and smell the roses'. But you should also take the time to look for the fairies, embrace the wind and enjoy the rain. Just once today, stop for a moment and look into that little piece of nature you pass everyday. Perhaps you may see something you did not notice before.

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Re: The Ancient Protector : Jake Ateris
« Reply #8 on: May 01, 2010, 01:48:15 AM »
Just did.

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Re: The Ancient Protector : Jake Ateris
« Reply #9 on: May 01, 2010, 01:51:13 AM »
So then you're ripping things? Denied.
Seeing the world through a child's eyes is truly a unique experience. It helps you to retrieve that sense of awe, magic and wonder that you lost as you lost your innocence. Tell me, when was the last time that you thought of those childhood dreams? You know, the ones that you used to spend all your time wondering and fantasizing about? Have you forgotten them so easily? Have you forgotten what it felt like to see something for the first time, to see the magic in the mundane? Everyone says you should take the time to 'Stop and smell the roses'. But you should also take the time to look for the fairies, embrace the wind and enjoy the rain. Just once today, stop for a moment and look into that little piece of nature you pass everyday. Perhaps you may see something you did not notice before.

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Re: The Ancient Protector : Jake Ateris
« Reply #10 on: May 01, 2010, 02:01:01 AM »
Well then I will edit him.

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Re: The Ancient Protector : Jake Ateris
« Reply #11 on: May 01, 2010, 02:46:01 PM »
..Seems like a marvel comic ripoff.

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Re: The Ancient Protector : Jake Ateris
« Reply #12 on: May 01, 2010, 06:14:27 PM »
All flaws in this character have been corrected.
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Re: The Ancient Protector : Jake Ateris
« Reply #13 on: May 02, 2010, 01:47:27 AM »
The way he uses Zorcis is that he draws in neutral 'flows' of energy and by using his memory he is able to produce a multitude of spells that most users of other types of magic can't even perform. However due to this he is unable to use other types of magic besides those he can replicate using Zorcis.

What spells can he use that users of other types of magic can't? And what do you mean by 'he is unable to use other types of magic besides those he can replicate using Zorcis?'
Seeing the world through a child's eyes is truly a unique experience. It helps you to retrieve that sense of awe, magic and wonder that you lost as you lost your innocence. Tell me, when was the last time that you thought of those childhood dreams? You know, the ones that you used to spend all your time wondering and fantasizing about? Have you forgotten them so easily? Have you forgotten what it felt like to see something for the first time, to see the magic in the mundane? Everyone says you should take the time to 'Stop and smell the roses'. But you should also take the time to look for the fairies, embrace the wind and enjoy the rain. Just once today, stop for a moment and look into that little piece of nature you pass everyday. Perhaps you may see something you did not notice before.

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Re: The Ancient Protector : Jake Ateris
« Reply #14 on: May 02, 2010, 07:34:34 AM »
Well for example one of the spells he is able to do that no one else is able to do or rather has ever tried to do is pull in a flow of energy, externalize said flow of energy as a force field to block a hit for him.

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Re: The Ancient Protector : Jake Ateris
« Reply #15 on: May 02, 2010, 11:33:14 AM »
That would be basic manipulation of energy.

ANYONE can do that.
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Re: The Ancient Protector : Jake Ateris
« Reply #16 on: May 02, 2010, 02:06:09 PM »
There are many others though.

He can take spells that other people have used using other magic besides Genesis or Revelation or unknown magics to him and using his memories of that particular spell form it from memory by pulling in neutral energy and changing it, he doesn't use up so much of his own magical energy.

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Re: The Ancient Protector : Jake Ateris
« Reply #17 on: May 03, 2010, 08:09:12 PM »
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Learning about ancient lore he learned that when you take the power of someone who has both Genesis and Phoenix at their disposal you release an evil so terrible that many have died just thinking about it. Learning from a Warrior Human that Aria had lost her gift for Genesis and Phoenix Power he decided that it was time to come out of hiding in order to counter that evil and all that would follow it.

That makes no sense, whatsoever.
You always do that. Specify other magics in your magic requests. What the heck? 1. Phoenix is not a magic, but innate abilities, for the last damn time. 2. Why the hell would Genesis and Phoenix being taken away, unleash something? I can see Genesis being taken away, doing so. But Phoenix added to it? They're two opposite sides of the coin, and two different types.... The only reason they're together, are the stupid wars, and the Sage Three having both.. Otherwise, they wouldn't have anything to do with one another.

Will you, THINK, before you put "stronger than, losing ____[magic type,]." And such? Because it just makes you look dumb, and not know what you're doing.
You say it's stronger than other magics besides Genesis, Phoenix, Revelation.... Uhhh there we go again. NEWS FLASH, no one but the four Keepers, from ancient times would have known about Revelation. Phoenix is INNATE, and wouldn't be compared. And Genesis is the only one that was well known, from what I know.

If you're going to insert more crap into the back story from "Ancient Times," get your history of the RP straight, and do it right. Don't say stronger than all other magic types besides "these." Just say, another form of magic, and then its properties and what it does. You make a fool of yourself by adding that crap. And we're kinda getting sick of it.

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Re: The Ancient Protector : Jake Ateris
« Reply #18 on: May 03, 2010, 09:36:41 PM »
There. The flaws have been corrected.

I am crediting Hikaru for help making this character.
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Re: The Ancient Protector : Jake Ateris
« Reply #19 on: May 03, 2010, 10:01:55 PM »
Help making him? Try you had her write the entire bio for you to edit to suit your needs, and you just copied and pasted it.


Due to this, the request is not approvable unless Hikaru posts her explicit permission.
Seeing the world through a child's eyes is truly a unique experience. It helps you to retrieve that sense of awe, magic and wonder that you lost as you lost your innocence. Tell me, when was the last time that you thought of those childhood dreams? You know, the ones that you used to spend all your time wondering and fantasizing about? Have you forgotten them so easily? Have you forgotten what it felt like to see something for the first time, to see the magic in the mundane? Everyone says you should take the time to 'Stop and smell the roses'. But you should also take the time to look for the fairies, embrace the wind and enjoy the rain. Just once today, stop for a moment and look into that little piece of nature you pass everyday. Perhaps you may see something you did not notice before.

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Re: The Ancient Protector : Jake Ateris
« Reply #20 on: May 03, 2010, 10:03:18 PM »
Moved to a different topic.